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Author: johndowns

articles/reliability/reliability-sustainability-data-solutions-fabric.md

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 This article describes reliability support in [Sustainability data solutions in Fabric](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/get-started-overview), covering intra-regional resiliency via [availability zones](#availability-zone-support) and [multi-region deployments](#multi-region-support).
 
-Sustainability data solutions in Fabric has multiple capabilities to help you to manage your sustainbility data scenarios. Most of the capabilities are covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md), with the exception of Microsoft Azure emissions insights. This guide focuses on emissions insights.
+Sustainability data solutions in Fabric has multiple capabilities to help you to manage your sustainability data scenarios. Most of the capabilities are covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md), with the exception of Microsoft Azure emissions insights. This guide focuses on emissions insights.
 
-[Microsoft Azure emissions insights](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/azure-emissions-insights-overview) enables you to to retrieve and access your Azure emissions data from Microsoft's Cloud for Sustainability services. Emission insights are loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance at regular intervals. This guide describes how the platform supports resiliency in the ingestion of data. After data is loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance, it's covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md).
+[Microsoft Azure emissions insights](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/azure-emissions-insights-overview) enables you to retrieve and access your Azure emissions data from Microsoft's Cloud for Sustainability services. Emission insights are loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance at regular intervals. This guide describes how the platform supports resiliency in the ingestion of data. After data is loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance, it's covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md).
 
 ## Transient faults
 
 [!INCLUDE[introduction to transient faults](includes/reliability-transient-faults-description-include.md)]
 
-In the event of a transient fault during ingestion of emissions data, you need to manually trigger the job again. You can monitor the ingestion job from the Microsoft Fabric monitoring hub.
+If a transient fault occurs during ingestion of emissions data, you need to manually trigger the job again. You can monitor the ingestion job from the Microsoft Fabric monitoring hub.
 
 ## Availability zone support
 
 Sustainability data solutions in Fabric is zone-redundant by default.
 
 ### Region support
 
-Zone redundancy is automatically enabled when you use [any region that supports availability zones](./availability-zones-service-support.md#azure-regions-with-availability-zone-support).
+Zone redundancy for the emissions data source is automatically enabled when you use [any region that supports availability zones](./availability-zones-service-support.md#azure-regions-with-availability-zone-support).
 
 ### Cost
 
-There is no additional charge for zone redundancy.
+There's no additional charge for zone redundancy.
 
 ### Zone-down experience