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articles/sentinel/best-practices.md

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 ## Setting up Microsoft Sentinel
 
-Start with the [deployment guide for Microsoft Sentinel](deploy-overview.md). The deployment guide covers the high level steps to plan, deploy, and fine-tune your deployment of Microsoft Sentinel. From that guide, select the provided links to find detailed guidance for each stage in your deployment.
+Start with the [deployment guide for Microsoft Sentinel](deploy-overview.md). The deployment guide covers the high level steps to plan, deploy, and fine-tune your Microsoft Sentinel deployment. From that guide, select the provided links to find detailed guidance for each stage in your deployment.
 
 ## Microsoft security service integrations
 
-Microsoft Sentinel is empowered by the components that send data to your workspace, and is made stronger through integrations with other Microsoft services. Any logs ingested into products such as Microsoft Defender for Cloud Apps, Microsoft Defender for Endpoint, and Microsoft Defender for Identity allow these services to create detections, and in turn provide those detections to Microsoft Sentinel. Logs can also be ingested directly into Microsoft Sentinel to provide a fuller picture for events and incidents.
+Microsoft Sentinel is empowered by the components that send data to your workspace, and is made stronger through integrations with other Microsoft services. Any logs ingested into products, such as Microsoft Defender for Cloud Apps, Microsoft Defender for Endpoint, and Microsoft Defender for Identity, allow these services to create detections, and in turn provide those detections to Microsoft Sentinel. Logs can also be ingested directly into Microsoft Sentinel to provide a fuller picture for events and incidents.
 
 For example, the following image shows how Microsoft Sentinel ingests data from other Microsoft services and multicloud and partner platforms to provide coverage for your environment: