edit pass: azure-dev-tools-teaching

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/about-program.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Students don't need to sign up for an Azure subscription to access their softwar
 
 Software is accessible through an [Education Hub](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/devtools) that houses all products and services that are available to academic users. The Education Hub is built into the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/). Students access software by simply signing in to the Azure portal with the same credentials that they use to access their Imagine subscription.
 
-## Why can't I purchase Azure Dev Tools for Teaching?
+## Eligibility to purchase Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
 
 Azure Dev Tools for Teaching is available to redeem only if you have a Volume Licensing agreement with Microsoft. [Learn more about Volume Licensing for educational institutions](https://aka.ms/ees).
 

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/azure-students-program.md

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ For more information, see the [terms and conditions for the Azure for Students o
 
 ## Related content
 
-- [Get help with sign-in errors](troubleshoot-login.md)
+- [Resolve sign-in problems](troubleshoot-login.md)
 - [Download software in the Azure for Students program](download-software.md)
 - [Get an overview of the Azure for Students Starter program](azure-students-starter-program.md)
 - [Access Microsoft Learn training materials](/training/)

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/azure-students-starter-program.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ A credit card isn't required for the Azure for Students Starter offer. However,
 
 ## Related content
 
-- [Get help with sign-in errors](troubleshoot-login.md)
+- [Resolve sign-in problems](troubleshoot-login.md)
 - [Get an overview of the Azure for Students program](azure-students-program.md)
 - [Download software in the Azure for Students program](download-software.md)
 - [Access Microsoft Learn training materials](/training/)

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/download-software.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Students who have a current and active Azure for Students subscription through t
 
 ## Related content
 
-- [Get help with sign-in errors](troubleshoot-login.md)
+- [Resolve sign-in problems](troubleshoot-login.md)
 - [Get an overview of the Azure for Students program](azure-students-program.md)
 - [Get an overview of the Azure for Students Starter program](azure-students-starter-program.md)
 - [Access Microsoft Learn training materials](/training/)

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/enroll-renew-subscription.md

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Sixty days before your membership expires, you receive email reminders to renew
 
 You can complete the renewal process as early as 90 days before the expiration date:
 
-1. Go to the [Azure Dev Tools for Teaching Management portal](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/Order).
+1. Go to the [Azure Dev Tools for Teaching management portal](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/Order).
 
 1. On the Azure Dev Tools for Teaching banner, select **Renew an existing plan**.
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ You can complete the renewal process as early as 90 days before the expiration d
 
 1. Confirm all enrollment information, and then select **Confirm and Place Order**.
 
-## Next steps
+## Related content
 
 - [Set up access for Azure Dev Tools for Teaching](set-up-access.md)
 - [Manage student access](manage-students.md)

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/manage-students.md

@@ -1,28 +1,28 @@
 ---
 title: Manage student access in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
-description: Learn how to enroll and manage student access to Azure Dev Tools for Teaching.
+description: Learn how to manage student access to subscriptions in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching.
 author: v-shmck
 ms.author: rymend
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.service: azure-education
 ms.date: 06/30/2020
 ---
 
-# Enroll students in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
+# Manage student access in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
 
-After purchasing Azure Dev Tools for Teaching, all students located in your institution's domain will automatically get access to this offer.
+After you purchase Azure Dev Tools for Teaching, all students in your institution's domain automatically get access to the offer.
 
-During the purchase process, you will be asked to  enter the Subscription Administrator's email address. This university-verified domain will unlock students with the same email domain and grant them the ability to log in and redeem their software download benefits.
+During the purchase process, you enter the subscription administrator's email address. This university-verified domain unlocks students who have the same email domain. Students can then sign in and redeem their software download benefits.
 
-If students do not already have a Microsoft Account (MSA) or are part of a University Active Directory, they will be prompted to create one that matches their university email. If students are having issues accessing the Education Hub, have them look through our Troubleshooting Guide below or contact us at [https://aka.ms/studentsupport](https://aka.ms/studentsupport).
+If students don't already have a Microsoft account or are part of a university Active Directory instance, they're prompted to create a Microsoft account that matches their university email. If students have trouble accessing the Azure Education Hub, they can use the [Microsoft support webpage](https://aka.ms/studentsupport) or use the resources listed at the end of this article.
 
 ## Manage access for students
 
-You can manage access for students based on the domain they use to log into Azure Dev Tools for Teaching. Go into your [Management Portal](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/en-us/account/Subscriptions) for Azure Dev Tools for  Teaching. There, you'll see all of your subscriptions. Choose the subscription you wish to manage access for.
+You can manage access for students based on the domain that they use to sign in to Azure Dev Tools for Teaching. Go to the [Azure Dev Tools for Teaching management portal](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/en-us/account/Subscriptions). The portal lists all of your subscriptions. Choose the subscription that you want to manage access for, and then select **Actions** > **View Users** to make changes.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/manage-students/manage-student-access.png" alt-text="Manage student access." border="false":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/manage-students/manage-student-access.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Actions menu on the Azure Dev Tools for Teaching management portal." border="false":::
 
 ## Related content
 
-- [Troubleshoot issues with signing in](troubleshoot-login.md)
+- [Resolve sign-in problems](troubleshoot-login.md)
 - [Learn about support options](program-support.md)