Acrolinx validation.

Author: stevenmatthew

includes/storage-import-export-ship-drives.md

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 FedEx, UPS, or DHL can be used to ship the package to Azure datacenter. If you want to use a carrier other than FedEx/DHL, contact Azure Data Box Operations team at `[email protected]`
 
-* Provide a valid FedEx, UPS, or DHL carrier account number that Microsoft will use to ship the drives back.
+* Provide a valid FedEx, UPS, or DHL carrier account number for use by Microsoft to return the drives.
   * A FedEx, UPS, or DHL account number is required for shipping drives back from the US and Europe locations.
     * A DHL account number is preferred for shipping drives back from Asia and Australia locations.
-    * If you do not have an account number, create a [FedEx](https://www.fedex.com/us/oadr/) or [DHL](http://www.dhl.com/) carrier account.
+    * If you don't have an account number, create a [FedEx](https://www.fedex.com/us/oadr/) or [DHL](http://www.dhl.com/) carrier account.
 * When shipping your packages, you must follow the [Microsoft Azure Service Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/services-terms/).
 * Properly package your disks to avoid potential damage and delays in processing. Follow these recommended best practices:
     * Wrap the disk drives securely with protective bubble wrap. Bubble wrap acts as a shock absorber and protects the drive from impact during transit. Before shipping, ensure that the entire drive is thoroughly covered and cushioned.
-    * Place the wrapped drives within a foam shipper. The foam shipper provides additional protection and keeps the drive securely in place during transit.
+    * Place the wrapped drives within a foam shipper. The foam shipper provides extra protection and keeps the drive securely in place during transit.