Merge pull request #18598 from ronmiab/rb-minor-rs

prmerger-automator[bot] · web-flow · commit 07d125494808 · 2025-08-01T22:52:29.000Z
Updated text via peer feedback
diff --git a/azure-local/concepts/telemetry-and-diagnostics-overview.md b/azure-local/concepts/telemetry-and-diagnostics-overview.md
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Some advantages of the telemetry and diagnostics extension include:
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-To use the telemetry and diagnostics extension, make sure you have an Azure Local instance is deployed and running.
+To use the telemetry and diagnostics extension, make sure you have an Azure Local instance that's deployed and running.
 
 ## Data collection consent
 
diff --git a/azure-local/manage/arc-extension-management.md b/azure-local/manage/arc-extension-management.md
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Azure-managed extensions include:
 
 ### [Azure portal](#tab/azureportal)
 
-You can install extensions from the **Capabilities** tab for your Azure Local Arc-enabled servers, as shown in the screenshot. You can use the capabilities tab to install most extensions.
+You can use the **Capabilities** tab to install extensions for your Azure Local Arc-enabled servers, as shown in the screenshot. You can use this tab to install most extensions.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/arc-extension-management/arc-extension-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Capabilities tab and options in the Azure portal." lightbox="media/arc-extension-management/arc-extension-overview.png":::
 
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ Launch [Azure Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com/) and use Bash to install an
 
 ### [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azurepowershell)
 
-Run Azure PowerShell in Azure Cloud Shell. This article details how to use PowerShell in Azure Cloud Shell. For more information, see [Quickstart for Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart).
+Run Azure PowerShell in Azure Cloud Shell. For more information, see [Quickstart for Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart).
 
 Launch [Azure Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com/) and use PowerShell to install an extension by following these steps:
 
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ Launch [Azure Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com/) and use Bash to check the s
 
 ### [Azure PowerShell](#tab/azurepowershell)
 
-Azure PowerShell can be run in Azure Cloud Shell. This document details how to use PowerShell in Azure Cloud Shell. For more information, refer [Quickstart for Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart).
+Azure PowerShell can be run in Azure Cloud Shell. For more information, see [Quickstart for Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart).
 
 Launch [Azure Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com/) and use PowerShell to check the status of an extension by following these steps:
 
diff --git a/azure-local/manage/get-remote-support.md b/azure-local/manage/get-remote-support.md
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ After you enable remote support, Microsoft support gets just-in-time (JIT) limit
 
 ## Remote support terms and conditions
 
-The following are the data handling terms and conditions for remote access. Carefully read them before granting access. Everything under this section should remain as is without making any changes to the text.
+The following are the data handling terms and conditions for remote access. Carefully read them before granting access. <!--Everything under this section should remain as is without making any changes to the text.-->
 
 > By approving this request, the Microsoft support organization or the Azure engineering team supporting this feature ("Microsoft Support Engineer") will be given direct access to your device for troubleshooting purposes and/or resolving the technical issue described in the Microsoft support case.
 >

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`28`		`-The following are the data handling terms and conditions for remote access. Carefully read them before granting access. Everything under this section should remain as is without making any changes to the text.`
	`28`	`+The following are the data handling terms and conditions for remote access. Carefully read them before granting access. <!--Everything under this section should remain as is without making any changes to the text.-->`
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`30`	`30`	`> By approving this request, the Microsoft support organization or the Azure engineering team supporting this feature ("Microsoft Support Engineer") will be given direct access to your device for troubleshooting purposes and/or resolving the technical issue described in the Microsoft support case.`
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