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Author: Manika Dhiman

azure-local/concepts/monitoring-overview.md

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 ## Monitoring capabilities in Azure Local
 
-Azure Local provides monitoring capabilities, which are fully integrated with Azure Monitor. These capabilities provide insights, helps visualize and analyze data, and empower you to respond to incoming monitoring data. The following section provides an overview of what capabilities are available and the benefits they provide.
+Azure Local provides monitoring capabilities fully integrated with Azure Monitor. These capabilities provide insights, helps visualize and analyze data, and empower you to respond to incoming monitoring data. The following sections provide an overview of what capabilities are available and the benefits they provide.
 
 ### Insights
 
-Azure Local Insights collects key performance and health logs and visualizes this collected data in predefined dashboards. These dashboards provide you with a comprehensive visual representation of the overall health of your Azure Local system, including nodes, virtual machines (VMs), and storage. It gives performance and usage visibility into the Azure Local system through CPU and memory usage, network usage, and storage performance like IOPS, throughput, and latency. With Insights for Azure Local, you also get access to specialized workbooks created for monitoring key features of Azure Local, such as Resilient File System (ReFS) deduplication and compression and hardware monitoring for Dell. You can also customize existing workbooks to create new workbooks.
+Azure Local Insights collects key performance and health logs and visualizes this collected data in predefined dashboards. These dashboards provide you with a comprehensive visual representation of the overall health of your Azure Local system, including nodes, virtual machines (VMs), and storage. It gives performance and usage visibility into the Azure Local system through CPU and memory usage, network usage, and storage performance like IOPS, throughput, and latency. With Insights for Azure Local, you also get access to specialized workbooks created for monitoring key features of Azure Local, such as Resilient File System (ReFS) deduplication and compression and hardware monitoring for Dell. You can also customize existing workbooks to create new workbooks. To learn more about these feature workbooks, see [Monitor Azure Local features with Insights](../manage/monitor-features.md).
 
 You can use Insights to monitor either a single Azure Local system or multiple systems simultaneously. Insights collects data using Azure Monitor Agent and then stores the data in a Log Analytics workspace. It uses the Kusto Query Language (KQL) to query the Log Analytics workspace, and the results are visualized using Azure Workbooks. To learn about using Insights to monitor one or more Azure Local systems, see [Monitor a single Azure Local system with Insights](../manage/monitor-single-23h2.md) or [Monitor multiple Azure Local systems with Insights](../manage/monitor-multi-23h2.md).
 
-To learn more about these feature workbooks, see [Monitor Azure Local features with Insights](../manage/monitor-features.md).
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 ### Metrics
 
 Azure Local Metrics collects over 60 key metrics for monitoring your infrastructure, available out-of-the-box and at no extra cost. These metrics include CPU and memory usage, storage performance metrics, such as IOPS, latency and throughput, network throughput, and VM performance metrics. You can view these metrics in Azure Monitor through predefined charts. You can also create custom charts to visualize these metrics based on your preferences. Metrics enables you to store numeric data from your clusters in a dedicated time-series database. To learn more about Metrics, see [Monitor Azure Local with Azure Monitor Metrics](../manage/monitor-cluster-with-metrics.md).
 
 ### Alerts
 
-Azure Local provides alerting capabilities through Azure Monitor Alerts. Alerts proactively notify you when important conditions are found in your monitoring data. Alerts can be raised based on predefined health faults from the OS health service, or you can create custom alerts based on metrics or logs you collect. To simplify creation of custom alerts, we provide a set of recommended alerts that you can use as templates.
+Azure Local provides alerting capabilities through Azure Monitor Alerts. Alerts proactively notify you when important conditions are found in your monitoring data. Alerts can be raised based on predefined health faults from the OS health service, or you can create custom alerts based on metrics or logs you collect. To simplify custom alert creation, a set of recommended alerts is available that you can use as templates.
 
 Alerts allow you to identify and address issues before the users of your system notice them. The response could be a text or email to an administrator, or an automated process that attempts to correct an error condition.