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articles/virtual-desktop/manage-resources-using-ui.md

@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ The management tool provides a user interface (UI) for managing Microsoft Virtua
 
 ## Important considerations
 
-Since consent is required for the app to interact with Windows Virtual Desktop, this tool does not support Business-to-Business (B2B) scenarios. Each Azure Active Directory (AAD) tenant requires a separate deployment of this UI in their subscription.
+Since the app requires consent to interact with Windows Virtual Desktop, this tool doesn't support Business-to-Business (B2B) scenarios. Each Azure Active Directory (AAD) tenant's subscription will need its own separate deployment of the management tool.
 
 This management tool is a sample. Microsoft will provide important security and quality updates. The [source code is available in GitHub](https://github.com/Azure/RDS-Templates/tree/master/wvd-templates/wvd-management-ux/deploy). Customers and partners are encouraged to customize the tool to fit their business needs.
 
 ## What you need to run the Azure Resource Manager template
 
-Before deploying the Azure Resource Manager template, you will need an Azure Active Directory user account that:
+Before deploying the Azure Resource Manager template, you'll need an Azure Active Directory user account that:
 
 - Has Azure Multi-Factor Authentication (MFA) disabled
 - Has permission to create resources in your Azure subscription
@@ -34,31 +34,31 @@ Before deploying the Azure Resource Manager template, you will need an Azure Act
 
 Before you start, ensure the server and client apps have consent by visiting the [Windows Virtual Desktop Consent Page](https://rdweb.wvd.microsoft.com) for the Azure Active Directory (AAD) represented.
 
-Use the following instructions to deploy the Azure Resource Management template.
+Follow these instructions to deploy the Azure Resource Management template:
 
 1. Go to the [GitHub Azure RDS-Templates page](https://github.com/Azure/RDS-Templates/tree/master/wvd-templates/wvd-management-ux/deploy).
 2. Deploy the template to Azure.
     - If you're deploying in an Enterprise subscription, scroll down and select **Deploy to Azure**. See [Guidance for template parameters](#guidance-for-template-parameters).
     - If you're deploying in a Cloud Solution Provider subscription, follow these instructions to deploy to Azure:
         1. Scroll down and right-click **Deploy to Azure**, then select **Copy Link Location**.
         2. Open a text editor like Notepad and paste the link there.
-        3. Right after <https://portal.azure.com/> and before the hashtag (#) enter an at sign (@) followed by the tenant domain name. Here's an example of the format: <https://portal.azure.com/@Contoso.onmicrosoft.com#create/>.
+        3. Right after <https://portal.azure.com/> and before the hashtag (#), enter an at sign (@) followed by the tenant domain name. Here's an example of the format: <https://portal.azure.com/@Contoso.onmicrosoft.com#create/>.
         4. Sign in to the Azure portal as a user with Admin/Contributor permissions to the Cloud Solution Provider subscription.
         5. Paste the link you copied to the text editor into the address bar.
 
 ### Guidance for template parameters
-Here's how to enter parameters for configuring the tool.
+Here's how to enter parameters for configuring the tool:
 
 - This is the RD broker URL:  <https://rdbroker.wvd.microsoft.com/>
 - This is the resource URL:  <https://mrs-prod.ame.gbl/mrs-RDInfra-prod>
-- Use AAD credentials with MFA disabled for Azure Login ID and password. See [What you need to run the Azure Resource Manager template](#what-you-need-to-run-the-azure-resource-manager-template).
+- Use your AAD credentials with MFA disabled to sign in to Azure. See [What you need to run the Azure Resource Manager template](#what-you-need-to-run-the-azure-resource-manager-template).
 - Use a unique name for the application that will be registered in your Azure Active Directory for the management tool; for example, Apr3UX.
 
 ## Use the management tool
 
 After the GitHub Azure Resource Manager template completes, you'll find a resource group containing two app services along with one app service plan in the Azure portal.
 
-Use the following instructions to launch the tool.
+Follow these instructions to launch the tool:
 
 1. Select the Azure App Services resource with the name you provided in the template (for example, Apr3UX) and navigate to the URL associated with it; for example,  <https://rdmimgmtweb-210520190304.azurewebsites.net>.
 2. Sign in using your Windows Virtual Desktop credentials.

articles/virtual-desktop/troubleshoot-set-up-overview.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ We currently aren't taking support cases while Windows Virtual Desktop is in pre
 
 ## Escalation tracks
 
-Use the following table to identify and resolve issues you may encounter when setting up a tenant environment using Remote Desktop client. Once your tenant is set up you can use our new [Diagnostics service](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/virtual-desktop/diagnostics-role-service) to identify issues for common scenarios.
+Use the following table to identify and resolve issues you may encounter when setting up a tenant environment using Remote Desktop client. Once your tenant's set up, you can use our new [Diagnostics service](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/virtual-desktop/diagnostics-role-service) to identify issues for common scenarios.
 
 >[!NOTE]
 >We currently aren't taking support cases while Windows Virtual Desktop is in preview. Whenever we refer to Windows Virtual Desktop support, go to our Tech Community forum for now. Visit the [Windows Virtual Desktop Tech Community](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/Windows-Virtual-Desktop/bd-p/WindowsVirtualDesktop) to discuss issues with the product team and active community members. If you need to resolve a support issue, include the activity ID and approximate time frame for when the issue occurred.