Review updates

Author: jashobhit

articles/operator-nexus/rel-notes-2404.2.md

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ ms.service: azure-operator-nexus
 
 Release date: April 29, 2024
 
-## Release Summary
+## Release summary
 
-Operator Nexus 2404.2 includes NC3.10 Management updates and NC3.8.7
+Operator Nexus 2404.2 includes NC3.10 Management updates and an NC3.8.7
 runtime patch. 
 
 ## Release highlights
@@ -23,41 +23,41 @@ runtime patch.
 
 * Bare Metal Machine (BMM)/BMC KeySets - Enhanced handling of Entra disconnected state.
 
-*  Prevent simultaneous disruptive BMM actions against K8s Control Plane nodes.
+*  Prevents simultaneous disruptive BMM actions against K8s Control Plane nodes.
 
-* Prevent user from adding or deleting a hybrid-compute machine  extension on the Cluster MRG.
+* Prevents user from adding or deleting a hybrid-compute machine  extension on the Cluster MRG.
 
-* Prevents user from creating and deleting arc-connected clusters and arc-connected machine from Nexus Kubernetes Service (NKS) MRG.
+* Prevents user from creating and deleting arc-connected clusters and the arc-connected machine from Nexus Kubernetes Service (NKS) MRG.
 
 ### Security enhancements
 
 * Credential rotation status information on the Bare-metal Machine (BMC or Console User) and Storage Appliance (Storage Admin) resources.
 
-* Harden NFC Infrastructure Proxy to allow outbound connections to known services.
+* Harden Network Fabric Controller (NFC) Infrastructure Proxy to allow outbound connections to known services.
 
 * HTTP/2 enhancements.
 
-* Remove Key Vault from Cluster Manager Managed Resource Group (MRG).
+* Remove Key Vault from Cluster Manager MRG.
 
 ### Observability enhancements 
 
 * (Preview) Appropriate status reflected for Rack Pause scenarios.
 
 * More metrics support: Calico data-plane failures, disk latency, etcd, hypervisor memory usage, pageswap, pod restart, NTP.
 
-*  Enable metrics to indicate connectivity of clusters to cluster manager. This feature enables users to create alert rules indicating disconnection.
+*  Enable users to create alert rules that track disconnection metrics for connectivity of clusters to the Cluster Manager.
 
 * Enable storage appliance logs.
 
-### Other Updates:
+### Other Updates
 
 * Enable high-availability for NFS Storage.
 
-* Purity 6.5.4 support
+* Support Purity 6.5.4.
 
-* PURE hardware upgrade from R3 to R4:  
+* PURE hardware upgrade from R3 to R4.
 
-* Release runtime patch release: To remediate new CVEs, include an updated OS image as a 3.8.7 runtime patch release.
+* Updated OS image as a 3.8.7 runtime patch release to remediate new Common Vulnerabilities Exposures (CVEs).
 
 ## Next steps