Merge pull request #288914 from ShawnJackson/tutorial-develop-for-linux-on-windows

[AQ]  edit pass: tutorial-develop-for-linux-on-windows

Author: ktoliver

articles/iot-edge/includes/iot-edge-clean-up-cloud-resources.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: include file
-description: include file
+title: Include file
+description: Include file
 services: iot-edge
 author: PatAltimore
 ms.service: azure-iot-edge
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@ ms.custom: include file
 ---
 
 
-### Delete Azure resources 
+### Delete Azure resources
 
 Deleting Azure resources and resource groups is irreversible. Make sure that you don't accidentally delete the wrong resource group or resources. If you created the IoT hub inside an existing resource group that has resources that you want to keep, delete only the IoT hub resource itself, not the resource group.
 
 To delete the resources:
 
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), and then select **Resource groups**.
 
-2. Select the name of the resource group that contains your IoT Edge test resources. 
+2. Select the name of the resource group that contains your IoT Edge test resources.
 
-3. Review the list of resources that are contained in your resource group. If you want to delete all of them, you can select **Delete resource group**. If you want to delete only some of them, you can click into each resource to delete them individually. 
+3. Review the list of resources that your resource group contains. If you want to delete all of them, you can select **Delete resource group**. If you want to delete only some of them, you can select each resource to delete them individually.

articles/iot-edge/includes/iot-edge-version-1.4.md

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  title: IoT Edge one supported version - 1.4 only
- description: include file
+ description: Include file
  services: iot-edge
  author: PatAltimore
  ms.service: azure-iot-edge
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@
 **Applies to:** ![IoT Edge 1.4 checkmark](./media/iot-edge-version/yes-icon.png) IoT Edge 1.4
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> IoT Edge 1.5 LTS and IoT Edge 1.4 are [supported releases](../support.md#releases). IoT Edge 1.4 LTS is end of life on November 12, 2024. If you are on an earlier release, see [Update IoT Edge](../how-to-update-iot-edge.md).
+> Azure IoT Edge 1.5 LTS and IoT Edge 1.4 are [supported releases](../support.md#releases). IoT Edge 1.4 LTS is reaching the end of service on November 12, 2024. If you're on an earlier release, see [Update IoT Edge](../how-to-update-iot-edge.md).