Merge pull request #187265 from JnHs/jh-lh-mktup22

refresh terminology

Author: GitHubber17

articles/lighthouse/concepts/managed-services-offers.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Managed Service offers in Azure Marketplace
 description: Offer your Azure Lighthouse management services to customers through Managed Services offers in Azure Marketplace.
-ms.date: 09/08/2021
+ms.date: 02/02/2022
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ---
 
@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@ This article describes the **Managed Service** offer type in [Azure Marketplace]
 
 Managed Service offers streamline the process of onboarding customers to Azure Lighthouse. When a customer purchases an offer in Azure Marketplace, they'll be able to specify which subscriptions and/or resource groups should be onboarded.
 
-For each offer, you define the access that users in your organization will have to work on resources in the customer tenant. This is done through a manifest that specifies the Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) users, groups, and service principals that will have access to customer resources, along with [roles](tenants-users-roles.md) that define their level of access.
+For each offer, you define the access that users in your organization will have to work on resources in the customer tenant. This is done through a manifest that specifies the Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) users, groups, and service principals that will have access to customer resources, along with [roles](tenants-users-roles.md#role-support-for-azure-lighthouse) that define their level of access.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Managed Service offers may not be available in Azure Government and other national clouds.
 
-## Public and private offers
+## Public and private plans
 
 Each Managed Service offer includes one or more plans. Plans can be either private or public.
 
-If you want to limit your offer to specific customers, you can publish a private plan. When you do so, the plan can only be purchased for the specific subscription IDs that you provide. For more info, see [Private offers](../../marketplace/private-offers.md).
+If you want to limit your offer to specific customers, you can publish a private plan. When you do so, the plan can only be purchased for the specific subscription IDs that you provide. For more info, see [Private plans](../../marketplace/private-plans.md).
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Private offers are not supported with subscriptions established through a reseller of the Cloud Solution Provider (CSP) program.
+> Private plans are not supported with subscriptions established through a reseller of the Cloud Solution Provider (CSP) program.
 
 Public plans let you promote your services to new customers. These are usually more appropriate when you only require limited access to the customer's tenant. Once you've established a relationship with a customer, if they decide to grant your organization additional access, you can do so either by publishing a new private plan for that customer only, or by [onboarding them for further access using Azure Resource Manager templates](../how-to/onboard-customer.md).
 

articles/lighthouse/how-to/publish-managed-services-offers.md

@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 ---
 title: Publish a Managed Service offer to Azure Marketplace
 description: Learn how to publish a Managed Service offer that onboards customers to Azure Lighthouse.
-ms.date: 08/10/2021
+ms.date: 02/02/2022
 ms.topic: how-to
 ---
 
 # Publish a Managed Service offer to Azure Marketplace
 
-In this article, you'll learn how to publish a public or private Managed Service offer to [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com) using the [Commercial Marketplace](../../marketplace/overview.md) program in Partner Center. Customers who purchase the offer will then delegate subscriptions or resource groups, allowing you to manage them through [Azure Lighthouse](../overview.md).
+In this article, you'll learn how to publish a public or private Managed Service offer to [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com) using the [commercial marketplace](../../marketplace/overview.md) program in Partner Center. Customers who purchase the offer will then delegate subscriptions or resource groups, allowing you to manage them through [Azure Lighthouse](../overview.md).
 
 ## Publishing requirements
 
-You need to have a valid [account in Partner Center](../../marketplace/create-account.md) to create and publish offers. If you don't have an account already, the [sign-up process](https://aka.ms/joinmarketplace) will lead you through the steps of creating an account in Partner Center and enrolling in the Commercial Marketplace program.
+You need to have a valid [account in Partner Center](../../marketplace/create-account.md) to create and publish offers. If you don't have an account already, the [sign-up process](https://aka.ms/joinmarketplace) will lead you through the steps of creating an account in Partner Center and enrolling in the commercial marketplace program.
 
 Per the [Managed Service offer certification requirements](/legal/marketplace/certification-policies#700-managed-services), you must have a [Silver or Gold Cloud Platform competency level](/partner-center/learn-about-competencies) or be an [Azure Expert MSP](https://partner.microsoft.com/membership/azure-expert-msp) in order to publish a Managed Service offer. You must also [enter a lead destination that will create a record in your CRM system](../../marketplace/plan-managed-service-offer.md#customer-leads) each time a customer deploys your offer.
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The following table can help determine whether to onboard customers by publishin
 |Requires [Partner Center account](../../marketplace/create-account.md)   |Yes         |No        |
 |Requires [Silver or Gold Cloud Platform competency level](/partner-center/learn-about-competencies) or [Azure Expert MSP](https://partner.microsoft.com/membership/azure-expert-msp)      |Yes         |No         |
 |Available to new customers through Azure Marketplace     |Yes     |No       |
-|Can limit offer to specific customers     |Yes (only with private offers, which can't be used with subscriptions established through a reseller of the Cloud Solution Provider (CSP) program)         |Yes         |
+|Can limit offer to specific customers     |Yes (only with private plans, which can't be used with subscriptions established through a reseller of the Cloud Solution Provider (CSP) program)         |Yes         |
 |Requires customer acceptance in Azure portal     |Yes     |No   |
 |Can use automation to onboard multiple subscriptions, resource groups, or customers |No     |Yes    |
 |Immediate access to new built-in roles and Azure Lighthouse features     |Not always (generally available after some delay)         |Yes         |
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ The following table can help determine whether to onboard customers by publishin
 
 For detailed instructions about how to create your offer, including all of the information and assets you'll need to provide, see [Create a Managed Service offer](../../marketplace/create-managed-service-offer.md).
 
-To learn about the general publishing process, review the [Commercial Marketplace documentation](../../marketplace/overview.md). You should also review the [commercial marketplace certification policies](/legal/marketplace/certification-policies), particularly the [Managed Services](/legal/marketplace/certification-policies#700-managed-services) section.
+To learn about the general publishing process, review the [commercial marketplace documentation](../../marketplace/overview.md). You should also review the [commercial marketplace certification policies](/legal/marketplace/certification-policies), particularly the [Managed Services](/legal/marketplace/certification-policies#700-managed-services) section.
 
 Once a customer adds your offer, they will be able to delegate one or more subscriptions or resource groups, which will then be [onboarded to Azure Lighthouse](#the-customer-onboarding-process).
 
@@ -46,18 +46,18 @@ Once a customer adds your offer, they will be able to delegate one or more subsc
 
 ## Publish your offer
 
-Once you've completed all of the sections, your next step is to publish the offer to Azure Marketplace. Select the **Publish** button to initiate the process of making your offer live. More info about this process can be found [here](../../marketplace/review-publish-offer.md).
+Once you've completed all of the sections, your next step is to publish the offer. After you initiate the publishing process, your offer will go through several validation and publishing steps. For more information, see [Review and publish an offer to the commercial marketplace](../../marketplace/review-publish-offer.md)
 
-You can [publish an updated version of your offer](../../marketplace/update-existing-offer.md) at any time. For example, you may want to add a new role definition to a previously-published offer. When you do so, customers who have already added the offer will see an icon in the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal that lets them know an update is available. Each customer will be able to [review the changes](view-manage-service-providers.md#update-service-provider-offers) and decide whether they want to update to the new version. 
+You can [publish an updated version of your offer](../../marketplace/update-existing-offer.md) at any time. For example, you may want to add a new role definition to a previously-published offer. When you do so, customers who have already added the offer will see an icon in the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal that lets them know an update is available. Each customer will be able to [review the changes and update to the new version](view-manage-service-providers.md#update-service-provider-offers).
 
 ## The customer onboarding process
 
-After a customer adds your offer, they'll be able to [delegate one or more specific subscriptions or resource groups](view-manage-service-providers.md#delegate-resources), which will then be onboarded to Azure Lighthouse. If a customer has accepted an offer but has not yet delegated any resources, they'll see a note at the top of the **Provider offers** section of the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal.
+After a customer adds your offer, they can [delegate one or more specific subscriptions or resource groups](view-manage-service-providers.md#delegate-resources), which will be onboarded to Azure Lighthouse. If a customer has accepted an offer but has not yet delegated any resources, they'll see a note at the top of the **Provider offers** section of the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Delegation must be done by a non-guest account in the customer's tenant who has a role with the `Microsoft.Authorization/roleAssignments/write` permission, such as [Owner](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#owner), for the subscription being onboarded (or which contains the resource groups that are being onboarded). To find users who can delegate the subscription, a user in the customer's tenant can select the subscription in the Azure portal, open **Access control (IAM)**, and [view all users with the Owner role](../../role-based-access-control/role-assignments-list-portal.md#list-owners-of-a-subscription).
 
-Once the customer delegates a subscription (or one or more resource groups within a subscription), the **Microsoft.ManagedServices** resource provider will be registered for that subscription, and users in your tenant will be able to access the delegated resources according to the authorizations in your offer.
+Once the customer delegates a subscription (or one or more resource groups within a subscription), the **Microsoft.ManagedServices** resource provider will be registered for that subscription, and users in your tenant will be able to access the delegated resources according to the authorizations that you defined in your offer.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > To delegate additional subscriptions or resource groups to the same offer at a later time, the customer will need to [manually register the **Microsoft.ManagedServices** resource provider](../../azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types.md#register-resource-provider) on each subscription before delegating.
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ If you publish an updated version of your offer, the customer can [review the ch
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- Learn about the [Commercial Marketplace](../../marketplace/overview.md).
+- Learn about the [commercial marketplace](../../marketplace/overview.md).
 - [Link your partner ID](partner-earned-credit.md) to track your impact across customer engagements.
 - Learn about [cross-tenant management experiences](../concepts/cross-tenant-management-experience.md).
 - [View and manage customers](view-manage-customers.md) by going to **My customers** in the Azure portal.

articles/marketplace/create-managed-service-offer-plans.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.reviewer: brwrigh
 ms.service: marketplace
 ms.subservice: partnercenter-marketplace-publisher
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 07/12/2021
+ms.date: 02/02/2022
 ---
 
 # Create plans for a Managed Service offer
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ To add up to 10,000 subscription IDs with a .CSV file:
 
 ## Technical configuration
 
-This section creates a manifest with authorization information for managing customer resources. This information is required in order to enable [Azure delegated resource management](../lighthouse/concepts/architecture.md).
+This section creates a manifest with authorization information for Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) user accounts. This information is required in order to enable access to the customer's resources through [Azure Lighthouse](../lighthouse/overview.md).
 
 Review [Tenants, roles, and users in Azure Lighthouse scenarios](../lighthouse/concepts/tenants-users-roles.md#best-practices-for-defining-users-and-roles) to understand which roles are supported and the best practices for defining your authorizations.
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ Review [Tenants, roles, and users in Azure Lighthouse scenarios](../lighthouse/c
 ### Manifest
 
 1. Under **Manifest**, provide a **Version** for the manifest. Use the format n.n.n (for example, 1.2.5).
-2. Enter your **Tenant ID**. This is a GUID associated with the Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) tenant ID of your organization; that is, the managing tenant from which you will access your customers' resources. If you don't have this handy, you can find it by hovering over your account name on the upper right-hand side of the Azure portal, or by selecting **Switch directory**.
+2. Enter your **Tenant ID**. This is a GUID associated with the Azure AD tenant ID of your organization; that is, the managing tenant from which you will access your customers' resources. If you don't have this handy, you can find it by hovering over your account name on the upper right-hand side of the Azure portal, or by selecting **Switch directory**.
 
 If you publish a new version of your offer and need to create an updated manifest, select **+ New manifest**. Be sure to increase the version number from the previous manifest version.
 

articles/marketplace/plan-managed-service-offer.md

@@ -7,14 +7,14 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 author: Microsoft-BradleyWright
 ms.author: brwrigh
 ms.reviewer: anbene
-ms.date: 12/06/2021
+ms.date: 02/02/2022
 ---
 
 # Plan a Managed Service offer
 
 This article introduces the requirements for publishing a Managed Service offer to the commercial marketplace using Partner Center.
 
-Managed Services are Azure Marketplace offers that enable cross-tenant and multi-tenant management with Azure Lighthouse. To learn more, see [What is Azure Lighthouse?](../lighthouse/overview.md) When a customer purchases a Managed Service offer, they’re able to delegate one or more subscription or resource group. You can then work on those resources by using the [Azure delegated resource management](../lighthouse/concepts/architecture.md) capabilities of Azure Lighthouse.
+Managed Services are Azure Marketplace offers that enable cross-tenant and multi-tenant management with Azure Lighthouse. To learn more, see [What is Azure Lighthouse?](../lighthouse/overview.md) When a customer purchases a Managed Service offer, they’re able to delegate one or more subscription or resource group. You can then work on those resources by using [Azure Lighthouse](../lighthouse/overview.md).
 
 ## Eligibility requirements