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Author: v-kents

articles/azure-cache-for-redis/cache-remove-tls-10-11.md

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Redis .NET clients use the earliest TLS version by default on .NET Framework 4.5
 
 ### .NET Core
 
-Redis .NET Core clients default to the OS default TLS version which obviously depends on the the OS itself. 
+Redis .NET Core clients default to the OS default TLS version which obviously depends on the OS itself. 
 
 Depending on when the OS was released and if any other patches changed the default TLS version, the OS TLS version could be quite varied. While there is no complete information about this, for Windows OS specifically you can find more information [here](https://docs.microsoft.com/dotnet/framework/network-programming/tls#support-for-tls-12). 
 

articles/azure-monitor/learn/quick-collect-linux-computer.md

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ For example: `https://user01:[email protected]:30443`
 
 Azure Monitor can collect events from the Linux Syslog and performance counters that you specify for longer term analysis and reporting. It can also take action when it detects a particular condition. Follow these steps to configure collection of events from the Linux Syslog, and several common performance counters to start with.  
 
-1. In the Azure portal, select **All services**. In the list of resources, type Log Analytics. As you type, the list filters based on your input. Select **Log Analytics workspaces** and in your list of Log Analytics workspaces, select the workspace you are looking for and select on **Advanced settings** of the Log Analytics workspace.
+1. In the Azure portal, select **All services**. In the list of resources, type Log Analytics. As you type, the list filters based on your input. Select **Log Analytics workspaces** and in your list of Log Analytics workspaces, select the workspace you are looking for and select **Advanced settings** of the **Log Analytics** workspace.
 
 2. Select **Data**, and then select **Syslog**.