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 ### Application Enclaves
 
-**Application Enclaves** such as Intel SGX protect memory spaces inside a VM with hardware-based encryption. The security boundary of application enclaves is more restricted than confidential VMs. For Intel SGX, the security boundary applies to portions of memory within a VM. Users, apps, and services running inside the VM can't access any data and code in execution inside the enclave.
+**Application Enclaves** protects memory spaces inside a VM with hardware-based encryption. The security boundary of application enclaves is more restricted than confidential VMs. For Intel SGX, the security boundary applies to portions of memory within a VM. Guest admins, apps, and services running inside the VM can't access any data and code in execution inside the enclave.
 
-Intel SGX helps protect data in use by application isolation. By protecting selected code and data from modification, developers can partition their application into hardened enclaves or trusted execution modules to help increase application security. Entities outside the enclave can't read or write the enclave memory, whatever their permissions levels. The hypervisor or the operating system also can't obtain this access through normal OS-level calls. To call an enclave function, you have to use a new set of instructions in the Intel SGX CPUs. This process includes several protection checks.
+Intel SGX enhances application security by isolating data in use. It creates secure enclaves that prevent modifications to selected code and data, ensuring that only authorized code can access them. Even with high-level permissions, entities outside the enclave, including the OS and hypervisor, cannot access enclave memory through standard calls. Accessing enclave functions requires specific Intel SGX CPU instructions, which include multiple security checks.
 
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