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Author: flang-msft

articles/partner-solutions/palo-alto/palo-alto-create.md

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 ms.topic: quickstart
-ms.date: 04/26/2023
 
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@@ -14,6 +13,8 @@ In this quickstart, you use the Azure Marketplace to find and create an instance
 
 ## Create a new Cloud NGFW by Palo Alto Networks resource
 
+In this section, you see how create a Palo Alto Networks resource.
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 ### Basics
 
 1. In the Azure portal, create a Cloud NGFW by Palo Alto Networks resource using the Marketplace. Use search to find _Cloud NGFW by Palo Alto Networks_. Then, select **Subscribe**. Then, select **Create**.
@@ -95,7 +96,7 @@ Next, you must accept the Terms of Use for the new Palo Alto Networks resource.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/palo-alto-create/palo-alto-review-create.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Review and Create resource tab.":::
 
-1. When you've reviewed all the information, select **Create**. Azure now deploys the Cloud NGFW by Palo Alto Networks.
+1. After reviewing all the information, select **Create**. Azure now deploys the Cloud NGFW by Palo Alto Networks.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/palo-alto-create/palo-alto-deploying.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing Palo Alto Networks deployment in process.":::