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articles/migrate/tutorial-discover-vmware.md

@@ -314,17 +314,18 @@ To start vCenter Server discovery, select **Start discovery**. After the discove
 * [Software inventory](how-to-discover-applications.md) identifies web server role existing on discovered servers. If a server is found to have web server role enabled, Azure Migrate will perform web apps discovery on the server. Web apps configuration data is updated once every 24 hours.
 * During software inventory, the added server credentials are iterated against servers and validated for agentless dependency analysis. When the discovery of servers is finished, in the portal, you can enable agentless dependency analysis on the servers. Only the servers on which validation succeeds can be selected to enable [agentless dependency analysis](how-to-create-group-machine-dependencies-agentless.md).
 * ASP.NET web apps and SQL Server instances and databases data begin to appear in the portal within 24 hours after you start discovery.
-* By default, Azure Migrate uses the most secure way of connecting to SQL instances i.e. Azure Migrate encrypts communication between the Azure Migrate appliance and the source SQL Server instances by setting the TrustServerCertificate property to `true`. Additionally, the transport layer uses SSL to encrypt the channel and bypass the certificate chain to validate trust. Hence, the appliance server must be set up to trust the certificate's root authority. However, you can modify the connection settings, by selecting **Edit SQL Server connection properties** on the appliance.[Learn more](/sql/database-engine/configure-windows/enable-encrypted-connections-to-the-database-engine) to understand what to choose.
+* By default, Azure Migrate uses the most secure way of connecting to SQL instances i.e. Azure Migrate encrypts communication between the Azure Migrate appliance and the source SQL Server instances by setting the TrustServerCertificate property to `true`. Additionally, the transport layer uses SSL to encrypt the channel and bypass the certificate chain to validate trust. Hence, the appliance server must be set up to trust the certificate's root authority. However, you can modify the connection settings, by selecting **Edit SQL Server connection properties** on the appliance. [Learn more](/sql/database-engine/configure-windows/enable-encrypted-connections-to-the-database-engine) to understand what to choose.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-discover-vmware/sql-connection-properties.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to edit SQL Server connection properties.":::
 
 To start vCenter Server discovery, select **Start discovery**. After the discovery is successfully initiated, you can check the discovery status by looking at the vCenter Server IP address or FQDN in the sources table.
 
 ### View discovered data
 
-1. Go back to the Azure Migrate portal.
-1. Click on refresh as marked in below screenshot to view discovered data.
-    :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-discover-vmware/discovery-assessment-tile.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to refresh data in discovery and assessment tile.":::
+1. Return to Azure Migrate in the Azure portal.
+1. Select **Refresh** to view discovered data.
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+   :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-discover-vmware/discovery-assessment-tile.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to refresh data in discovery and assessment tile.":::
 
 ## Next steps