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articles/lighthouse/how-to/publish-managed-services-offers.md

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 ## The customer onboarding process
 
-When a customer adds your offer, they will be able to [delegate one or more specific subscriptions or resource groups](view-manage-service-providers.md#delegate-resources) which will then be onboarded for Azure delegated resource management. If a customer has accepted an offer but has not yet delegated any resources, they'll see a note at the top of the **Provider offers** section of the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal.
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-After the customer delegates a subscription (or one or more resource groups within a subscription), the **Microsoft.ManagedServices** resource provider will be registered for that subscription. Note that currently, you can’t delegate a subscription (or resource group within a subscription) if the subscription uses Azure Databricks. Similarly, if a subscription has been registered for onboarding with the Microsoft.ManagedServices resource provider, you won’t be able to create a Databricks workspace for that subscription at this time.
+After a customer adds your offer, they'll be able to [delegate one or more specific subscriptions or resource groups](view-manage-service-providers.md#delegate-resources) which will then be onboarded for Azure delegated resource management. If a customer has accepted an offer but has not yet delegated any resources, they'll see a note at the top of the **Provider offers** section of the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal.
 
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 > Delegation must be done by a non-guest account in the customer’s tenant which has the [Owner built-in role](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owner) for the subscription being onboarded (or which contains the resource groups that are being onboarded). To see all users who can delegate the subscription, a user in the customer's tenant can select the subscription in the Azure portal, open **Access control (IAM)**, and [view all users with the Owner role](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/role-assignments-portal#view-roles-and-permissions).
 
+Note that currently, subscriptions (or resource groups within a subscription) can't be delegated if the subscription uses Azure Databricks. Similarly, if a subscription (or resource groups within a subscription) has been delegated, it currently will not be possible to create Databricks workspaces in that subscription.
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+After the customer delegates a subscription (or one or more resource groups within a subscription), the **Microsoft.ManagedServices** resource provider will be registered for that subscription, and users in your tenant will be able to access the delegated resources according to the authorizations in your offer. 
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 ## Next steps
 
 - Learn about [cross-tenant management experiences](../concepts/cross-tenant-management-experience.md).