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Co-authored-by: Simona Cotin <[email protected]>

Author: craigshoemaker

articles/static-web-apps/TOC.yml

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
       items:
       - name: Use Azure DNS
         items:
-        - name: Set up an Azure DNS zone
+        - name: Delegate your domain to Azure DNS
           href: azure-dns-zone.md
         - name: Set up a custom domain
           href: custom-domain-azure-dns.md

articles/static-web-apps/azure-dns-zone.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: Set up an Azure DNS zone for Azure Static Web Apps
+title: Delegate domain to Azure DNS 
 description: Create an Azure DNS zone for a custom domain in Azure Static Web Apps
 services: static-web-apps
 author: craigshoemaker
@@ -11,11 +11,13 @@ ms.author: cshoe
 
 # Set up an Azure DNS zone for Azure Static Web Apps
 
-By default, Azure Static Web Apps provides an auto-generated domain name for your website, but you can point a custom domain to your site. Free SSL/TLS certificates are automatically created for the auto-generated domain name and any custom domains you may add.
+You can use Azure DNS to host your DNS domain and manage your DNS records. By hosting your domains in Azure, you can manage your DNS records by using the same credentials, APIs, tools, and billing as your other Azure services.
+
+Suppose you buy the domain `example.com` from a domain name registrar and then create a zone with the name `example.com` in Azure DNS. Since you're the owner of the domain, your registrar offers you the option to configure the name server (NS) records for your domain. The registrar stores the NS records in the .COM parent zone. Internet users around the world are then directed to your domain in your Azure DNS zone when they try to resolve DNS records in example.com.
 
 This guide demonstrates how to configure your domain name with the `www` subdomain. Once this procedure is complete, you can set up an [apex domain](apex-domain-azure-dns.md).
 
-The following procedure requires you to copy settings from an Azure DNS zone you create and your existing static web app. Consider opening the Azure portal in two different windows to make it easier to switch between the two services.
+The following procedure requires you to copy settings from an Azure DNS zone you create and your existing DNS hosting provider. Consider opening the Azure portal and your DNS provider website to make it easier to switch between the two services.
 
 ## Create an Azure DNS zone
 
@@ -43,7 +45,7 @@ The following procedure requires you to copy settings from an Azure DNS zone you
 
     With the DNS zone created, you now have access to Azure's DNS name servers for your application.
 
-1. From the *Overview* window, copy the values for **Name server 1** and **Name server 2** and set them aside in a text editor for later use.
+1. From the *Overview* window, copy the values for all four name servers listed as **Name server 1** to **Name server 4** and set them aside in a text editor for later use.
 
 ## Update name server addresses
 

articles/static-web-apps/custom-domain-azure-dns.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ The following procedure requires you to copy settings from an Azure DNS zone you
 
 - A custom domain
 - An existing Azure DNS zone
-  - If you don't already have one, refer to [Set up an Azure DNS zone for Azure Static Web Apps](azure-dns-zone.md)
+  - If you don't already have one, refer to [Delegate your domain to Azure DNS](azure-dns-zone.md)
 
 ## Map the domain to your website