Merge pull request #270472 from vac0224/vc-email-throttling-tier

Reviewed and edited new email articles

Author: Stacyrch140

articles/communication-services/quickstarts/email/add-azure-managed-domains.md

@@ -13,28 +13,28 @@ ms.service: azure-communication-services
 
 # Quickstart: How to add Azure Managed Domains to Email Communication Service
 
-In this quick start, you learn about how to provision the Azure Managed domain in Azure Communication Services to send email.
+In this quick start, you learn how to provision the Azure Managed Domain to Email Communication Service in Azure Communication Services.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/dotnet/).
-- An Azure Email Communication Services Resource created and ready to provision the domains [Get started with Creating Email Communication Resource](../../quickstarts/email/create-email-communication-resource.md)
+- An Azure Communication Services Email Resource created and ready to add the domains. See [Get started with Creating Email Communication Resource](../../quickstarts/email/create-email-communication-resource.md).
 
-## Azure Managed Domains vs. Custom Domains
+## Azure Managed Domains compared to Custom Domains
 
-Before provisioning an Azure Managed Domain, review the following table to determine which domain type is most appropriate for your particular use case.
+Before provisioning an Azure Managed Domain, review the following table to decide which domain type best meets your needs.
 
 | | [Azure Managed Domains](./add-azure-managed-domains.md) | [Custom Domains](./add-custom-verified-domains.md) | 
 |---|---|---|
 |**Pros:** | - Setup is quick & easy<br/>- No domain verification required<br /> | - Emails are sent from your own domain |
-|**Cons:** | - Sender domain is not personalized and cannot be changed<br/>- Sender usernames cannot be personalized<br/>- Very limited sending volume<br />- User Engagement Tracking cannot be enabled <br /> | - Requires verification of domain records <br /> - Longer setup for verification |
+|**Cons:** | - Sender domain is not personalized and cannot be changed<br/>- Sender usernames can't be personalized<br/>- Very limited sending volume<br />- User Engagement Tracking can't be enabled <br /> | - Requires verification of domain records <br /> - Longer setup for verification |
 
 
 ## Provision Azure Managed Domain
 
-1. Go the overview page of the Email Communications Service resource that you created earlier.
-2. Create the Azure Managed Domain.   
-    - (Option 1) Click the **1-click add** button under **Add a free Azure subdomain**. Move to the next step.
+1. Open the Overview page of the Email Communications Service resource that you created in [Get started with Creating Email Communication Resource](../../quickstarts/email/create-email-communication-resource.md).
+2. Create an Azure Managed Domain using one of the following options.
+    - (Option 1) Click the **1-click add** button under **Add a free Azure subdomain**. Continue to **step 3**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/email-add-azure-domain.png" alt-text="Screenshot that highlights the adding a free Azure Managed Domain.":::
 
@@ -44,30 +44,32 @@ Before provisioning an Azure Managed Domain, review the following table to deter
 
     - Click **Add domain** on the upper navigation bar.
     - Select **Azure domain** from the dropdown.
+    
 3. Wait for the deployment to complete.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/email-add-azure-domain-progress.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Deployment Progress." lightbox="media/email-add-azure-domain-progress-expanded.png":::
 
-4. After domain creation is completed, you'll see a list view with the created domain.
+4. Once the domain is created, you see a list view with the new domain.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/email-add-azure-domain-created.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the list of provisioned email domains." lightbox="media/email-add-azure-domain-created-expanded.png":::
 
-5. Click the name of the provisioned domain, which navigates you to the overview page for the domain resource type.
+5. Click the name of the provisioned domain to open the overview page for the domain resource type.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/email-azure-domain-overview.png"  alt-text="Screenshot that shows Azure Managed Domain overview page." lightbox="media/email-azure-domain-overview-expanded.png":::
 
 ## Sender authentication for Azure Managed Domain
-Azure communication Services Email automatically configures the required email authentication protocols to set proper authentication for the email as detailed in [Email Authentication best practices](../../concepts/email/email-authentication-best-practice.md). 
+
+Azure Communication Services automatically configures the required email authentication protocols for the email as described in [Email Authentication best practices](../../concepts/email/email-authentication-best-practice.md). 
 
 **Your email domain is now ready to send emails.**
 
 ## Next steps
 
-* [Get started by connecting Email Communication Service with Azure Communication Service resource](../../quickstarts/email/connect-email-communication-resource.md)
+* [Quickstart: How to connect a verified email domain](../../quickstarts/email/connect-email-communication-resource.md)
 
 * [How to send an email using Azure Communication Service](../../quickstarts/email/send-email.md)
 
-The following documents may be interesting to you:
+## Related articles
 
-- Familiarize yourself with the [Email client library](../../concepts/email/sdk-features.md)
-- How to send emails with custom verified domains? [Add custom domains](../../quickstarts/email/add-custom-verified-domains.md)
+* Familiarize yourself with the [Email client library](../../concepts/email/sdk-features.md)
+* Learn how to send emails with custom verified domains in [Quickstart: How to add custom verified email domains](../../quickstarts/email/add-custom-verified-domains.md)