Merge pull request #300512 from ProfessorKendrick/edits0528

[Liftr] Azure portal article guidance updates

Author: JillGrant615

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/add-confluent-connectors.md

@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ A notification is displayed on the top right, calling out the status of the depl
 ## Manage Azure Confluent Connectors (preview)
 
 1. Open your Confluent organization and select **Confluent** > **Confluent Connectors** from the left menu.
-1. Select your **Environment** and **Cluster** from the dropdown menu. The Azure portal now displays the list of Azure connectors in the respective environment and cluster. The following optional actions are available:
+1. Select your **Environment** and **Cluster** from the dropdown menu. The Azure portal now shows the list of Azure connectors in the respective environment and cluster. The following optional actions are available:
 
    * Filter connectors by **Type** (**Source** or **Sink**) and **Status** (**Running**, **Failed**, **Provisioning, or **Paused**).
    * Search for a connector by entering a name in the search bar on the right hand side.

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/create-cli.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Use the Azure portal to find the Apache Kafka & Apache Flink on Confluent Cloud
 
 1. In a web browser, go to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and sign in.
 
-1. If you've visited the **Marketplace** in a recent session, select the icon from the available options. Otherwise, search for _Marketplace_.
+1. If you've gone to the **Marketplace** in a recent session, select the icon from the available options. Otherwise, search for _Marketplace_.
 
 1. From the **Marketplace** page, you have two options based on the type of plan you want. You can sign up for a pay-as-you-go plan or commitment plan. Pay-as-you-go is publicly available. The commitment plan is available to customers who have been approved for a private offer.
 

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/create-confluent-resources.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.date: 11/22/2024
 
 # Create Confluent resources in Azure (preview)
 
-The next step after creating a Confluent Organization is to create other Confluent constructs such as environments, clusters, and topics. This can be done directly in Azure and is a prerequisite to creating Confluent connectors. The feature presented in this article is in preview.
+The next step after creating a Confluent Organization is to create other Confluent constructs like environments, clusters, and topics. This can be done directly in Azure and is a prerequisite to creating Confluent connectors. The feature presented in this article is in preview.
 
 ## Environments
 
@@ -52,19 +52,19 @@ If you no longer need to use an environment and the clusters operating within it
 > [!NOTE]
 > Azure only supports deleting environments created in Azure. To delete an environment created in Confluent, use the Confluent UI.
 
-From the list of environments, select the ellipsis action (**…**) next to the name of the environment you want to delete and select **Delete Environment**. Alternatively, click on the name of the environment you want to delete and then select **Delete Environment** at the top. A right pane opens up, listing the environment's nested clusters, connectors, and their status. Confirm deletion by entering the environment name in the text box at the bottom and selecting **Delete**. Confirm again. Your environment is now deleted. 
+From the list of environments, select the ellipsis action (**…**) next to the name of the environment you want to delete and select **Delete Environment**. Alternatively, select the name of the environment you want to delete and then select **Delete Environment** at the top. A right pane opens up, listing the environment's nested clusters, connectors, and their status. Confirm deletion by entering the environment name in the text box at the bottom and selecting **Delete**. Confirm again. Your environment is now deleted. 
 
 
 ## Clusters
 
-Similar to environments, you can have multiple clusters within a single environment. These clusters are available in various configurations: basic, standard, enterprise, and dedicated. The pricing and feature support for clusters vary depending on the type of cluster. For more information on the cluster types, go to [Confluent Cloud Cluster Types](https://docs.confluent.io/cloud/current/clusters/cluster-types.html). 
+Similar to environments, you can have multiple clusters within a single environment. These clusters are available in different configurations: basic, standard, enterprise, and dedicated. The pricing and feature support for clusters vary depending on the type of cluster. For more information on the cluster types, go to [Confluent Cloud Cluster Types](https://docs.confluent.io/cloud/current/clusters/cluster-types.html). 
 
 ### Create a cluster 
 
 Select **Create Cluster** in the top ribbon of your environment page. A new window opens up. 
 
 1. Select or enter the following information in the **Basics** tab:
-   - Confluent resource details: Use the pre-populated default values of the organization and environment, or optionally modify the environment name to create the new cluster in another environment.
+   - Confluent resource details: Use the pre-populated default values of the organization and environment, or optionally change the environment name to create the new cluster in another environment.
    - Cluster:
      - Cluster name: Enter a name for the new cluster.
      - Cluster type: Select between **Basic**, **Standard**, and **Enterprise**. Select the hyperlink to view a detailed comparison of each plan.
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ To view the clusters in your Confluent organization:
 
 ### Manage connectors 
 
-Connectors are nested within the clusters. To manage these connectors and monitor their health and status, click on your cluster name and select **Manage Connector** in the top ribbon within the cluster. This action opens the **Confluent Connectors** blade that displays all existing connectors. 
+Connectors are nested within the clusters. To manage these connectors and monitor their health and status, select your cluster name and select **Manage Connector** in the top ribbon within the cluster. This action opens the **Confluent Connectors** blade that shows all existing connectors. 
 
 Back in the cluster pane, to further manage your cluster for advanced configurations, select **Manage cluster in Confluent portal** at the top, which opens the Confluent UI.  
 
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ Follow the instructions below to delete a topic, once you no longer need it.
 In the **Environments (Preview)** menu, open a cluster, then the topic you want to delete, and select **Delete Topic** in the top ribbon. Enter the topic name to confirm the operation. Your topic is now deleted. 
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Azure only supports deleting topics created in Azure. To delete a topics created in Confluent, use the Confluent UI.
+> Azure only supports deleting topics created in Azure. To delete a topic created in Confluent, use the Confluent UI.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/create-powershell.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Use the Azure portal to find the Apache Kafka & Apache Flink on Confluent Cloud
 
 1. In a web browser, go to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and sign in.
 
-1. If you've visited the **Marketplace** in a recent session, select the icon from the available options. Otherwise, search for _Marketplace_.
+1. If you've gone to the **Marketplace** in a recent session, select the icon from the available options. Otherwise, search for _Marketplace_.
 
 1. From the **Marketplace** page, you have two options based on the type of plan you want. You can sign up for a pay-as-you-go plan or commitment plan. Pay-as-you-go is publicly available. The commitment plan is available to customers who have been approved for a private offer.
 

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/overview.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Apache Kafka & Apache Flink on Confluent Cloud is an Azure Marketplace offering
 
 To reduce the burden of cross-platform management, Microsoft partnered with Confluent Cloud to build an integrated provisioning layer from Azure to Confluent Cloud. It provides a consolidated experience for using Confluent Cloud on Azure. You can easily integrate and manage Confluent Cloud with your Azure applications.
 
-Previously, you had to purchase the Confluent Cloud offering in the Marketplace and separately set up the account in Confluent Cloud. To manage configurations and resources, you had to navigate between the portals for Azure and Confluent Cloud.
+Previously, you had to buy the Confluent Cloud offering in the Marketplace and separately set up the account in Confluent Cloud. To manage configurations and resources, you had to navigate between the portals for Azure and Confluent Cloud.
 
 Now, you provision the Confluent Cloud resources through a resource provider named **Microsoft.Confluent**. You create and manage Confluent Cloud organization resources through the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/), [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/), or [Azure SDKs](/azure#languages-and-tools). Confluent Cloud owns and runs the software as a service (SaaS) application, including the environments, clusters, topics, API keys, and managed connectors.
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Each Azure subscription can contain multiple Confluent plans. Each Confluent pla
 
 When you provision a Confluent Cloud resource in Azure, you get a Confluent organization ID, default environment, and user account. For more information, see [QuickStart: Get started with Confluent Cloud on Azure](create.md).
 
-Each Confluent Cloud offer purchased in the Marketplace maps to a unique Confluent organization for billing.
+Each Confluent Cloud offer you buy in Azure Marketplace maps to a unique Confluent organization for billing.
 
 ## Single sign-on
 

articles/partner-solutions/apache-kafka-confluent-cloud/troubleshoot.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 1/31/2024
 
 This document contains information about troubleshooting your solutions that use Apache Kafka® & Apache Flink® on Confluent Cloud™ - An Azure Native ISV Service.
 
-If you don't find an answer or can't resolve a problem, [create a request through the Azure portal](get-support.md) or contact [Confluent support](https://support.confluent.io).
+If you don't find an answer or can't fix a problem, [create a request through the Azure portal](get-support.md) or contact [Confluent support](https://support.confluent.io).
 
 ## Can't find offer in the Marketplace
 
@@ -54,13 +54,13 @@ This error could be an intermittent problem with the Azure portal. Try to deploy
 
 ## Unable to delete
 
-If you're unable to delete Confluent resources, verify you have permissions to delete the resource. You must be allowed to take Microsoft.Confluent/*/Delete actions. For information about viewing permissions, see [List Azure role assignments using the Azure portal](../../role-based-access-control/role-assignments-list-portal.yml).
+If you're unable to delete Confluent resources, check that you have permissions to delete the resource. You must be allowed to take Microsoft.Confluent/*/Delete actions. For information about viewing permissions, see [List Azure role assignments using the Azure portal](../../role-based-access-control/role-assignments-list-portal.yml).
 
 If you have the correct permissions but still can't delete the resource, contact [Confluent support](https://support.confluent.io). This condition might be related to Confluent's retention policy. Confluent support can delete the organization and email address for you.
 
 ## Unable to use single sign-on
 
-If SSO isn't working for the Confluent Cloud SaaS portal, verify you're using the correct Microsoft Entra ID email. You must also have consented to allow access for the Confluent Cloud software as a service (SaaS) portal. 
+If SSO isn't working for the Confluent Cloud SaaS portal, check that you're using the correct Microsoft Entra ID email. You must also have consented to allow access for the Confluent Cloud software as a service (SaaS) portal. 
 
 If the problem persists, contact [Confluent support](https://support.confluent.io).
 

articles/partner-solutions/arize-ai/manage.md

@@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ To manage your resource, select the links next to corresponding details.
 
 ## Get support
 
-Contact [Arize](https://arize.com/contact/) for customer support. You can also visit the [Slack Support Community](https://arize-ai.slack.com/ssb/redirect) for more help. 
+Contact [Arize](https://arize.com/contact/) for customer support. You can also go to the [Slack Support Community](https://arize-ai.slack.com/ssb/redirect) for more help. 

articles/partner-solutions/astronomer/troubleshoot.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.date: 02/14/2024
 
 # Troubleshooting Astro integration with Azure
 
-You can get support for your Astro  deployment through a **New Support request**. For further assistance, visit the [Astronomer Support](https://support.astronomer.io). In addition, this article includes  troubleshooting for problems you might experience in creating and using an Astro resource.
+You can get support for your Astro  deployment through a **New Support request**. For further assistance, go to the [Astronomer Support](https://support.astronomer.io). In addition, this article includes  troubleshooting for problems you might experience in creating and using an Astro resource.
 
 ## Getting support
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ If the deployment fails and the Astro resource has a status of `Failed`, delete
 
 ### Unable to use Single sign-on
 
-If SSO isn't working for the Astronomer portal, verify you're using the correct Microsoft Entra email. You must also have consented to allow access for the Astronomer Software as a service (SaaS) portal.
+If SSO isn't working for the Astronomer portal, check that you're using the correct Microsoft Entra email. You must also have consented to allow access for the Astronomer Software as a service (SaaS) portal.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > If you are seeing an Admin consent screen along with the User consent during your first-time login using the SSO Url, then please check your [tenant consent settings](/azure/active-directory/manage-apps/configure-user-consent?pivots=portal).
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ For more information, see the [single sign-on guidance](manage.md#single-sign-on
 
 ### Unable to install Astro using a personal email
 
-Installing Apache Airflow on Astro from the Azure Marketplace using a personal email from a generic domain isn't supported. To install this service, use an email address with a unique domain, such as an email address associated with work or school, or start by creating a new user in Azure and make this user a subscription owner. For more information, see [Install Astro from the Azure Marketplace using a personal email](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/install-azure#install-astro-from-the-azure-marketplace-using-a-personal-email).
+Installing Apache Airflow on Astro from the Azure Marketplace using a personal email from a generic domain isn't supported. To install this service, use an email address with a unique domain, like an email address associated with work or school, or start by creating a new user in Azure and make this user a subscription owner. For more information, see [Install Astro from the Azure Marketplace using a personal email](https://docs.astronomer.io/astro/install-azure#install-astro-from-the-azure-marketplace-using-a-personal-email).
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/partner-solutions/datadog/link-to-existing-organization.md

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. Select the **+ Create** option under **Link Azure subscription to an existing Datadog org**.
 
-The **Create** resource pane displays in the working pane with the *Basics* tab open by default.
+The **Create** resource pane shows in the working pane with the *Basics* tab open by default.
 
 ### Basics tab
 

articles/partner-solutions/datadog/manage.md

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Below the essentials, you can navigate to other details about your resource by s
 
 - **View Dashboards** provides insights on health and performance.
 - **View Logs** allows you to search and analyze logs using adhoc queries.
-- **View host maps** provides a complete view of all hosts (VMs, VMSS, App service plans)
+- **View host maps** provides a complete view of all hosts (Azure Virtual Machines, Azure Virtual Machine Scale Sets, Azure App service plans)
 
 A summary of resources is also displayed in the working pane. 
 
@@ -53,11 +53,11 @@ A summary of resources is also displayed in the working pane.
 
 To change the configuration rules for metrics and logs:
 
-1. Select **Datadog organization configurations > Metrics and Logs** from the Resource menu.
+1. Select **Datadog organization configurations > Metrics and Logs** from the service menu.
 
 ## View monitored resources
 
-To view the list of resources emitting logs to Datadog, select **Datadog organization configurations > Monitored Resources** in the Resource menu.
+To view the list of resources emitting logs to Datadog, select **Datadog organization configurations > Monitored Resources** in the service menu.
 
 > [!TIP]
 > You can filter the list of resources by resource type, subscription, resource group name, location, and whether the resource is sending logs and metrics. 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ To monitor multiple subscriptions:
 
 1. Select **Add subscriptions** from the Command bar.
 
-    The **Add Subscriptions** experience that opens and displays subscriptions you have _Owner_ role assigned to and any Datadog resource created in those subscriptions that is already linked to the same Datadog organization as the current resource.
+    The **Add Subscriptions** experience that opens and shows subscriptions you have _Owner_ role assigned to and any Datadog resource created in those subscriptions that is already linked to the same Datadog organization as the current resource.
 
     If the subscription you want to monitor has a resource already linked to the same Datadog org, delete the Datadog resources to avoid shipping duplicate data and incurring double the charges.
 
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ Once the subscription is added, the status changes to *Active*.
 
 To unlink subscriptions from a Datadog resource:
 
-1. Select **Datadog organization configurations > Monitored Subscriptions** from the Resource menu. 
+1. Select **Datadog organization configurations > Monitored Subscriptions** from the service menu. 
 
 1. Select the subscription you want to remove.
 
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ To view the updated list of monitored subscriptions, select **Refresh** from the
 
 To view the list of API keys for your Datadog resource:
 
-1. Select **Settings > Keys** from the Resource menu.
+1. Select **Settings > Keys** from the service menu.
 
     The Azure portal provides a read-only view of the API keys.