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articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/disaster-recovery.md

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 # Disaster recovery for Modeling and Simulation Workbench
 
-This article explains how to configure a disaster recovery environment for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench. Azure data center outages are rare but can last anywhere from a few minutes to hours. Data Center outages can cause disruption to the environments hosted in that data center. By following the steps detailed in this article, Azure Modeling and Simulation workbench customers can continue to operate in the cloud in the event of a data center outage for the primary region hosting your workbench instance.
+This article explains how to configure a disaster recovery environment for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench. Azure data center outages are rare but can last anywhere from a few minutes to hours. Data Center outages can cause disruption to the environments hosted in that data center. By following the steps in this article, Azure Modeling and Simulation workbench customers will continue to operate in the cloud in the event of a data center outage for the primary region hosting your workbench instance.
 
 Planning for disaster recovery involves identifying expected recovery point objectives (RPO) and recovery time objectives (RTO) for your instance. Based upon your risk-tolerance and expected RPO, follow these instructions at an interval appropriate for your business needs.
 
-A typical disaster recovery workflow starts with a failure of a critical service in your primary region. As the issue gets investigated, Azure will publish an expected time for the primary region to recover. If this timeframe is not acceptable for business continuity, and the problem does not impact your secondary region, you would start the process to fail over to the secondary region.
+A typical disaster recovery workflow starts with a failure of a critical service in your primary region. As the issue gets investigated, Azure publishes an expected time for the primary region to recover. If this timeframe is not acceptable for business continuity, and the problem does not impact your secondary region, you would start the process to fail over to the secondary region.
 
 ## Achieving business continuity for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
 To be prepared for a data center outage, you can have a Modeling and Simulation workbench instance provisioned in a secondary region. 
 
-These Workbench resources can be configured to match the resources which exist in the primary Azure Modeling and Simulation workbench instance. Users in the workbench instance environment can be provisioned ahead of time, or when you switch to the secondary region. Chamber and connector resources can be put in a stopped state post deployment to invoke idle billing meters when not being used actively. 
+These Workbench resources can be configured to match the resources that exist in the primary Azure Modeling and Simulation workbench instance. Users in the workbench instance environment can be provisioned ahead of time, or when you switch to the secondary region. Chamber and connector resources can be put in a stopped state post deployment to invoke idle billing meters when not being used actively. 
 
-Alternatively, if you do not want to have an Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench instance provisioned in the secondary region until an outage impacts your primary region, you can follow the provided procedures in the Quickstart but stop before actually creating the Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench instance in the secondary region. That step can be executed when you choose to create the workbench resources in the secondary region as a fail over.
+Alternatively, if you don't want to have an Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench instance provisioned in the secondary region until an outage impacts your primary region, follow the provided steps in the Quickstart, but stop before creating the Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench instance in the secondary region. That step can be executed when you choose to create the workbench resources in the secondary region as a failover.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Ensure that the services and features that your account uses are supported in the target secondary region.
 
 ## Verify Entra ID tenant
 
-The workspace source and destination can be in the same subscription. If source and destination for workbench will be different subscriptions, the subscriptions must exist within the same Entra ID tenant. Use Azure PowerShell to verify that both subscriptions have the same tenant ID.
+The workspace source and destination can be in the same subscription. If source and destination for workbench are different subscriptions, the subscriptions must exist within the same Entra ID tenant. Use Azure PowerShell to verify that both subscriptions have the same tenant ID.
 
 ```powershell
 Get-AzSubscription -SubscriptionId <your-source-subscription>.TenantId
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ You can now do your work in the new workbench instance created in the backup reg
 
 ## Cleanup
 
-Once your primary region is back up and operating, and you no longer need your backup instance, you can delete it.
+Once your primary region is up and operating, and you no longer need your backup instance, you can delete it.
 
 ## Related information
 

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/index.yml

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.reviewer: yochu
   ms.service: modeling-simulation-workbench
   ms.topic: index
-  ms.date: 01/01/2023
+  ms.date: 08/21/2024
 
 # linkListType: architecture | concept | deploy | download | get-started | how-to-guide | learn | overview | quickstart | reference | tutorial | video | whats-new
 
@@ -24,20 +24,6 @@ landingContent:
         links:
           - text: What is Modeling and Simulation Workbench?
             url: ./modeling-simulation-workbench-overview.md
-      - linkListType: concept
-        links:
-          - text: Workbench
-            url: ./concept-workbench.md
-          - text: User Personas
-            url: ./concept-user-personas.md
-          - text: Chambers
-            url: ./concept-chamber.md
-          - text: Connectors
-            url: ./concept-connector.md
-          - text: Data Pipeline
-            url: ./concept-data-pipeline.md
-          - text: License service
-            url: ./concept-license-service.md
   # Card: Get started
   - title: Get started
     linkLists:
@@ -59,8 +45,36 @@ landingContent:
             url: ./how-to-guide-download-data.md
           - text: Manage chamber storage
             url: ./how-to-guide-manage-storage.md
-#          - name: Disaster Recovery
-#            href: ./how-to-guide-disaster-recovery.md
+  # Card: Concepts
+  - title: Concepts
+    linkLists:
+      - linkListType: concept
+        links:
+          - text: Workbench
+            url: ./concept-workbench.md
+          - text: User personas
+            url: ./concept-user-personas.md
+          - text: Chamber
+            url: ./concept-chamber.md
+          - text: Connector
+            url: ./concept-connector.md
+          - text: Data pipeline
+            url: ./concept-data-pipeline.md
+          - text: License service
+            url: ./concept-license-service.md
+          - text: Shared storage
+            url: ./shared-storage.md
+          - text: Disaster recovery
+            url: ./disaster-recovery.md  
+  # Card: Resources
+  - title: Resources
+    linkLists:
+      - linkListType: reference
+        links:
+          - text: Troubleshoot
+            url: ./resources-troubleshoot.md
+          - text: Get support
+            url: ./resources-get-support.md
   # Card: Reference
 #  - title: Reference
 #    linkLists:

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/shared-storage.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Shared storage for Modeling and Simulation Workbench
-description: This article provides an overview of disaster recovery for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench workbench component.
+description: This article provides an overview of shared storage for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench workbench component.
 author: meaghanlewis
 ms.author: mosagie
 ms.service: modeling-simulation-workbench
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ ms.date: 08/21/2024
 
 # Shared storage for Modeling and Simulation Workbench
 
-To enable cross team and/or cross-organization collaboration in a secure manner within the workbench, a shared storage resource allows for selective data sharing between collaborating parties. It is an Azure NetApp Files based storage volume and is available to deploy in multiples of 4TB’s. Workbench owners can create multiple shared storage instances on demand and dynamically link them to existing chambers to facilitate secure collaboration. 
+To enable cross team and/or cross-organization collaboration in a secure manner within the workbench, a shared storage resource allows for selective data sharing between collaborating parties. It's an Azure NetApp Files based storage volume and is available to deploy in multiples of 4 TB’s. Workbench owners can create multiple shared storage instances on demand and dynamically link them to existing chambers to facilitate secure collaboration. 
 
-Users who are provisioned to a specific chamber can access all shared storage volumes linked to that chamber. Once users get de-provisioned from a chamber or that chamber gets deleted, they lose access to any linked shared storage volumes.  
+Users who are provisioned to a specific chamber can access all shared storage volumes linked to that chamber. Once users get deprovisioned from a chamber or that chamber gets deleted, they lose access to any linked shared storage volumes.  
 
 ## Key features of shared storage
 
-**Performance**: A Shared storage resource within the workbench is high-performance Azure NetApp Files based, targeting complex engineering workloads. It can be used to run simulations and is not limited to being used as a data transfer mechanism.  
+**Performance**: A shared storage resource within the workbench is high-performance Azure NetApp Files based, targeting complex engineering workloads. It isn't limited to being used as a data transfer mechanism. The resource can also be used to run simulations.
 
 **Scalability**: Users can adjust the storage capacity and performance tier according to their needs, just like chamber private storage.  
 

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/toc.yml

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       href: ./shared-storage.md
     - name: Business Continuity
       items:
-        - name: Disaster Recovery
+        - name: Disaster recovery
           href: ./disaster-recovery.md      
 - name: How-to guides
   items: