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diff --git a/articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md b/articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
-title: Enterprise Tier in Azure Marketplace
-description: Learn what is the Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier offering from Azure Marketplace.
+title: Enterprise tier in Azure Marketplace
+description: Learn about the Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier offering available in Azure Marketplace.
 author: karlerickson
 ms.author: yuwzho
 ms.service: spring-apps
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 03/20/2023
+ms.date: 03/24/2023
 ms.custom: devx-track-java, devx-track-azurecli, event-tier1-build-2022, engagement-fy23, references_regions
 ---
 
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ ms.custom: devx-track-java, devx-track-azurecli, event-tier1-build-2022, engagem
 
 **This article applies to:** ❌ Basic/Standard tier ✔️ Enterprise tier
 
-This article describes the markteplace offer and license requirements for the VMWare Taznu components in the Enterprise tier in Azure Spring Apps.
+This article describes the Azure Marketplace offer and license requirements for the VMware Taznu components in the Enterprise tier in Azure Spring Apps.
 
 ## Enterprise tier and VMware Tanzu components
 
-The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility, and portability. Azure Spring Apps also provides the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime with 24/7 support in a strong partnership with VMware. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in the [Enterprise plan](./overview.md#enterprise-plan) section of [What is Azure Spring Apps](/azure/spring-apps/overview).
+The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility, and portability. Azure Spring Apps also provides the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime with 24/7 support in a strong partnership with VMware. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in the [Enterprise plan](./overview.md#enterprise-plan) section of [What is Azure Spring Apps?](/azure/spring-apps/overview)
 
 Because the Enterprise tier provides feature parity with the Standard tier, it provides a rich set of features that include app lifecycle management, monitoring, and troubleshooting.
 
@@ -30,42 +30,42 @@ The Enterprise tier provides the following managed VMware Tanzu components that
 - Application Configuration Service for Tanzu
 - Tanzu Service Registry
 - Spring Cloud Gateway for Tanzu
-- API portal for VMWare Tanzu
+- API portal for VMware Tanzu
 - Application Live View for VMware Tanzu
-- Application Accelerator for VMWare Tanzu
+- Application Accelerator for VMware Tanzu
 
-As the most advanced tier in Azure Spring Apps, a Microsoft provided first party Azure service, the Enterprise tier pricing is composed of two parts:
+As the most advanced tier in Azure Spring Apps, a Microsoft-provided, first-party Azure service, the Enterprise tier pricing is composed of the following two parts:
 
 - Infrastructure pricing to Microsoft, based on vCPU and memory usage of apps and managed Tanzu components.
 - Tanzu component licensing pricing to VMware, based on vCPU usage of apps.
 
 For more information about pricing, see [Azure Spring Apps pricing](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/spring-apps/).
 
-To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates a [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer). This offer represents a Tanzu component license and during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise, this offer is automatically purchased on behalf of customers.
+To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates an [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer in Azure Marketplace. This offer represents a Tanzu component license that is automatically purchased on behalf of customers during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier instance.
 
-Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third party offer purchasing with VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared to VMware, according to marketplace terms agreed upon prior to creating the service.
+Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third-party offer purchase from VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared with VMware. You agree to this data sharing when you agree to the marketplace terms upon creating the service instance.
 
-To purchase the Tanzu component license successfully, your billing account of your subscription must be included in the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account). Because of tax management restrictions from VMware in some countries, not all countries are supported.
+To purchase the Tanzu component license successfully, the billing account of your subscription must be included in one of the locations listed in the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account) section. Because of tax management restrictions from VMware in some countries, not all countries are supported.
 
-In comparison to Azure Spring Apps standard tier, there are no extra license fees in the Standard tier because the managed Spring components use the OSS config server and Eureka server. No other third party license fees are required.
+The extra license fees apply only to the Enterprise tier. In the Azure Spring Apps Standard tier, there are no extra license fees because the managed Spring components use the OSS config server and Eureka server. No other third-party license fees are required.
 
-On the [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) page, you can review the Tanzu component license pricing as shown in the following image.
+On the [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer page in Azure Marketplace, you can review the Tanzu component license pricing as shown in the following image.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer/enterprise-plan.png" alt-text="Azure Marketplace screenshot showing Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier VMware Tanzu offering." lightbox="media/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer/enterprise-plan.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer/enterprise-plan.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Azure Marketplace showing the Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier VMware Tanzu offering." lightbox="media/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer/enterprise-plan.png":::
 
-You can use the Azure portal and the Azure CLI to provision an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier service instance. You can also select **Subscribe** on the VMware marketplace offer to create the service instance, as Azure Marketplace redirects you to Azure Spring Apps creation page.
+You can use the Azure portal or the Azure CLI to provision an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier service instance. You can also select **Subscribe** on the Azure Marketplace offer page to create the service instance. Azure Marketplace redirects you to the Azure Spring Apps creation page.
 
 ## Requirements
 
-The following items must be understood and fulfilled for a successful implementation of your marketplace offer and licensing agreements.
+You must understand and fulfill the following requirements to successfully create an instance of the Azure Marketplace offer and accept the licensing agreements.
 
-- Your Azure subscription must be registered to the `Microsoft.SaaS` resource provider. For more information, see the [Register resource provider](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types#register-resource-provider) section of [Azure resource providers and types](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types).
+- Your Azure subscription must be registered to the `Microsoft.SaaS` resource provider. For more information, see the [Register resource provider](../azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types.md#register-resource-provider) section of [Azure resource providers and types](../azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types.md).
 
 - Your Azure subscription must have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
 
-- Your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer). For more information, see the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account).
+- Your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in the [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer in Azure Marketplace. For more information, see the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account) section.
 
-- Your region must be available. Choose an Azure region currently available. For more information, see [Available Regions for Enterprise Tier](./faq.md#in-which-regions-is-azure-spring-apps-enterprise-tier-available).
+- Your region must be available. Choose an Azure region currently available. For more information, see [In which regions is Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier available?](./faq.md#in-which-regions-is-azure-spring-apps-enterprise-tier-available) in the [Azure Spring Apps FAQ](faq.md).
 
 - Your organization must allow Azure Marketplace purchases. For more information, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
 
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ The following items must be understood and fulfilled for a successful implementa
 
 ## Supported geographic locations of billing account
 
-To successfully purchase the [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer), your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in the offer.
+To successfully purchase the [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer on Azure Marketplace, your Azure subscription must belong to a billing account in a supported geographic location defined in the offer.
 
 The following table lists each supported geographic location and its [ISO 3166 two-digit alpha code](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_ISO_3166_country_codes).
 
diff --git a/articles/spring-apps/how-to-use-accelerator.md b/articles/spring-apps/how-to-use-accelerator.md
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Application Accelerator for VMware Tanzu helps you bootstrap developing your app
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure subscription. If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) before you begin.
-- Understand and fulfill the [Requirements](how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md#requirements) section of [Enterprise Tier in Azure Marketplace](how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md).
+- Understand and fulfill the requirements listed in the [Requirements](how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md#requirements) section of [Enterprise Tier in Azure Marketplace](how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md).
 - [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli) with the Azure Spring Apps extension. Use the following command to remove previous versions and install the latest extension. If you previously installed the `spring-cloud` extension, uninstall it to avoid configuration and version mismatches.
 
   ```azurecli
