Acrolinx updates

Author: AlizaBernstein

articles/defender-for-cloud/upcoming-changes.md

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 title: Important upcoming changes
 description: Upcoming changes to Microsoft Defender for Cloud that you might need to be aware of and for which you might need to plan 
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 12/27/2023
+ms.date: 01/03/2024
 ---
 
 # Important upcoming changes to Microsoft Defender for Cloud
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ If you're looking for the latest release notes, you can find them in the [What's
 
 | Planned change | Announcement date | Estimated date for change |
 |--|--|--|
-| [Upcoming change for the Defender for Cloud’s multi-cloud network requirements](#upcoming-change-for-the-defender-for-clouds-multi-cloud-network-requirements) | January 1, 2024 | May 2024 |
+| [Upcoming change for the Defender for Cloud’s multi-cloud network requirements](#upcoming-change-for-the-defender-for-clouds-multi-cloud-network-requirements) | January 3, 2024 | May 2024 |
 | [Deprecation and severity changes to security alerts](#deprecation-and-severity-changes-to-security-alerts) | December 27, 2023 | January 2024 |
 | [Deprecation of two DevOps security recommendations](#deprecation-of-two-devops-security-recommendations) | November 30, 2023 | January 2024 |
 | [Consolidation of Defender for Cloud's Service Level 2 names](#consolidation-of-defender-for-clouds-service-level-2-names) | November 1, 2023 | December 2023 |
@@ -37,15 +37,15 @@ If you're looking for the latest release notes, you can find them in the [What's
 | [Deprecating two security incidents](#deprecating-two-security-incidents) |  | November 2023 |
 | [Defender for Cloud plan and strategy for the Log Analytics agent deprecation](#defender-for-cloud-plan-and-strategy-for-the-log-analytics-agent-deprecation) |  | August 2024 |
 
-## Upcoming change for the Defender for Cloud’s multi-cloud network requirements
+## Upcoming change for the Defender for Cloud’s multicloud network requirements
 
-**Announcement date: January 1, 2024**
+**Announcement date: January 3, 2024**
 
 **Estimated date for change: May 2024** 
 
-Beginning May 2024, we will be retiring the old IP addresses associated with our multi-cloud discovery services to accommodate improvements and ensure a more secure and efficient experience for all users.
+Beginning May 2024, we'll be retiring the old IP addresses associated with our multicloud discovery services to accommodate improvements and ensure a more secure and efficient experience for all users.
 
-To ensure uninterrupted access to our services, you should update your IP allowlist with the new ranges provided below. Please make the necessary adjustments in your firewall settings, security groups, or any other configurations that may be applicable to your environment.
+To ensure uninterrupted access to our services, you should update your IP allowlist with the new ranges provided in the following sections. You should make the necessary adjustments in your firewall settings, security groups, or any other configurations that may be applicable to your environment.
 
 The list is applicable to all plans and sufficient for full capability of the CSPM foundational (free) offering.
 
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 **Estimated date for change: January 2024** 
 
-The following security alerts are set for deprecation or are set for update to the **informational** severity level .
+The following security alerts are set for deprecation or are set for update to the **informational** severity level.
 
 - The following container security alerts are set for deprecation: