acrolinx fixes

Author: Ryan Willis

articles/azure-arc/servers/plan-evaluate-on-azure-virtual-machine.md

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-title: How to evaluate Azure Arc-enabled servers with an Azure VM
+title: How to evaluate Azure Arc-enabled servers with an Azure virtual machine
 description: Learn how to evaluate Azure Arc-enabled servers using an Azure virtual machine.
 ms.date: 10/01/2021
 ms.topic: conceptual
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 > [!CAUTION]
 > This article references CentOS, a Linux distribution that is nearing End Of Life (EOL) status. Please consider your use and planning accordingly.
 
-Azure Arc-enabled servers is designed to help you connect servers running on-premises or in other clouds to Azure. Normally, you would not use Azure Arc-enabled servers on an Azure virtual machine because all the same capabilities are natively available for these VMs, including a representation of the VM in Azure Resource Manager, VM extensions, managed identities, and Azure Policy. If you attempt to install Azure Arc-enabled servers on an Azure VM, you'll receive an error message stating that it is unsupported and the agent installation will be canceled.
+Azure Arc-enabled servers is designed to help you connect servers running on-premises or in other clouds to Azure. Normally, you wouldn't connect an Azure virtual machine to Azure Arc because all the same capabilities are natively available for these VMs. Azure VMs already have a representation in Azure Resource Manager, VM extensions, managed identities, and Azure Policy. If you attempt to install Azure Arc-enabled servers on an Azure VM, you'll receive an error message stating that it is unsupported.
 
-While you cannot install Azure Arc-enabled servers on an Azure VM for production scenarios, it is possible to configure Azure Arc-enabled servers to run on an Azure VM for *evaluation and testing purposes only*. This article will help you set up an Azure VM before you can enable Azure Arc-enabled servers on it.
+While you cannot install Azure Arc-enabled servers on an Azure VM for production scenarios, it's possible to configure Azure Arc-enabled servers to run on an Azure VM for *evaluation and testing purposes only*. This article walks you through how to prepare an Azure VM to look like an on-premises server for testing purposes.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > The steps in this article are intended for virtual machines hosted in the Azure cloud. Azure Arc-enabled servers is not supported on virtual machines running on Azure Stack Hub or Azure Stack Edge.
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 * Your account is assigned to the [Virtual Machine Contributor](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#virtual-machine-contributor) role.
 * The Azure virtual machine is running an [operating system supported by Azure Arc-enabled servers](prerequisites.md#supported-operating-systems). If you don't have an Azure VM, you can deploy a [simple Windows VM](https://portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.Template/uri/https%3a%2f%2fraw.githubusercontent.com%2fAzure%2fazure-quickstart-templates%2fmaster%2fquickstarts%2fmicrosoft.compute%2fvm-simple-windows%2fazuredeploy.json) or a [simple Ubuntu Linux 18.04 LTS VM](https://portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.Template/uri/https%3a%2f%2fraw.githubusercontent.com%2fAzure%2fazure-quickstart-templates%2fmaster%2fquickstarts%2fmicrosoft.compute%2fvm-simple-windows%2fazuredeploy.json).
-* Your Azure VM can communicate outbound to download the Azure Connected Machine agent package for Windows from the [Microsoft Download Center](https://aka.ms/AzureConnectedMachineAgent), and Linux from the Microsoft [package repository](https://packages.microsoft.com/). If outbound connectivity to the Internet is restricted following your IT security policy, you will need to download the agent package manually and copy it to a folder on the Azure VM.
+* Your Azure VM can communicate outbound to download the Azure Connected Machine agent package for Windows from the [Microsoft Download Center](https://aka.ms/AzureConnectedMachineAgent), and Linux from the Microsoft [package repository](https://packages.microsoft.com/). If outbound connectivity to the Internet is restricted following your IT security policy, you can download the agent package manually and copy it to a folder on the Azure VM.
 * An account with elevated (that is, an administrator or as root) privileges on the VM, and RDP or SSH access to the VM.
 * To register and manage the Azure VM with Azure Arc-enabled servers, you are a member of the [Azure Connected Machine Resource Administrator](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#azure-connected-machine-resource-administrator) or [Contributor](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#contributor) role in the resource group.
 
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 3. Create a security rule to deny access to the Azure Instance Metadata Service (IMDS). IMDS is a REST API that applications can call to get information about the VM's representation in Azure, including its resource ID and location. IMDS also provides access to any managed identities assigned to the machine. Azure Arc-enabled servers provides its own IMDS implementation and returns information about the Azure Arc representation of the VM. To avoid situations where both IMDS endpoints are available and apps have to choose between the two, you block access to the Azure VM IMDS so that the Azure Arc-enabled server IMDS implementation is the only one available.
 
-After you've made these changes, your Azure VM behaves like any machine or server outside of Azure and is at the necessary starting point to install and evaluate Azure Arc-enabled servers.
+After you make these changes, your Azure VM behaves like any machine or server outside of Azure and is at the necessary starting point to install and evaluate Azure Arc-enabled servers.
 
 When Azure Arc-enabled servers is configured on the VM, you see two representations of it in Azure. One is the Azure VM resource, with a `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines` resource type, and the other is an Azure Arc resource, with a `Microsoft.HybridCompute/machines` resource type. As a result of preventing management of the guest operating system from the shared physical host server, the best way to think about the two resources is the Azure VM resource is the virtual hardware for your VM, and let's you control the power state and view information about its SKU, network, and storage configurations. The Azure Arc resource manages the guest operating system in that VM, and can be used to install extensions, view compliance data for Azure Policy, and complete any other supported task by Azure Arc-enabled servers.
 
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 2. Disable the Azure VM Guest Agent.
 
-   To disable the Azure VM Guest Agent, you'll need to connect to your VM using Remote Desktop Connection (Windows) or SSH (Linux). Once connected, run the following commands to disable the guest agent.
+   To disable the Azure VM Guest Agent, connect to your VM using Remote Desktop Connection (Windows) or SSH (Linux) and run the following commands to disable the guest agent.
 
    For Windows, run the following PowerShell commands:
 
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    New-NetFirewallRule -Name BlockAzureIMDS -DisplayName "Block access to Azure IMDS" -Enabled True -Profile Any -Direction Outbound -Action Block -RemoteAddress 169.254.169.254
    ```
 
-   For Linux, consult your distribution's documentation for the best way to block outbound access to `169.254.169.254/32` over TCP port 80. Normally you'll block outbound access with the built-in firewall, but you can also temporarily block it with **iptables** or **nftables**.
+   For Linux, consult your distribution's documentation for the best way to block outbound access to `169.254.169.254/32` over TCP port 80. Normally you'd block outbound access with the built-in firewall, but you can also temporarily block it with **iptables** or **nftables**.
 
    If your Azure VM is running Ubuntu, perform the following steps to configure its uncomplicated firewall (UFW):
 
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    The VM is now ready for you to begin evaluating Azure Arc-enabled servers. To install and configure the Azure Connected Machine agent, see [Connect hybrid machines using the Azure portal](onboard-portal.md) and follow the steps to generate an installation script and install using the scripted method.
 
    > [!NOTE]
-   > If outbound connectivity to the internet is restricted from your Azure VM, you'll need to download the agent package manually. Copy the agent package to the Azure VM, and modify the Azure Arc-enabled servers installation script to reference the source folder.
+   > If outbound connectivity to the internet is restricted from your Azure VM, you can download the agent package manually. Copy the agent package to the Azure VM, and modify the Azure Arc-enabled servers installation script to reference the source folder.
 
 If you missed one of the steps, the installation script detects it is running on an Azure VM and terminates with an error. Verify you've completed steps 1-3, and then rerun the script.