edit pass: backup-azure-backup-import-export

Author: paulth1

articles/backup/backup-azure-backup-import-export.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ The Azure Backup offline-seeding process is tightly integrated with the [Azure I
 
   ![Overview of offline import workflow process](./media/backup-azure-backup-import-export/offlinebackupworkflowoverview.png)
 
-The offline backup process involves the following steps:
+The offline backup process involves these steps:
 
 1. Instead of sending the backup data over the network, write the backup data to a staging location.
 1. Use the *AzureOfflineBackupDiskPrep* utility to write the data in the staging location to one or more SATA disks.
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ The *AzureOfflineBackupDiskPrep* utility prepares the SATA drives that are sent
 
     *\Microsoft Azure Recovery Services Agent\Utils\\*
 
-1. Go to the directory, and copy the **AzureOfflineBackupDiskPrep** directory to another computer where the SATA drives are connected. On the computer with the connected SATA drives, ensure that:
+1. Go to the directory, and copy the *AzureOfflineBackupDiskPrep* directory to another computer where the SATA drives are connected. On the computer with the connected SATA drives, ensure that:
 
    * The copy computer can access the staging location for the offline-seeding workflow by using the same network path that was provided in the workflow in the "Initiate offline backup" section.
    * BitLocker is enabled on the copy computer.

articles/backup/backup-azure-backup-server-import-export-.md

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ The information in this section helps you finish the offline backup workflow so
    * **Azure Storage Account**: The name of the storage account in the Azure subscription associated with the Azure publish settings file.
    * **Azure Storage Container**: The name of the destination storage blob in the Azure storage account where the backup data is imported.
 
-     Save the **Staging Location** and the **Azure Import Job Name** information you provided. It's required to prepare the disks. 
+   Save the **Staging Location** and the **Azure Import Job Name** information you provided. It's required to prepare the disks.
 
 1. Finish the workflow. To initiate the offline backup copy, select **Back Up Now** on the Azure Backup agent management console. The initial backup is written to the staging area as part of this step.
 

includes/backup-upgrade-mars-agent.md

@@ -17,4 +17,8 @@ ms.author: dacurwin
 
 ## Upgrade the MARS agent
 
-Versions of the Microsoft Azure Recovery Services (MARS) agent below 2.0.9083.0 have a dependency on the Azure Access Control service. The MARS agent is also referred to as the Azure Backup agent. In 2018, Microsoft [deprecated the Azure Access Control service](../articles/active-directory/azuread-dev/active-directory-acs-migration.md). Beginning March 19, 2018, all versions of the MARS agent below 2.0.9083.0 will experience backup failures. To avoid or resolve backup failures, [upgrade your MARS agent to the latest version](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=229525). To identify servers that require a MARS agent upgrade, follow the steps in the [Backup blog for upgrading MARS agents](https://blogs.technet.microsoft.com/srinathv/2018/01/17/updating-azure-backup-agents/). The MARS agent is used to back up files and folders and system state data to Azure. System Center DPM and Azure Backup Server use the MARS agent to back up data to Azure.
+Versions of the Microsoft Azure Recovery Services (MARS) agent below 2.0.9083.0 have a dependency on the Azure Access Control service. The MARS agent is also referred to as the Azure Backup agent.
+
+In 2018, Microsoft [deprecated the Azure Access Control service](../articles/active-directory/azuread-dev/active-directory-acs-migration.md). Beginning March 19, 2018, all versions of the MARS agent below 2.0.9083.0 will experience backup failures. To avoid or resolve backup failures, [upgrade your MARS agent to the latest version](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=229525). To identify servers that require a MARS agent upgrade, follow the steps in the [Backup blog for upgrading MARS agents](https://blogs.technet.microsoft.com/srinathv/2018/01/17/updating-azure-backup-agents/).
+
+The MARS agent is used to back up files and folders and system state data to Azure. System Center DPM and Azure Backup Server use the MARS agent to back up data to Azure.