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Author: Padmalathas

articles/cyclecloud/qs-install-marketplace.md

@@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ ms.author: adjohnso
 
 # Quickstart - Install CycleCloud using the Marketplace image
 
-Azure CycleCloud is a free application that provides a simple, secure, and scalable way to manage compute and storage resources for HPC and Big Compute workloads. In this quickstart, you will install CycleCloud on Azure resources using the Marketplace image. 
+Azure CycleCloud is a free application that provides a simple, secure, and scalable way to manage compute and storage resources for HPC and Big Compute workloads. In this quickstart, you install CycleCloud on Azure resources using the Marketplace image. 
 
-The CycleCloud Marketplace image is the recommended way of installing CycleCloud and it is the easiest way to quickly get a working version of CycleCloud that will allow you to start and scale clusters. CycleCloud can also be installed manually, providing greater control over the installation and configuration process. For more information, see the [Manual CycleCloud Installation Quickstart](./how-to/install-manual.md)
+The CycleCloud Marketplace image is the easiest and recommended way to install CycleCloud. It helps you quickly start and scale clusters. CycleCloud can also be installed manually, providing greater control over the installation and configuration process. For more information, see the [Manual CycleCloud Installation Quickstart](./how-to/install-manual.md)
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-For this quickstart, you will need:
+For this quickstart, you need:
 
 1. An Azure account with an active subscription.
-1. A SSH key
+1. An SSH key
 
 [!INCLUDE [cloud-shell-try-it.md](~/articles/cyclecloud/includes/cloud-shell-try-it.md)]
 
@@ -35,40 +35,40 @@ Retrieve the SSH public key with:
 cat ~/.ssh/id_rsa.pub
 ```
 
-The output will begin with ssh-rsa followed by a long string of characters. Copy and save this key now.
+The output begins with ssh-rsa followed by a long string of characters. Copy and save this key for reference.
 
 On Linux, follow [these instructions on GitHub](https://help.github.com/articles/generating-a-new-ssh-key-and-adding-it-to-the-ssh-agent/) to generate a new SSH keypair.
 
 ## Create Virtual Machine
 
-1. Log into the [Azure Portal](https://ms.portal.azure.com)
+1. Login to the [Azure portal](https://ms.portal.azure.com)
 1. In the search bar, enter "CycleCloud" and select "Azure CycleCloud" from under the **Marketplace** category
 1. Click on the **Create** button to bring up the Create Virtual Machine form.
 
 ![Create CycleCloud VM](~/articles/cyclecloud/images/create-cyclecloud-vm.png)
 
 ### Customize CycleCloud instance
 
-1. Choose your subscription from the **Subscription** dropdown
-1. Select or create a new **Resource Group** that your CycleCloud instance will run in.
+1. Choose your subscription from the **Subscription** dropdown.
+1. Select or create a new **Resource Group** that your CycleCloud instance runs in.
 1. Name your CycleCloud instance using **Virtual Machine name**
 1. Select the **Region**
-1. Create the **Username** that you will use to log into the instance
+1. Create the **Username** you’ll use to sign in to the instance
 1. Add your **SSH public key**
-1. If you are planning on using [Managed Identities](/azure/active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview) (recommended), Select the **Management** tab and enable **System assigned managed identity**.
+1. If you're planning on using [Managed Identities](/azure/active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview) (recommended), Select the **Management** tab and enable **System assigned managed identity**.
 1. Click on the **Review** button and then the **Create** button
 
-The image has a number of recommended default settings including **Size** and built-in **Network Security Groups**. These can be modified if necessary.
+The image has many recommended default settings including **Size** and built-in **Network Security Groups**. These settings can be modified if necessary.
 
 ![Customize CycleCloud instance](~/articles/cyclecloud/images/customize-marketplace-image.png)
 
 ## Assign Managed Identity
 
-If you are using Managed Identities for authentication, you should follow the [Managed Identities Guide](./how-to/managed-identities.md) to assign the system managed identity to the newly created application VM.
+If you're using Managed Identities for authentication, you should follow the [Managed Identities Guide](./how-to/managed-identities.md) to assign the system managed identity to the newly created application VM.
 
 ## Log into the CycleCloud Application Server
 
-To connect to the CycleCloud webserver, retrieve the public IP address of the CycleServer VM from the Azure Portal.
+To connect to the CycleCloud webserver, retrieve the public IP address of the CycleServer VM from the Azure portal.
 
 ![Get Public IP address](~/articles/cyclecloud/images/get-public-ip.png)
 
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ Create a **Site Name** for your installation. You can use any name here:
 ![Welcome Screen](./images/version-8/setup-step1.png)
 ::: moniker-end
 
-The Azure CycleCloud End User License Agreement will be displayed - click to accept it. 
+The Azure CycleCloud End User License Agreement is displayed - click to accept it. 
 
 ::: moniker range="=cyclecloud-7"
 ![License Screen](./images/version-7/setup-step2.png)
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ The Azure CycleCloud End User License Agreement will be displayed - click to acc
 ![License Screen](./images/version-8/setup-step2.png)
 ::: moniker-end
 
-You will then need to create a CycleCloud admin user for the application server. We recommend using the same username used above. Ensure the password you enter meets the requirements listed. Click **Done** to continue.
+Create a CycleCloud admin user for the application server. Use the same username you entered earlier, if possible. Make sure the password meets the listed requirements. Click **Done** to continue.
 
 ::: moniker range="=cyclecloud-7"
 ![Administrator Account setup](./images/version-7/setup-step3.png)
@@ -105,11 +105,11 @@ You will then need to create a CycleCloud admin user for the application server.
 ![Administrator Account setup](./images/version-8/setup-step3.png)
 ::: moniker-end
 
-Once you have created your user, you may want to set your SSH key so that you can more easily access any Linux VMs created by CycleCloud. To add an SSH key, edit your profile by clicking on your name in the upper right hand corner of the screen.
+Once you've created your user, you may want to set your SSH key so that you can more easily access any Linux VMs created by CycleCloud. To add an SSH key, edit your profile by clicking on your name in the upper right hand corner of the screen.
 
-You will need to set up your Azure provider account in CycleCloud. You can either use [Managed Identities](./how-to/managed-identities.md) or [Service Principals](./how-to/service-principals.md).
+You need to set up your Azure provider account in CycleCloud. You can either use [Managed Identities](./how-to/managed-identities.md) or [Service Principals](./how-to/service-principals.md).
 
-You should now have a running CycleCloud application that allows you to create and run clusters.
+You now, have a running CycleCloud application that allows you to create and run clusters.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > The default CycleCloud configuration may be customized for specific environments using settings in the _$CS_HOME/config/cycle_server.properties_ file.