edit pass: site-recovery-deprecation-upgrade

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/site-recovery/encryption-feature-deprecation.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This article describes the deprecation details and the remediation action that y
 
 ## Deprecation information
 
-The Site Recovery data encryption feature was available for customers who wanted to protect replicated data for Hyper-V VMs against security threats. This feature was be deprecated on *April 30, 2022*. It was replaced by the [encryption at rest](https://azure.microsoft.com/blog/azure-site-recovery-encryption-at-rest/) feature, which uses [service-side encryption](../storage/common/storage-service-encryption.md) (SSE).
+The Site Recovery data encryption feature was available for customers who wanted to protect replicated data for Hyper-V VMs against security threats. This feature was deprecated on *April 30, 2022*. It was replaced by the [encryption at rest](https://azure.microsoft.com/blog/azure-site-recovery-encryption-at-rest/) feature, which uses [service-side encryption](../storage/common/storage-service-encryption.md) (SSE).
 
 With SSE, data is encrypted before persisting to storage and decrypted on retrieval. Upon failover to Azure, your VMs will run from the encrypted storage accounts to help improve recovery time objective (RTO).
 

articles/site-recovery/upgrade-2012R2-to-2016.md

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 ## Upgrade Windows Server 2012 R2 hosts that a standalone Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 server manages
 
-Before you upgrade your Windows Sever 2012 R2 hosts, you need to upgrade Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 to Virtual Machine Manager 2016. Use the following steps.
+Before you upgrade your Windows Server 2012 R2 hosts, you need to upgrade Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 to Virtual Machine Manager 2016. Use the following steps.
 
 ### Upgrade standalone Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 to Virtual Machine Manager 2016
 
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Before you upgrade your Windows Sever 2012 R2 hosts, you need to upgrade Virtual
 
 ## Upgrade Windows Server 2012 R2 hosts that a highly available Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 server manages
 
-Before you upgrade your Windows Sever 2012 R2 hosts, you need to upgrade Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 to Virtual Machine Manager 2016. The following modes of upgrade are supported while you're upgrading Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 servers configured with:
+Before you upgrade your Windows Server 2012 R2 hosts, you need to upgrade Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 to Virtual Machine Manager 2016. The following modes of upgrade are supported while you're upgrading Virtual Machine Manager 2012 R2 servers configured with:
 
 - Site Recovery mixed mode with no additional Virtual Machine Manager servers.
 - Site Recovery mixed mode with additional Virtual Machine Manager servers.