arcolinx fixes

Author: Ryan Willis

articles/azure-arc/servers/agent-release-notes.md

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 - The installation script for Linux now automatically approves the request to import the packages.microsoft.com signing key to ensure a silent installation experience
 - Agent installation and upgrades apply more restrictive permissions to the agent's data directories on Windows
 - Improved reliability when detecting Azure Stack HCI as a cloud provider
-- Removed the log zipping feature introduced in version 1.37 for extension manager and machine configuration agent logs. Log files will still be rotated automatically.
-- Removed the scheduled tasks for automatic agent upgrades (introduced in agent version 1.30). We will reintroduce this functionality when the automatic upgrade mechanism is available.
+- Removed the log zipping feature introduced in version 1.37 for extension manager and machine configuration agent logs. Log files are still rotated automatically.
+- Removed the scheduled tasks for automatic agent upgrades (introduced in agent version 1.30). We'll reintroduce this functionality when the automatic upgrade mechanism is available.
 - Resolved [Azure Connected Machine Agent Elevation of Privilege Vulnerability](https://msrc.microsoft.com/update-guide/vulnerability/CVE-2023-35624)
 
 ## Version 1.36 - November 2023
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 ### New features
 
 - [azcmagent show](azcmagent-show.md) now reports extended security license status on Windows Server 2012 server machines.
-- Introduced a new [proxy bypass](manage-agent.md#proxy-bypass-for-private-endpoints) option, `ArcData`, that covers the SQL Server enabled by Azure Arc endpoints. This will enable you to use a private endpoint with Azure Arc-enabled servers with the public endpoints for SQL Server enabled by Azure Arc.
-- The [CPU limit for extension operations](agent-overview.md#agent-resource-governance) on Linux is now 30%. This increase will help improve reliability of extension install, upgrade and uninstall operations.
+- Introduced a new [proxy bypass](manage-agent.md#proxy-bypass-for-private-endpoints) option, `ArcData`, that covers the SQL Server enabled by Azure Arc endpoints. This enables you to use a private endpoint with Azure Arc-enabled servers with the public endpoints for SQL Server enabled by Azure Arc.
+- The [CPU limit for extension operations](agent-overview.md#agent-resource-governance) on Linux is now 30%. This increase helps improve reliability of extension install, upgrade, and uninstall operations.
 - Older extension manager and machine configuration agent logs are automatically zipped to reduce disk space requirements.
 - New executable names for the extension manager (`gc_extension_service`) and machine configuration (`gc_arc_service`) agents on Windows to help you distinguish the two services. For more information, see [Windows agent installation details](./agent-overview.md#windows-agent-installation-details).
 
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 - [azcmagent connect](azcmagent-connect.md) now uses the latest API version when creating the Azure Arc-enabled server resource to ensure Azure policies targeting new properties can take effect.
 - Upgraded the OpenSSL library and PowerShell runtime shipped with the agent to include the latest security fixes.
 - Fixed an issue that could prevent the agent from reporting the correct product type on Windows machines.
-- Improved handling of upgrades when the previously installed extension version was not in a successful state.
+- Improved handling of upgrades when the previously installed extension version wasn't in a successful state.
 
 ## Version 1.35 - October 2023
 
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 ### New features
 
 - [Extended Security Updates for Windows Server 2012 and 2012 R2](prepare-extended-security-updates.md) can be purchased and enabled through Azure Arc. If your server is already running the Azure Connected Machine agent, [upgrade to agent version 1.34](manage-agent.md#upgrade-the-agent) or later to take advantage of this new capability.
-- Additional system metadata is collected to enhance your device inventory in Azure:
+- New system metadata is collected to enhance your device inventory in Azure:
   - Total physical memory
-  - Additional processor information
+  - More processor information
   - Serial number
   - SMBIOS asset tag
 - Network requests to Microsoft Entra ID (formerly Azure Active Directory) now use `login.microsoftonline.com` instead of `login.windows.net`