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Author: cephalin

articles/app-service/includes/tutorial-ai-slm/advantages.md

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 Hosting your own small language model (SLM) offers several advantages:
 
-- Full control over your data. Sensitive information is not exposed to third-party services, which is critical for industries with strict compliance requirements.
+- Full control over your data. Sensitive information isn't exposed to external services, which is critical for industries with strict compliance requirements.
 - Self-hosted models can be fine-tuned to meet specific use cases or domain-specific requirements. 
 - Minimized network latency and faster response times for a better user experience.
 - Full control over resource allocation, ensuring optimal performance for your application.