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Author: khdownie

articles/storage/files/storage-files-migration-nfs.md

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 ### Using fpsync vs. rsync
 
-Despite being single-threaded, [rsync](https://linux.die.net/man/1/rsync) is a versatile, open source file copy tool. It can copy locally, to/from another host over any remote shell, or to/from a remote rsync daemon. It offers many options and enables flexible specification of the set of files to be copied. However, [fpsync](https://manpages.ubuntu.com/manpages/lunar/en/man1/fpsync.1.html), which stands for File Parallel Synchronization, is a multithreaded application and therefore offers some advantages.
+Despite being single-threaded, [rsync](https://linux.die.net/man/1/rsync) is a versatile, open source file copy tool. It can copy locally, to/from another host over any remote shell, or to/from a remote rsync daemon. It offers many options and enables flexible specification of the set of files to be copied. However, [fpsync](https://manpages.ubuntu.com/manpages/lunar/en/man1/fpsync.1.html) is a multithreaded application and therefore offers some advantages, including the ability to run rsync jobs in parallel.
 
-In this article, we'll use fpsync to copy and synchronize data from a Linux file server to NFS Azure file shares.
+In this article, we'll use fpsync to move data from a Linux file server to NFS Azure file shares.
 
 To copy the data, fpsync uses either rsync (default), [cpio](https://linux.die.net/man/1/cpio), or tar tools. It computes subsets of the source directory `src_dir/` and spawns synchronization jobs to synchronize them to the destination directory `dst_dir/`. It executes synchronization jobs on-the-fly while simultaneously crawling the file system, making it a useful tool for efficiently migrating large file systems and copying large datasets with multiple files.