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Author: ronmiab

azure-local/release-information-23h2.md

@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ Starting with the 2504 release, two solutions versions are available each month,
 
 The version numbers shown as 25398.xxxx or 26100.xxxx, are placeholders. Replace **x** with the actual build number applicable to your environment. For example:
 
-- If you update from 2503 to 2504, 2504 has an OS version 25398.1551 and a solution version 11.2504.1001.19.
+- To update from 2503 to 2504, select OS version 25398.1551 which has a solution version 11.2504.1001.19.
 
-- If you install 2504 directly it has an OS version 26100.3775 and solution version 12.2504.1001.20.
+- To install 2504 directly use OS version 26100.3775 and solution version 12.2504.1001.20.
 
 ## Azure Local release information summary