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Author: Sreekanth Iyer (Ushta Te Consultancy Services)

articles/hdinsight/apache-ambari-email.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
 1. From the Overview page, click **Open SaaS Account on publisher’s site**, to go the SendGrid webpage for your account.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="./media/apache-ambari-email/azure-portal-sendgrid-manage.png" alt-text="SendGrid overview in azure portal.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="./media/apache-ambari-email/azure-portal-sendgrid-manage.png" alt-text="SendGrid overview in Azure portal.":::
 
 1. From the left menu, navigate to your **Settings** and then **API Keys**.
 

articles/hdinsight/apache-ambari-usage.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.date: 06/15/2024
 
 # Apache Ambari usage in Azure HDInsight
 
-HDInsight uses Apache Ambari for cluster deployment and management. Ambari agents run on every node provide if headnode, worker node, zookeeper, and edgenode. Ambari server runs only on headnode. Only one instance of Ambari server shall run at one time. This is controlled by HDInsight failover controller. When one of the headnodes is down for reboot or maintenance, the other headnode will become active and Ambari server on the second headnode will be started.
+HDInsight uses Apache Ambari for cluster deployment and management. Ambari agents run on every node provided if headnode, worker node, zookeeper, and edgenode are present. Ambari server runs only on headnode. Only one instance of Ambari server shall run at one time. This is controlled by HDInsight failover controller. When one of the headnodes is down for reboot or maintenance, the other headnode will become active and Ambari server on the second headnode will be started.
 
 All cluster configuration should be done through the [Ambari UI](./hdinsight-hadoop-manage-ambari.md), any local change will be overwritten when the node is restarted.
 

articles/hdinsight/cluster-availability-monitor-logs.md

@@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ You can also view all alerts that have fired, grouped by severity, by going to *
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/cluster-availability-monitor-logs/hdi-portal-oms-alerts.png" alt-text="Log Analytics workspace alerts.":::
 
-When you select on a severity group (i.e. **severity 1,** as highlighted above) will show records for all alerts of that severity that have fired like below:
+When you select on a severity group (i.e. **severity 1,** as highlighted above) it will show records for all alerts of that severity that have fired like below:
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/cluster-availability-monitor-logs/portal-oms-alerts-sev1.png" alt-text="Log Analytics workspace severity  one alert.":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/cluster-availability-monitor-logs/portal-oms-alerts-sev1.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing Log Analytics workspace severity  one alert.":::
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/hdinsight/domain-joined/apache-domain-joined-manage.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 06/15/2024
 
 Learn the users and the roles in HDInsight Enterprise Security Package (ESP), and how to manage ESP clusters.
 
-## Use VSCode to link to domain joined cluster
+## Use VS Code to link to domain joined cluster
 
 You can link a normal cluster by using Apache Ambari managed username, also link a security Apache Hadoop cluster by using domain username (such as: `[email protected]`).
 

articles/hdinsight/domain-joined/apache-domain-joined-run-kafka.md

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Create a Ranger policy for **sales_user** and **marketing_user**.
 
    |Setting  |Suggested value  |
    |---------|---------|
-   |Policy Name  |  HDinsight marketing policy   |
+   |Policy Name  |  HDInsight marketing policy   |
    |Topic   |  `marketingspend` |
    |Select User  |  marketing_user1 |
    |Permissions  | publish, consume, create |

articles/hdinsight/domain-joined/general-guidelines.md

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ When hierarchical name space in not enabled:
 If the url auth is enabled:
 
 * The config will contain what prefixes are covered in the url auth (like `adl://`).
-* If the access is for this url, then Ranger will check if the user is in the allow list.
+* If the access is for this url, then Ranger will check if the user is in the allowlist.
 * Ranger won't check any of the fine grained policies.
 
 ### Manage Ranger audit logs

articles/hdinsight/domain-joined/troubleshoot-domainnotfound.md

@@ -20,23 +20,23 @@ Incorrect DNS settings.
 
 ## Resolution
 
-When the domain joined clusters are deployed, HDI creates an internal user name and password in AAD DS (for each cluster) and joins all the cluster nodes to this domain. The domain join is accomplished using Samba tools. Ensure the following prerequisites are met:
+When the domain joined clusters are deployed, HDI creates an internal user name and password in Azure Active Directory Domain Services (for each cluster) and joins all the cluster nodes to this domain. The domain join is accomplished using Samba tools. Ensure the following prerequisites are met:
 
 * The domain name should resolve through DNS.
 * The IP address of the domain controllers should be set in the DNS settings for the virtual network where the cluster is being deployed.
-* If the virtual network is peered with the virtual network of AAD DS, then it has to be done manually.
+* If the virtual network is peered with the virtual network of Azure Active Directory Domain Services, then it has to be done manually.
 * If you're using DNS forwarders, the domain name must resolve correctly within the virtual network.
 * Security policies (NSGs) shouldn't block the domain join.
 
 ### Additional debugging steps
 
-* Deploy a windows VM in the same subnet, domain join the machine using a username and password (this can be done through the control panel UI), or
+* Deploy a windows VM in the same subnet, domain join the machine using a username and password (which can be done through the control panel UI), or
 
 * Deploy an Ubuntu VM in the same subnet and domain join the machine
   * SSH into the machine
   * sudo su
   * Run the [script](./sample-script.md) with username and password
-  * The script will ping, create the required configuration files and then domain. If it succeeds, your DNS settings are good.
+  * The script pings, create the required configuration files and then domain. If it succeeds, your DNS settings are good.
 
 ## Next steps