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articles/partner-solutions/pure-storage/manage.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Below the essentials, you can navigate to other details about your resource by s
 
 ### Create a Storage Pool
 
-To create a storage pool
+To create a storage pool:
 
 1. Select **Settings > Storage Pool** from the service menu.
 
@@ -45,6 +45,9 @@ To create a storage pool
     The *Create a Storage Pool* window appears.
     There are required fields that you need to fill out.
 
+    > [!NOTE]
+    > The storage pool will default to the same region as your Pure Storage resource.
+
 1. Enter the values for each required setting.
 
     | Setting                            | Action                                |
@@ -63,6 +66,11 @@ To create a storage pool
 
 ### Connect a Storage Pool to an Azure VMware resource
 
+Once you've created a storage pool, you can link the storage pool to an Azure VMware resource from the Azure portal.
+
+> [!IMPORTANT]
+> In order to connect your storage pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource, you must be an "Owner" or "RBACAdministrator" in your subscription.
+
 [!INCLUDE [manage](../includes/manage.md)]
 
 To connect a storage pool to an Azure VMware resource, select the **Connect Azure VMware Solution** button from the working pane's command bar.

articles/partner-solutions/pure-storage/overview.md

@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ You can [subscribe to Pure Storage Cloud](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com
 
 1. Choose `PureStorage.Block` from the options.
 
-    > [!NOTE]
-    > You can also choose Pure Storage as a resource provider with Azure CLI <br />
-    > ```az provider register --namespace 'PureStorage.Block'```
+    
+    You can also choose Pure Storage as a resource provider with Azure CLI <br />
+    ```az provider register --namespace 'PureStorage.Block'```
 
 1. Select the **Register** button.