Updated with suggestions from Ronmia.

Author: LouisBerner

azure-local/manage/assign-vm-rbac-roles.md

@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 ---
-title: Use builtin RBAC roles for Azure Local VM management
-description: Learn how to use RBAC builtin roles for Azure Local VM management.
+title: Use builtin RBAC roles for Azure Local VM to manage Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc
+description: Learn how to use RBAC builtin roles to manage Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc.
 author: alkohli
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.service: azure-local
-ms.date: 03/17/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ---
 
-# Use Role-based Access Control for Azure Local virtual machine management 
+# Use Role-based Access Control to manage Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc 
 
 [!INCLUDE [hci-applies-to-23h2](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-This article describes how to use the Role-based Access Control (RBAC) to control access to Azure Local virtual machines (VMs).
+This article describes how to use the Role-based Access Control (RBAC) to control access to Azure Local virtual machines (VMs) enabled by Azure Arc.
 
 You can use the builtin RBAC roles to control access to VMs and VM resources such as virtual disks, network interfaces, VM images, logical networks and storage paths. You can assign these roles to users, groups, service principals and managed identities.
 

azure-local/manage/collect-log-files-arc-enabled-vms.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Collect log files for Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc
 description: Learn how to collect log files for an Azure Local VM enabled by Azure Arc. 
 author: alkohli
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 03/18/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.reviewer: vlakshmanan
 ms.service: azure-local
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Examine these log files to investigate a VM provisioning failure:
 
 ## Collect guest logs
 
-Collect guest logs to gather information about issues with Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc before you contact Microsoft Support.
+Collect guest logs to gather information about issues with Azure Local VMs before you contact Microsoft Support.
 
 ### Logs inside the VM
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ For more information, see [Active Directory domain join troubleshooting guidance
 
 ### MOC guest agent logs
 
-MOC guest agent logs are useful when provisioning fails on an Azure Local VM with the following error:
+MOC guest agent logs are useful when provisioning on an Azure Local VM fails with the following error:
 
 `Could not establish HyperV connection for VM ID...`
 

azure-local/manage/trusted-launch-vm-overview.md

@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 author: alkohli
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.service: azure-local
-ms.date: 03/18/2025
+ms.date: 03/20/2025
 ---
 
 # Introduction to Trusted launch for Azure Local VMs enabled by Azure Arc
 
 [!INCLUDE [applies-to](../includes/hci-applies-to-23h2.md)]
 
-This article introduces Trusted launch for Azure Local virtual machines (VMs) enabled by Azure Arc. You can create a Trusted launch for Azure Local VM using Azure portal or by using Azure Command-Line Interface (CLI).
+This article introduces Trusted launch for Azure Local virtual machines (VMs) enabled by Azure Arc. You can create a Trusted launch for an Azure Local VM using the Azure portal or by using Azure Command-Line Interface (CLI).
 
 ## Introduction
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Trusted launch is a security type that can be specified when creating Azure Loca
 
 ## Guest operating system images
 
-All Windows 11 images (excluding 24H2 Windows 11 SKUs) and Windows Server 2022 images from Azure Marketplace supported by Azure Local VMs are supported. See [Create Azure Local VM enabled by Azure Arc image using Azure Marketplace images](/azure-stack/hci/manage/virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace?tabs=azurecli) for a list of all supported Windows 11 images.
+All Windows 11 images (excluding 24H2 Windows 11 SKUs) and Windows Server 2022 images from Azure Marketplace supported by Azure Local VMs are supported. See [Create Azure Local VM image using Azure Marketplace images](/azure-stack/hci/manage/virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace?tabs=azurecli) for a list of all supported Windows 11 images.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > VM guest images obtained outside of Azure Marketplace are not supported.