Added Alpa's feedback

Author: Manika Dhiman

azure-local/upgrade/upgrade-22h2-to-23h2-powershell.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Upgrade Azure Stack HCI OS, version 22H2 to version 23H2 via PowerShell
 description: Learn how to use PowerShell to upgrade Azure Stack HCI OS, version 22H2 to version 23H2.
 author: alkohli
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 05/21/2025
+ms.date: 06/06/2025
 ms.author: alkohli
 ms.reviewer: alkohli
 ms.service: azure-local
@@ -100,6 +100,8 @@ To ensure Resilient File System (ReFS) and live migrations function properly dur
 
 1. Restart the machine for the changes to take effect. On machine restart, if the `RefsEnableMetadataValidation` key gets overridden and ReFS volumes fail to come online, toggle the key by first setting `RefsEnableMetadataValidation` to `1` and then back to `0` again.
 
+1. Update and verify that the registry keys have been applied on each machine in the system before moving to the next step.
+
 ## Step 1: Connect to Azure Local
 
 Follow these steps on your client to connect to one of the machines of your Azure Local instance.

azure-local/upgrade/upgrade-to-24h2-powershell.md

@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ To upgrade the OS on your system, follow these high-level steps:
 - Make sure to shut down virtual machines (VMs). We recommend shutting down VMs before performing the OS upgrade to prevent unexpected outages and damages to databases.
 - Confirm that you have access to the Azure Local **2505** ISO file, which you can download from the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/#view/Microsoft_Azure_ArcCenterUX/ArcCenterMenuBlade/~/hciGetStarted).
 - Consult your hardware OEM to verify driver compatibility. Confirm that all drivers compatible with Windows Server 2025 or Azure Stack HCI OS, 26100.xxxx are installed before the upgrade.
-- Make sure the Network Interface Card (NIC) driver currently installed on your system is newer than the version included by default (inbox) with Azure Stack HCI OS, version 26100.xxxx. The following table compares the current and recommended versions of NIC drivers for two vendors:
+- Make sure the Network Interface Card (NIC) driver currently installed on your system is newer than the version included by default (inbox) with Azure Stack HCI OS, version 26100.xxxx. The following table compares the current and recommended versions of NIC drivers for two manufacturers:
 
-   | NIC vendor | Inbox driver version | Recommended Latest compatible driver |
+   | NIC manufacturer | Inbox driver version | Recommended latest compatible driver |
    |--|--|--|
    | Intel | 1.15.121.0 | 1.17.73.0 |
    | NVIDIA | 24.4.26429.0 | 25.4.50020 |