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articles/migrate/concepts-business-case-calculation.md

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- **Idle servers**: These servers were on but didn't deliver business value by having their CPU and memory utilization below 5% and network utilization below 2%.
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- **Decommission**: These servers were expected to deliver business value, but didn't and can be decommissioned on-premises and recommended to not migrate to Azure:
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- **Zombie**: The CPU, memory and network utilization were 0% with no performance data collection issues.
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- These servers were on but do not have adequate metrics available:
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- These servers were on but don't have adequate metrics available:
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- **Unknown**: Many servers can land in this section if the discovery is still ongoing or has some unaddressed discovery issues.
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## What comprises a business case?
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## What's in a business case?
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Here's what's included in a Business case:
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Here's what's included in a business case:
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### Total cost of ownership (steady state)
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#### On-premises cost
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Cost components for running on-premises servers. For TCO calculations, a one year cost is computed for following heads:
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Cost components for running on-premises servers. For TCO calculations, an annual cost is computed for the following heads:
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**Cost heads** | **Category** | **Component** | **Logic** |
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| Compute | Hardware | Server Hardware (Host machines) | Total hardware acquisition cost is calculated using a cost per core linear regression formula : Cost per core = 16.232*(Hyperthreaded core: memory in GB ratio) + 113.87. Hyperthreaded cores = 2*(cores)
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| Compute | Hardware | Server Hardware (Host machines) | Total hardware acquisition cost is calculated using a cost per core linear regression formula: Cost per core = 16.232*(Hyperthreaded core: memory in GB ratio) + 113.87. Hyperthreaded cores = 2*(cores)
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| | Software - SQL Server licensing | License cost | Calculated per two core pack license pricing of 2019 Enterprise or Standard. |
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| | | Software Assurance | Calculated per year as in settings. |
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| | Software - Windows Server licensing | License cost | Calculated per two corepack license pricing of Windows Server. |

articles/migrate/prepare-for-migration.md

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In this article, you:
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> [!div class="checklist"]
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> * Review migration limitations.
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> * Select a method for migrating VMware vSphere VMs
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> * Select a method for migrating VMware vSphere VMs.
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> * Check hypervisor and operating system requirements for machines you want to migrate.
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> * Review URL and port access for machines you want to migrate.
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If you're migrating VMware vSphere VMs to Azure, [compare](server-migrate-overview.md#compare-migration-methods) the agentless and agent-based migration methods, to decide what works for you.
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If you're migrating VMware vSphere VMs to Azure, [compare](server-migrate-overview.md#compare-migration-methods) the agentless and agent-based migration methods, to decide what works best for you.
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articles/migrate/replicate-using-expressroute.md

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1. On the **Create private DNS zone** page, fill in the required details. Enter the name of the private DNS zone as **_privatelink_.blob.core.windows.net**.
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1. Fill in the required details. The **Subscription** and **Virtual network** fields must be filled with the corresponding details of the virtual network where your private endpoint is attached. The other fields can be left as is.

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