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Author: alkohli

azure-local/whats-new.md

@@ -41,14 +41,11 @@ This release has the following features and improvements:
     - Starting with this release, you can download a specific version of Azure Local software instead of just the latest version. For each upcoming release, you can choose from up to last six supported versions. For more information, see [Download Azure Local software](./deploy/download-23h2-software.md).
     - The error logging in the registration script is enhanced.
 
-**Security changes**: The Dynamic Root of Trust for Measurement (DRTM) will be enabled by default for all new 2504 deployments running OS version **21600.3775**. For more information, see [Security features for Azure Local](./concepts/security-features.md#security-features-for-azure-local).
+**Security changes**: The Dynamic Root of Trust for Measurement (DRTM) is enabled by default for all new 2504 deployments running OS version **21600.3775**. For more information, see [Security features for Azure Local](./concepts/security-features.md#security-features-for-azure-local).
 
 - **Azure Local VM changes**:
-    - Software Defined Networking (SDN) enabled by Azure Arc (Preview) - Starting with this release, Azure Local now supports SDN enabled by Azure Arc for new deployments. This preview feature enables deployment of the Network Controller as a failover cluster service. The feature introduces support for Network Security Groups (NSGs) on static logical networks and Azure Local VM network adapters on these networks, allowing for granular control of network traffic.
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-    To learn more about this Preview feature, see [SDN overview](./index.yml).
     - **Data disk expansion**: With this release, you can expand the size of a data disk attached to an Azure Local VM. For more information, see [Expand the size of a data disk attached to an Azure Local VM](./manage/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources.md).
-    - Documentation describing a [Comparison of the management capabilities of VMs on Azure](./concepts/compare-vm-management-capabilities.md) was released recently.
+    - **Documentation changes**: An article describing a [Comparison of the management capabilities of VMs on Azure](./concepts/compare-vm-management-capabilities.md) was released recently.
 
 - **Update improvements**:
     - Improved reliability when downloading updates.
@@ -64,8 +61,7 @@ This release has the following features and improvements:
 
 - **Billing changes**: For any new deployments running solution version 12.2504.1001.20 and later, the usage record originates from the Azure Local resource in the Azure directly. For mre information, see [Billing](./concepts/billing.md#billing-changes-for-122504100120-and-later).
 
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-- **Archival of Azure Local, version 22H2 documentation**: The documentation for version 22H2 will be archived by May 31, 2025. The documentation will be available in the [Azure previous versions documentation](/previous-versions/azure/) for reference. The archived documentation will not be updated and is not supported.
+- **Archival of Azure Local, version 22H2 documentation**: The documentation for version 22H2 will be archived by May 31, 2025 and will be available in the [Azure previous versions documentation](/previous-versions/azure/) for reference. The archived documentation won't be updated and is not supported.
 
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