rephrasing APS SDK main page with Acrolinx guidance

Author: jacodel

articles/cognitive-services/personalizer/quickstart-personalizer-sdk.md

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 # Quickstart: Getting started with the Personalizer client library
 
-Imagine a scenario where a grocery e-retailer wishes to increase revenue by showing relevant and personalized products to each customer visiting their website. On the main page there is a "Featured Product" section that displays a product to prospective customers. However, the e-retailer would like to determine how to show the right product to the right customer in order to maximize the likelihood of a purchase.
+Imagine a scenario where a grocery e-retailer wishes to increase revenue by showing relevant and personalized products to each customer visiting their website. On the main page, there's a "Featured Product" section that displays a product to prospective customers. However, the e-retailer would like to determine how to show the right product to the right customer in order to maximize the likelihood of a purchase.
 
-In this quick-start you'll learn how to use the Azure Personalizer service to do just this in an automated, scalable, and adaptable fashion using the power of reinforcement learning. You'll learn how to create actions and their features, context features, reward scores, and utilize the Personalizer client library to make calls to the [Rank and Reward APIs](what-is-personalizer.md#rank-and-reward-apis). You'll also run a cycle of Rank and Reward calls for 3 example users.
+In this quick-start, you'll learn how to use the Azure Personalizer service to do solve this problem in an automated, scalable, and adaptable fashion using the power of reinforcement learning. You'll learn how to create actions and their features, context features, and reward scores. You'll use the Personalizer client library to make calls to the [Rank and Reward APIs](what-is-personalizer.md#rank-and-reward-apis). You'll also run a cycle of Rank and Reward calls for three example users.
 
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