PR review updates

Author: maud-lv

articles/service-connector/quickstart-cli-spring-cloud-connection.md

@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ ms.custom: devx-track-azurecli, build-2024
 
 # Quickstart: Create a service connection in Azure Spring Apps with the Azure CLI
 
-[!INCLUDE [deprecation-note](../spring-apps/includes/deprecation-note.md)]
+This quickstart shows you how to connect Azure Spring Apps to other Cloud resources using the Azure CLI and Service Connector. Service Connector streamlines the process of linking compute services to cloud services, while managing authentication and networking settings.
 
-This quickstart shows you how to connect Azure Spring Apps to other Cloud resources using the Azure CLI and Service Connector.
+[!INCLUDE [deprecation-note](../spring-apps/includes/deprecation-note.md)]
 
-Service Connector lets you quickly connect compute services to cloud services, while managing your connection's authentication and networking settings.
+To connect resources using the Azure portal, see [Create a service connection in Azure Spring Apps with the Azure portal](./quickstart-portal-spring-cloud-connection.md).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ Create a connection from Azure Spring Apps using a managed identity or an access
 
 ### [Managed identity](#tab/Using-Managed-Identity)
 
-> [!IMPORTANT]
-> To use a managed identity, you must have the permission to modify [role assignments in Microsoft Entra ID](/entra/identity/role-based-access-control/manage-roles-portal). Ask your subscription owner to grant you a role assignment permission or use an access key to create the connection.
+> [!NOTE]
+> To use a managed identity, you must have the permission to modify [role assignments in Microsoft Entra ID](/entra/identity/role-based-access-control/manage-roles-portal). If necessary, ask your subscription owner to grant you this permission.
 
 1. Run the `az spring connection create` command to connect application deployed to Azure Spring Apps to a Blob Storage resource, using a system-assigned managed identity.
 

articles/service-connector/quickstart-portal-spring-cloud-connection.md

@@ -14,12 +14,11 @@ ms.custom:
 
 # Quickstart: Create a service connection in Azure Spring Apps from the Azure portal
 
-[!INCLUDE [deprecation-note](../spring-apps/includes/deprecation-note.md)]
+This quickstart shows you how to connect Azure Spring Apps to other Cloud resources using the Azure portal and Service Connector. Service Connector streamlines the process of linking compute services to cloud services, while managing authentication and networking settings.
 
-This quickstart shows you how to connect Azure Spring Apps to other Cloud resources using the Azure portal and Service Connector. Service Connector lets you quickly connect compute services to cloud services, while managing your connection's authentication and networking settings.
+[!INCLUDE [deprecation-note](../spring-apps/includes/deprecation-note.md)]
 
-> [!NOTE]
-> For information on connecting resources using Azure CLI, see [Create a service connection in Azure Spring Apps with the Azure CLI](./quickstart-cli-spring-cloud-connection.md).
+To connect resources using the Azure CLI, see [Create a service connection in Azure Spring Apps with the Azure CLI](./quickstart-cli-spring-cloud-connection.md).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/service-connector/tutorial-passwordless.md

@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ To begin using the Azure CLI:
 
 1. Deploy your application to an Azure hosting service. Optionally refer to the guides below for more information about deploying these resources.
 
-   - App Service: [Quickstart: Deploy an ASP.NET web app](../app-service/quickstart-dotnetcore.md).
-   - Spring Apps:[Build and deploy the app](/azure/developer/java/spring-framework/deploy-passwordless-spring-database-app?#build-and-deploy-the-app).
+   - AAzure pp Service: [Quickstart: Deploy an ASP.NET web app](../app-service/quickstart-dotnetcore.md).
+   - Azure Container Apps: [Quickstart: Deploy your first container app](../container-apps/get-started.md).
+   - Azure Spring Apps: [Build and deploy the app](/azure/developer/java/spring-framework/deploy-passwordless-spring-database-app?#build-and-deploy-the-app).
        [!INCLUDE [deprecation-note](../spring-apps/includes/deprecation-note.md)]
-   - Container Apps:[Quickstart: Deploy your first container app](../container-apps/get-started.md).
 
 1. Check the log or call the application to see if it can connect to the Azure database successfully.