Edits based on feedback

Author: Keiji Kanazawa

articles/ai-services/openai/concepts/model-retirements.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ titleSuffix: Azure OpenAI
 description: Learn about the model deprecations and retirements in Azure OpenAI.
 ms.service: azure-ai-openai
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 03/01/2024
+ms.date: 03/13/2024
 ms.custom: 
 manager: nitinme
 author: mrbullwinkle
@@ -25,16 +25,26 @@ Azure OpenAI Service models are continually refreshed with newer and more capabl
 * Deprecation
 	* When a model is deprecated, it's no longer available for new customers. It continues to be available for use by customers with existing deployments until the model is retired.
 
-### Preretirement Notification
+## Preretirement notification
 
-Azure OpenAI notifies subscription {role} of active Azure OpenAI Service deployments for models with upcoming retirements. We notify customers of upcoming retirements as follows for each deployment:
+Azure OpenAI notifies customers of active Azure OpenAI Service deployments for models with upcoming retirements. We notify customers of upcoming retirements as follows for each deployment:
 
 * At least 60 days before retirement 
 * At least 30 days before retirement 
 * At retirement
 
 Retirements are done on a rolling basis, region by region.
 
+### Who is notified of upcoming retirements
+
+Azure OpenAI notifies those who are members of the following roles for each subbscription with a deployment of a model with an upcoming retirement.
+
+* Owner
+* Contributor
+* Reader
+* Monitoring contributor
+* Monitoring reader
+
 ## How to get ready for model retirements and version upgrades
 
 To prepare for model retirements and version upgrades, we recommend that customers evaluate their applications with the new models and versions and evaluate their behavior. We also recommend that customers update their applications to use the new models and versions before the retirement date.
@@ -47,10 +57,10 @@ These models are currently available for use in Azure OpenAI Service.
 
 | Model | Version | Retirement Date |
 | ---- | ---- | ---- |
-| `gpt-3.5-turbo` | 0301 | No earlier than June 13, 2024 |
-| `gpt-3.5-turbo`<br>`gpt-3.turbo-16k` | 0613 | No earlier than July 13, 2024 |
-| `gpt-3.5-turbo` | 1106 | No earlier than Nov 17, 2025 |
-| `gpt-3.5-turbo` | 0125 | No earlier than Feb 22, 2025 |
+| `gpt-35-turbo` | 0301 | No earlier than June 13, 2024 |
+| `gpt-35-turbo`<br>`gpt-35-turbo-16k` | 0613 | No earlier than July 13, 2024 |
+| `gpt-35-turbo` | 1106 | No earlier than Nov 17, 2025 |
+| `gpt-35-turbo` | 0125 | No earlier than Feb 22, 2025 |
 | `gpt-4`<br>`gpt-4-32k` | 0314 | No earlier than July 13, 2024 |
 | `gpt-4`<br>`gpt-4-32k` | 0613 | No earlier than Sep 30, 2024 |
 | `gpt-4` | 1106-preview | To be upgraded to a stable version with date to be announced |
@@ -101,6 +111,10 @@ If you're an existing customer looking for information about these models, see [
 
 ## Retirement and Deprecation History
 
+### March 13, 2024
+
+We published this document to provide information about the current models, deprecated models, and upcoming retirements.
+
 ### February 23, 2024
 
 We announced the upcoming in-place upgrade of `gpt-4` version `1106-preview` to `0125-preview` to start no earlier than March 8, 2024.