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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/deploy-side-by-side.md b/articles/sentinel/deploy-side-by-side.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 07/24/2024
 ms.author: cwatson
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a SOC manager, I want to deploy a cloud-based SIEM alongside my existing on-premises SIEM so that I can transition to a more flexible and cost-effective security solution without disrupting current operations.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a SOC manager, I want to deploy Microsoft Sentinel alongside my existing, on-premises SIEM so that I can transition to a more flexible and cost-effective security solution without disrupting current operations.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/enable-monitoring.md b/articles/sentinel/enable-monitoring.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 08/01/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations analyst, I want to enable and configure auditing and health monitoring for my Microsoft Sentinel resources so that I can ensure the integrity and health of my security infrastructure.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations analyst, I want to configure auditing and health monitoring for my Microsoft Sentinel resources so that I can ensure the integrity and health of my security infrastructure.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/microsoft-purview-record-types-activities.md b/articles/sentinel/microsoft-purview-record-types-activities.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: reference
 ms.date: 01/02/2023
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the supported audit log record types and activities for the Information Protection connector so that I can effectively monitor and respond to data sensitivity changes in my organization.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the supported audit log record types and activities for the Microsoft Purview Information Protection connector so that I can effectively monitor and respond to data sensitivity changes in my organization.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/migration-arcsight-detection-rules.md b/articles/sentinel/migration-arcsight-detection-rules.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 05/03/2022
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations center (SOC) analyst, I want to migrate ArcSight detection rules to a cloud-based SIEM platform so that I can leverage advanced analytics and machine learning for more effective threat detection and response.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations center (SOC) analyst, I want to migrate ArcSight detection rules to Microsoft Sentinel so that I can leverage advanced analytics and machine learning for more effective threat detection and response.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/migration-security-operations-center-processes.md b/articles/sentinel/migration-security-operations-center-processes.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 05/03/2022
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a SOC manager, I want to update our SOC processes and analyst workflows for Microsoft Sentinel so that we can effectively manage and respond to cybersecurity incidents using the new toolsets and features.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations manager, I want to update our SOC processes and analyst workflows for Microsoft Sentinel so that we can effectively manage and respond to cybersecurity incidents using the new toolsets and features.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/migration-splunk-historical-data.md b/articles/sentinel/migration-splunk-historical-data.md
@@ -6,10 +6,9 @@ author: cwatson-cat
 ms.author: cwatson
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 03/11/2024
-#customer intent: As a SOC administrator, I want to migrate historical data from Splunk so I have continuity when I migrate to Microsoft Sentinel.
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a data engineer, I want to export historical data from Splunk so that I can migrate it to a new platform for analysis and storage.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations admin, I want to export historical data from Splunk so that I can migrate it to Microsoft Sentinel for analysis and storage.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/migration.md b/articles/sentinel/migration.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 03/11/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a SOC team leader, I want to migrate from a legacy SIEM to a cloud-native SIEM solution so that I can improve threat detection, automate responses, and ensure comprehensive coverage of both on-premises and cloud assets.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a SOC team leader, I want to migrate from a legacy SIEM to Microsoft Sentinel so that I can improve threat detection, automate responses, and ensure comprehensive coverage of both on-premises and cloud assets.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/monitor-sap-system-health.md b/articles/sentinel/monitor-sap-system-health.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.date: 11/09/2022
 ms.service: microsoft-sentinel
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As an SAP administrator, I want to monitor the health and performance of my SAP systems using a cloud-based solution so that I can ensure their proper functioning and quickly address any issues.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As an SAP administrator, I want to monitor the health and performance of my SAP systems using Microsoft Sentinel so that I can ensure their proper functioning and quickly address any issues.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/normalization-about-schemas.md b/articles/sentinel/normalization-about-schemas.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 11/09/2021
 ms.author: ofshezaf
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand and utilize ASIM schemas so that I can normalize and query security data consistently across different sources.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to use ASIM schemas so that I can normalize and query security data consistently across different sources.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/normalization-content.md b/articles/sentinel/normalization-content.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 11/09/2021
 ms.author: ofshezaf
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to utilize ASIM-supported content in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can enhance threat detection and response capabilities using normalized security data.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to use ASIM-supported content in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can enhance threat detection and response capabilities using normalized security data.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/normalization-parsers-list.md b/articles/sentinel/normalization-parsers-list.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 05/02/2022
 ms.author: ofshezaf
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to deploy and utilize ASIM parsers so that I can normalize and analyze security event data from various sources effectively.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to deploy and use ASIM parsers so that I can normalize and analyze security event data from various sources effectively.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/normalization-schema-user-management.md b/articles/sentinel/normalization-schema-user-management.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 02/06/2022
 ms.author: ofshezaf
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the user management normalization schema so that I can effectively monitor and analyze user management activities within my organization.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the User Management normalization schema so that I can effectively monitor and analyze user management activities within my organization.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/normalization-schema-v1.md b/articles/sentinel/normalization-schema-v1.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 11/09/2021
 ms.author: ofshezaf
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the network normalization schema so that I can effectively analyze and unify network event data for better threat detection and response.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the Network normalization schema so that I can effectively analyze and unify network event data for better threat detection and response.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/purview-solution.md b/articles/sentinel/purview-solution.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 04/25/2023
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to integrate data governance logs with my SIEM platform so that I can prioritize and investigate critical security incidents involving sensitive information.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to integrate data governance logs with Microsoft Sentinel so that I can prioritize and investigate critical security incidents involving sensitive information.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/sample-workspace-designs.md b/articles/sentinel/sample-workspace-designs.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.author: cwatson
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.date: 08/27/2024
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations center (SOC) manager, I want to design and implement an optimal workspace architecture for multi-tenant and multi-region environments so that I can ensure compliance, cost efficiency, and effective data segregation.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security architect, I want to design and implement an optimal workspace architecture for multi-tenant and multi-region environments so that I can ensure compliance, cost efficiency, and effective data segregation.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/use-multiple-workspaces.md b/articles/sentinel/use-multiple-workspaces.md
@@ -5,10 +5,9 @@ author: cwatson-cat
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 07/05/2023
 ms.author: cwatson
-#Customer intent: As a SOC architect, I want to learn about how Microsoft Sentinel can extend across workspaces so I can determine whether I need this capability and prepare accordingly.
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security operations manager, I want to set up and manage multiple workspaces and tenants so that I can efficiently monitor and analyze security data across my entire organization.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security architect, I want to use Microsoft Sentinel across multiple workspaces so that I can efficiently monitor and analyze security data across my entire organization.
 
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