Merge pull request #287912 from KendalBond007/APIforFHIRbatch9_Oct24

APIforFHIRbatch9_Oct24

Author: Stacyrch140

articles/healthcare-apis/azure-api-for-fhir/move-fhir-service.md

@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ ms.author: kesheth
 
 # Move Azure API for FHIR to a different subscription or resource group
 
-[!INCLUDE [retirement banner](../includes/healthcare-apis-azure-api-fhir-retirement.md)]
+[!INCLUDE[retirement banner](../includes/healthcare-apis-azure-api-fhir-retirement.md)]
 
-In this article, you'll learn how to move an Azure API for FHIR instance to a different subscription or another resource group.  
+In this article, you learn how to move an Azure API for FHIR® instance to a different subscription or another resource group.  
 
 Moving to a different region isn’t supported, though the option may be available from the list. For more information, see [Move operation support for resources](../../azure-resource-manager/management/move-support-resources.md).
 
@@ -22,40 +22,39 @@ Moving to a different region isn’t supported, though the option may be availab
 
 ## Move to another subscription
 
-You can move an Azure API for FHIR instance to another subscription from the portal. However, the runtime and data for the service aren’t moved. On average the **move** operation takes approximately 15 minutes or so, and the actual time may vary.
+You can move an Azure API for FHIR instance to another subscription from the portal. However, the runtime and data for the service aren’t moved. On average the **move** operation takes approximately 15 minutes. The actual time may vary.
 
 The **move** operation takes a few simple steps.
 
 1. Select a FHIR service instance 
 
-Select the FHIR service from the source subscription and then the target subscription.
+Select the FHIR service from the source subscription, and then the target subscription.
 
   :::image type="content" source="media/move/move-source-target.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Move to another subscription with source and target." lightbox="media/move/move-source-target.png":::
 
 2. Validate the move operation
 
-This step validates whether the selected resource can be moved. It takes a few minutes and returns a status from **Pending validation** to **Succeeded** or **Failed**. If the validation failed, you can view the error details, fix the error, and restart the **move** operation.
+This step validates whether the selected resource can be moved. It takes a few minutes and returns a status of **Pending validation**, **Succeeded**, or **Failed**. If the validation failed, you can view the error details, fix the error, and restart the **move** operation.
 
   :::image type="content" source="media/move/move-validation.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Move to another subscription with validation." lightbox="media/move/move-validation.png":::
 
 3. Review and confirm the move operation
 
-After reviewing the move operation summary, select the confirmation checkbox at the bottom of the screen and press the Move button to complete the operation.
+After reviewing the move operation summary, select the confirmation checkbox at the bottom of the screen and select **Move** to complete the operation.
 
   :::image type="content" source="media/move/move-review.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Move to another subscription with confirmation." lightbox="media/move/move-review.png":::
 
 Optionally, you can check the activity log in the source subscription and target subscription.
 
 ## Move to another resource group
 
-The process works similarly to **Move to another subscription**, except the selected FHIR service will be moved to a  different resource group in the same subscription.
+The process works similarly to **Move to another subscription**, except the selected FHIR service is moved to a  different resource group in the same subscription.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this article, you've learned how to move the Azure API for FHIR instance. For more information about the supported FHIR features in Azure API for FHIR, see
+In this article, you learned how to move the Azure API for FHIR instance. For more information about the supported FHIR features in Azure API for FHIR, see
 
 >[!div class="nextstepaction"]
 >[Supported FHIR features](fhir-features-supported.md)
 
-FHIR® is a registered trademark of [HL7](https://hl7.org/fhir/) and is used with the permission of HL7.
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+[!INCLUDE[FHIR trademark statement](../includes/healthcare-apis-fhir-trademark.md)]