Acrolinx fixes

Author: erikadoyle

articles/service-fabric/release-notes.md

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 ### Service Fabric 6.5
 
-The latest Service Fabric release includes supportability, reliability, performance improvements, new features, bug fixes and enhancements to ease cluster and application life cycle management.
+The latest Service Fabric release includes supportability, reliability, performance improvements, new features, bug fixes, and enhancements to ease cluster and application lifecycle management.
 
 #### Breaking changes
 
 - Service Fabric 6.5 is the final release with Service Fabric tools support in Visual Studio 2015. Customers are advised to move to [Visual Studio 2019](https://visualstudio.microsoft.com/vs/compare/) going forward.
 
-- TraceViewer, the tool for parsing Service Fabric trace logs has been updated to be CSV compliant for the Service Fabric 6.5 release. This breaking change could impact you in 2 ways:  
+- TraceViewer, the tool for parsing Service Fabric trace logs has been updated to be CSV compliant for the Service Fabric 6.5 release. This breaking change could impact you in two ways:  
     1. Any custom tools that depend on TraceViewer will require updates for the new logging format.
     2. If you use TraceViewer, you'll need to upgrade it to the newer version shipped with Service Fabric 6.5.
 
 Here's what's new in Service Fabric 6.5:
 
 #### New features for Windows
 
-- Patch Orchestration Application (POA) version 1.4.0 includes numerous self-diagnostic improvements. Customers of POA are recommended to move to this version.
+- Patch Orchestration Application (POA) version 1.4.0 includes many self-diagnostic improvements. Customers of POA are recommended to move to this version.
 
-- Service Fabric Explorer now includes applications you have uploaded to image store.
+- Service Fabric Explorer now also includes applications uploaded to image store.
 
 - SDK Service Fabric runtime installer now supports the `/force` flag to automatically close conflicting processes.  
 
 - SDK Service Fabric runtime installer now supports the `/uninstall` flag for command-line uninstallation.
 
-- [EventStore Service is enabled by default](service-fabric-visualizing-your-cluster.md#event-store) for Service Fabric 6.5 clusters unless a customer has specifically opted out.
+- [EventStore Service is enabled by default](service-fabric-visualizing-your-cluster.md#event-store) for Service Fabric 6.5 clusters unless a customer has opted out.
 
 - Added [replica lifecycle events](service-fabric-diagnostics-event-generation-operational.md#replica-events) for stateful services.
 
 - Better visibility of seed node status, including cluster-level warnings if a seed node is unhealthy (*Down*, *Removed* or *Unknown*).
 
-- [Service Fabric Application Disaster Recovery Tool](https://github.com/Microsoft/Service-Fabric-AppDRTool) allows users of Service Fabric stateful services to get back live soon in case the primary SF cluster encounters a disaster. The tool constantly synchronizes the data from the application running on the primary cluster on the standby application on secondary using periodic backup and restore.
+- [Service Fabric Application Disaster Recovery Tool](https://github.com/Microsoft/Service-Fabric-AppDRTool) allows users of Service Fabric stateful services to get back live soon in case the primary cluster encounters a disaster. The tool constantly synchronizes the data from the application running on the primary cluster on the standby application on secondary using periodic backup and restore.
 
 #### New features for Linux