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Author: ktoliver

articles/site-recovery/hyper-v-azure-tutorial.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 
 The [Azure Site Recovery](site-recovery-overview.md) service contributes to your disaster recovery strategy by managing and orchestrating replication, failover, and failback of on-premises machines and Azure virtual machines (VMs).
 
-This tutorial is the third tutorial in a series. It shows you how to set up on-premises Hyper-V VMs for disaster recovery to Azure. This tutorial applies to Hyper-V VMs that aren't managed by Microsoft System Center Virtual Machine Manager.
+This tutorial is the third in a series that shows you how to set up on-premises Hyper-V VMs for disaster recovery to Azure. This tutorial applies to Hyper-V VMs that aren't managed by Microsoft System Center Virtual Machine Manager.
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 > - Enable replication for a VM.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How to* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
+> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How-to Guides* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-This tutorial is the third tutorial in a series. It assumes that you've already completed the tasks in the first two tutorials:
+This tutorial is the third in a series of tutorials. It assumes that you've already completed the tasks in the first two tutorials:
 
 1. [Prepare Azure](./tutorial-prepare-azure-for-hyperv.md)
 1. [Prepare on-premises Hyper-V](./hyper-v-prepare-on-premises-tutorial.md)
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ It's important to prepare the infrastructure before you set up disaster recovery
     > If you're planning a large deployment, download the Deployment Planner for Hyper-V from the link on the pane. [Learn more](hyper-v-deployment-planner-overview.md) about Hyper-V deployment planning.
   
    - For this tutorial, you don't need to use the Deployment Planner. For **Deployment planning completed?**, select **I will do it later**.
-1. Select **Next**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/hyper-v-azure-tutorial/deployment-planning.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Deployment planning pane.":::
+1. Select **Next**.
 
 ### Source settings
 
@@ -110,7 +110,6 @@ Select and verify target resources:
     1. For **Post-failover deployment model**, select the **Resource Manager** deployment model.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/hyper-v-azure-tutorial/target-settings.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Target settings pane.":::
-
 1. Select **Next**.
 
 ### Replication policy
@@ -133,10 +132,9 @@ On **Prepare infrastructure**, on the **Replication policy** tab, complete these
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/hyper-v-azure-tutorial/create-policy.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows Create and associate policy pane and options.":::
 1. Select **Next**.
-
 1. On the **Review** tab, review your selections, and then select **Create**.
 
-You can track progress in your Azure portal notifications. After the job finishes, the initial replication is complete, and the VM is ready for failover.
+You can track progress in your Azure portal notifications. When the job finishes, the initial replication is complete, and the VM is ready for failover.
 
 ## Enable replication
 

articles/site-recovery/hyper-v-prepare-on-premises-tutorial.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 
 This article describes how to prepare your on-premises Hyper-V infrastructure for disaster recovery to Azure by using [Azure Site Recovery](site-recovery-overview.md).
 
-This tutorial is the second tutorial in a series that shows you how to set up disaster recovery to Azure for on-premises Hyper-V VMs. In the first tutorial, you [set up the Azure components](tutorial-prepare-azure.md) that are required for Hyper-V disaster recovery to Azure.
+This tutorial is the second in a series that shows you how to set up disaster recovery to Azure for on-premises Hyper-V virtual machines (VMs). In the first tutorial, you [set up the Azure components](tutorial-prepare-azure.md) that are required for Hyper-V disaster recovery to Azure.
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 > - Prepare VMs so that you can access them after failover to Azure.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How to* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
+> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How-to Guides* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
 
 ## Before you start
 
-Make sure you've prepared Azure as described in the [first tutorial in this series](tutorial-prepare-azure.md).
+Make sure that you've prepared Azure as described in the [first tutorial in this series](tutorial-prepare-azure.md).
 
 ## Review requirements and prerequisites
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Make sure Hyper-V hosts and VMs comply with requirements.
 1. [Check the requirements](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#replicated-vms) for Hyper-V VMs you want to replicate to Azure.
 1. Check Hyper-V host [networking](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#hyper-v-network-configuration) and host and guest [storage](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#hyper-v-host-storage) support for on-premises Hyper-V hosts.
 1. Check what's supported for [Azure networking](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#azure-vm-network-configuration-after-failover), [storage](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#azure-storage), and [compute](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#azure-compute-features) after failover.
-1. Your on-premises VMs you replicate to Azure must comply with [Azure VM requirements](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#azure-vm-requirements).
+1. Verify that the on-premises VMs you replicate to Azure comply with [Azure VM requirements](hyper-v-azure-support-matrix.md#azure-vm-requirements).
 
 ## Prepare Virtual Machine Manager (optional)
 
@@ -55,16 +55,16 @@ If you're using Virtual Machine Manager, [network mapping](./hyper-v-vmm-network
 To prepare Virtual Machine Manager for network mapping:
 
 1. Make sure that you have a [Virtual Machine Manager logical network](/system-center/vmm/network-logical) that's associated with the cloud in which the Hyper-V hosts are located.
-1. Ensure you have a [VM network](/system-center/vmm/network-virtual) linked to the logical network.
+1. Ensure that you have a [VM network](/system-center/vmm/network-virtual) that's linked to the logical network.
 1. In Virtual Machine Manager, connect the VMs to the VM network.
 
 ## Verify internet access
 
-For the purposes of the tutorial, the simplest configuration is for the Hyper-V hosts and the Virtual Machine Manager server to have direct access to the internet without using a proxy.
+For this tutorial, the simplest configuration is for the Hyper-V hosts and the Virtual Machine Manager server to have direct access to the internet without using a proxy.
 
-1. Make sure that Hyper-V hosts, and the Virtual Machine Manager server if relevant, can access the required URLs listed in the following table.
+1. Make sure that Hyper-V hosts and the Virtual Machine Manager server, if relevant, can access the required URLs listed in the following table.
 1. If you're controlling access by IP address, make sure that:
-    - IP address-based firewall rules can connect to [Azure Datacenter IP ranges](https://www.microsoft.com/download/confirmation.aspx?id=41653) and the HTTPS (443) port.
+    - IP address-based firewall rules can connect to [Azure Datacenter IP ranges](https://www.microsoft.com/download/confirmation.aspx?id=41653) and the HTTPS port (443).
     - Allow IP address ranges for the Azure region of your subscription.
 
 ### Required URLs
@@ -77,16 +77,18 @@ During a failover scenario, you might want to connect to your replicated on-prem
 
 To connect to Windows VMs by using Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP) after failover, allow access as follows:
 
-1. To access over the internet, enable RDP on the on-premises VM before failover. Make sure that TCP and UDP rules are added for the **Public** profile, and that RDP is allowed in **Windows  Firewall** > **Allowed Apps** for all profiles.
-1. To access over site-to-site VPN, enable RDP on the on-premises machine. RDP should be allowed in **Windows Firewall** > **Allowed apps and features** for **Domain and Private** networks.
+1. To access to VMs over the internet, enable RDP on the on-premises VM before failover. Make sure that TCP and UDP rules are added for the **Public** profile, and that RDP is allowed in **Windows  Firewall** > **Allowed Apps** for all profiles.
+1. To access to VMs over site-to-site VPN, enable RDP on the on-premises machine. RDP should be allowed in **Windows Firewall** > **Allowed apps and features** for **Domain and Private** networks.
 
-   Check that the operating system's SAN policy is set to **OnlineAll**. [Learn more](https://support.microsoft.com/kb/3031135). There should be no Windows updates pending on the VM when you trigger a failover. If there are, you won't be able to sign in to the virtual machine until the update completes.
+   Check that the operating system's SAN policy is set to **OnlineAll**. [Learn more](https://support.microsoft.com/kb/3031135). No Windows updates should be pending on the VM when you initiate failover. If updates are pending, you won't be able to sign in to the VM until the update completes.
 1. On the Windows Azure VM after failover, check **Boot diagnostics** to view a screenshot of the VM. If you can't connect, check that the VM is running and review these [troubleshooting tips](https://social.technet.microsoft.com/wiki/contents/articles/31666.troubleshooting-remote-desktop-connection-after-failover-using-asr.aspx).
 
-After failover, you can access Azure VMs by using the same IP address as the replicated on-premises VM, or you can use a different IP address. [Learn more](concepts-on-premises-to-azure-networking.md) about setting up IP addressing for failover.
+After failover, you can access Azure VMs by using the same IP address as the replicated on-premises VM, or you can use a different IP address. [Learn more](concepts-on-premises-to-azure-networking.md) about setting up IP addresses for failover.
 
 ## Next steps
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Set up disaster recovery to Azure for Hyper-V VMs](./hyper-v-azure-tutorial.md)
-> [Set up disaster recovery to Azure for Hyper-V VMs in VMM clouds](./hyper-v-vmm-azure-tutorial.md)
+
+> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
+> [Set up disaster recovery to Azure for Hyper-V VMs in Virtual Machine Manager clouds](./hyper-v-vmm-azure-tutorial.md)

articles/site-recovery/tutorial-prepare-azure-for-hyperv.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 This tutorial is the first in a series that describes how to set up disaster recovery for on-premises Hyper-V VMs.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How to* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
+> We design tutorials to show the simplest deployment path for a scenario. The tutorials use default options when possible, and they don't show all possible settings and paths. For more information about a scenario, see the *How-to Guides* section of the [Site Recovery documentation](./index.yml).
 
 This tutorial shows you how to prepare Azure components when you want to replicate on-premises Hyper-V VMs to Azure.
 
@@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ Images of replicated machines are held in an Azure storage account. Azure VMs ar
     1. For **Region**, select the geographic location for your storage account. For example, select **West Europe**.
     1. For **Performance**, select **Standard**.
     1. For **Redundancy**, retain the default **Geo-redundant storage (GRS)** for storage redundancy.
-1. Select **Review** and review your settings.
-1. Select **Create**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-prepare-azure/create-storage-account.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an example of Create a storage account options.":::
+1. Select **Review** and review your settings.
+1. Select **Create**.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > If you want to create a legacy storage account type, select the related link in the **Instance details** section. The link redirects you to the **Create a storage account** pane to a create legacy storage account.
@@ -85,15 +85,15 @@ Images of replicated machines are held in an Azure storage account. Azure VMs ar
     1. For **Resource group**, select an existing resource group or create a new one. For example, select **contosoRG**.
     1. For **Vault name**, enter a name you can use to identify the vault. For example, enter **ContosoVMVault**.
     1. For **Region**, select the region where the vault should be located. For example, select **West Europe**.
-    1. Select **Review + create** > **Create** to create the recovery vault.
+  
+   :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-prepare-azure/new-vault-settings.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Create Recovery Services vault pane."::: 
+1. Select **Review + create**, and then select **Create** to create the recovery vault.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> To quickly access the vault from the dashboard, select **Pin to dashboard**.
+> To quickly access the vault from your dashboard in the Azure portal, select **Pin to dashboard**.
 
 The new vault appears on **Dashboard** > **All resources** and on the main **Recovery Services vaults** pane.
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-prepare-azure/new-vault-settings.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Create Recovery Services vault pane.":::
-
 ## Set up an Azure network
 
 When an Azure VM is created from storage after failover, the VM is joined to this network.
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ When an Azure VM is created from storage after failover, the VM is joined to thi
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-prepare-azure/create-network.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Create virtual network options.":::
 
-1. Go to the **IP addresses** tab, and then complete these steps:
+1. On **Create virtual network**, on the **IP addresses** tab, complete these steps:
     1. Because there's no subnet for this network, first delete the existing address range. To delete the range, select the ellipsis (**...**), under the available IP address range, and then select **Delete address space**.
 
         :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-prepare-azure/delete-ip-address.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows deleting the address space.":::
@@ -117,17 +117,15 @@ When an Azure VM is created from storage after failover, the VM is joined to thi
         :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-prepare-azure/add-ip-address-space.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows adding an IP address space.":::
     1. For **Starting address**, enter **10.0.0**.
     1. For **Address space size**, select **/24 (256 addresses)**.
-    1. Select **Add**.
 
         :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-prepare-azure/homepage-ip-address.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Add virtual network options.":::
-1. Select **Review + create** > **Create** to create a new virtual network.
+1. Select **Add**.
+1. Select **Review + create**, and then select **Create** to create a new virtual network.
 
-It takes a few minutes for the virtual network to be created. After it's created, it's included on the Azure portal dashboard.
+It takes a few minutes for the virtual network to be created. After it's created, it's included on your Azure portal dashboard.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-Learn about:
-
-- [Preparing the on-premises Hyper-V infrastructure for disaster recovery to Azure](hyper-v-prepare-on-premises-tutorial.md)
-- [Azure networks](../virtual-network/virtual-networks-overview.md)
-- [Managed disks](../virtual-machines/managed-disks-overview.md)
+- [Prepare the on-premises Hyper-V infrastructure](hyper-v-prepare-on-premises-tutorial.md) for disaster recovery to Azure.
+- Learn about [Azure networks](../virtual-network/virtual-networks-overview.md).
+- Learn about [Managed disks](../virtual-machines/managed-disks-overview.md).