Merge pull request #221200 from mksuni/redismysql-tutorial

Update tutorial-add-redis-to-mysql.md

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/mysql/flexible-server/tutorial-add-redis-to-mysql.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: 'Quickstart: Boost performance for Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server with Redis'
-description: "This tutorial shows how to add Redis cache to boost performance for your Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server."
+title: 'Quickstart: Boost performance for Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server with Azure Cache for Redis'
+description: "This tutorial shows how to add Azure Cache for Redis to boost performance for your Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server."
 ms.service: mysql
 ms.subservice: flexible-server
 ms.topic: quickstart
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ ms.author: sumuth
 ms.date: 12/07/2022
 ---
 
-# Tutorial: Boost performance of Azure Database for MySQL flexible Server with Azure cache for Redis
+# Tutorial: Boost performance of Azure Database for MySQL flexible Server with Azure Cache for Redis
 
 [!INCLUDE[applies-to-mysql-flexible-server](../includes/applies-to-mysql-flexible-server.md)]
 
@@ -54,22 +54,22 @@ INSERT INTO tasks (id,title, completed) VALUES
 
 [!INCLUDE [redis-cache-create](../../azure-cache-for-redis/includes/redis-cache-create.md)]
 
-## Caching result of query using Python
+## Use Redis with Python
 
 Install the latest version of [Python](https://www.python.org/) on your local environment or on an Azure virtual machine or Azure App Service. Use pip to install redis-py.
 
 ```python
 pip install redis
 ```
 
-The following code creates a connection to Redis using redis-py, stores the query result into the redis cache and fetch the value from the cache.
+The following code creates a connection to Azure Cache for Redis instance using redis-py, stores the query result into the Azure Cache for Redis and fetch the value from the cache.
 
 ```python
 import redis
 import mysql.connector
 
 r = redis.Redis(
-    host='your-azure-redis-server-name.redis.cache.windows.net',
+    host='your-azure-redis-instance-name.redis.cache.windows.net',
     port=6379, 
     password='azure-redis-primary-access-key')
 
@@ -98,14 +98,14 @@ mysqlcnx.close()
 
 Install [PHP](https://www.php.net/manual/en/install.php) on your local environment. Follow the steps below to write a PHP script that caches a SQL query from MySQL database. Here are a few pre-requisites before running the script:
 
-1. Install and enable [Redis PECL extension](https://pecl.php.net/package/redis) to use Redis with your PHP script. See [how to install the extension locally](https://github.com/phpredis/phpredis/blob/develop/INSTALL.md) 
+1. Install and enable [Redis PECL extension](https://pecl.php.net/package/redis) to use Azure Cache for Redis with your PHP script. See [how to install the extension locally](https://github.com/phpredis/phpredis/blob/develop/INSTALL.md) 
 2. Install and enable [MySQL PDO extension](https://www.php.net/manual/en/ref.pdo-mysql.php)
 
 ```php
 <?php
 
 $redis = new Redis();
-$redis->connect('azure-redis-servername.redis.cache.windows.net', 6379);
+$redis->connect('azure-redis-instance-ame.redis.cache.windows.net', 6379);
 $redis->auth('azure-redis-primary-access-key');
 
 $key = 'tasks';
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if (!$redis->get($key)) {
     $redis->expire($key, 10);
 
 } else {
-     /*Pulling data from Redis*/
+     /*Pulling data from Azure Cache for Redis*/
      $tasks = unserialize($redis->get($key));
 
 }
@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ print_r($tasks);
 
 ## Using Redis with WordPress
 
-The benefit of enabling Redis Cache to your WordPress application will allow you to deliver content faster since all of the WordPress content is stored in the database. You can cache content that is mostly read only from WordPress database to make the query lookups faster. You can use either of these plugins to setup Redis.  Install and enable [Redis PECL extension](https://pecl.php.net/package/redis). See [how to install the extension locally](https://github.com/phpredis/phpredis/blob/develop/INSTALL.md) or [how to install the extension in Azure App Service](../../app-service/configure-language-php.md).
+The benefit of enabling Azure Cache for Redis instance to your WordPress application will allow you to deliver content faster since all of the WordPress content is stored in the database. You can cache content that is mostly read only from WordPress database to make the query lookups faster. You can use either of these plugins to setup Redis.  Install and enable [Redis PECL extension](https://pecl.php.net/package/redis). See [how to install the extension locally](https://github.com/phpredis/phpredis/blob/develop/INSTALL.md) or [how to install the extension in Azure App Service](../../app-service/configure-language-php.md).
 
-1. [Redis Object cache](https://wordpress.org/plugins/redis-cache/): Install and activate this plugin. Now update the wp-config.php file right above the statement */* That's all, stop editing! Happy blogging. */**
+Install [Redis Object cache](https://wordpress.org/plugins/redis-cache/) and activate this plugin on our WordPress application. Now update the `wp-config.php` file right above the statement */* That's all, stop editing! Happy blogging. */**
 
 ```php
 define( 'WP_REDIS_HOST', 'azure-redis-servername.redis.cache.windows.net' );
@@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ define( 'WP_REDIS_MAXTTL', 60 * 60 * 24 * 7 );
 
 ```
 
-Go to the Wordpress admin dashboard and select the Redis settings page on the menu. Now select **enable Object Cache**. Plugin will read the redis server information from wp-config.php file.
+Go to the Wordpress admin dashboard and select the Redis settings page on the menu. Now select **enable Object Cache**. Plugin will read the Azure Cache for Redis instance  information from `wp-config.php` file.
 
-You may also use [W3 Total cache](https://wordpress.org/plugins/w3-total-cache/) to configure Redis cache on your WordPress app. You can evaluate the performance improvements using [Query Monitor plugin](https://wordpress.org/plugins/query-monitor/), which allows you to debug database queries and it also shows total database queries grouped by a plugin.  
+You may also use [W3 Total cache](https://wordpress.org/plugins/w3-total-cache/) to configure Azure Cache for Redis on your WordPress app. You can evaluate the performance improvements using [Query Monitor plugin](https://wordpress.org/plugins/query-monitor/), which allows you to debug database queries and it also shows total database queries grouped by a plugin.  
 
 ## Next steps