Merge pull request #16302 from pauljewellmsft/amlfs-titles

ShannonLeavitt · web-flow · commit 4f1881168dae · 2024-11-11T15:14:23.000-06:00
[AMLFS] Article clean-up
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-overview.md b/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-overview.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 title: What is Azure Managed Lustre?
-description: Use Azure Managed Lustre to quickly create an Azure-based Lustre file system to use in cloud-based high-performance computing jobs.
+description: Use Azure Managed Lustre to quickly create an Azure-based Lustre file system for cloud-based high-performance computing jobs.
 ms.topic: overview
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 05/14/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: mayabishop
 ms.custom: references_regions
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: references_regions
 
 # What is Azure Managed Lustre?
 
-The Azure Managed Lustre service gives you the capability to quickly create an Azure-based Lustre file system to use in cloud-based high-performance computing jobs.
+The Azure Managed Lustre service gives you the capability to quickly create an Azure-based Lustre file system for cloud-based high-performance computing jobs.
 
 Lustre is an open-source parallel file system that can scale to massive storage sizes while also providing high performance throughput. Lustre is used by the world's fastest supercomputers and in data-centric workflows for many types of industries. For more information, see [https://www.lustre.org](https://www.lustre.org).
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ All information in an Azure Managed Lustre file system also is protected by VM h
 
 Your Azure Managed Lustre file system uses Azure managed disks as object storage target (OST) data disks.
 
-All Azure Managed Lustre file systems that are created as a "durable" file system type use Azure Premium SSD (solid state drive) disks configured as locally redundant storage (LRS). LRS disk contents are replicated three times within the local datacenter to protect against drive and server rack failures.
+All Azure Managed Lustre file systems that are created as a "durable" file system type use Azure Premium SSD (solid state drive) disks configured as locally redundant storage (LRS). LRS disk contents are replicated three times within the local data center to protect against drive and server rack failures.
 
 The Azure Managed Lustre file system itself also contributes to data resilience through the object storage processes it uses to store data on these disks.
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-prerequisites.md b/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-prerequisites.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Prerequisites for Azure Managed Lustre file systems
-description: Network and storage prerequisites to complete before you create an Azure Managed Lustre file system.
+description: Learn about network and storage prerequisites to complete before you create an Azure Managed Lustre file system.
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.date: 05/14/2024
 author: pauljewellmsft
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-region-recovery.md b/azure-managed-lustre/amlfs-region-recovery.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 ---
 title: Regional redundancy and failover recovery with Azure Managed Lustre
-description: Techniques to provide failover capabilities for disaster recovery with Azure Managed Lustre 
+description: Understand techniques to provide failover capabilities for disaster recovery with Azure Managed Lustre 
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 05/08/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ---
 
 # Use multiple clusters for regional failover recovery
@@ -16,10 +16,9 @@ This article describes a strategy to reduce the risk of work disruption by using
 As your workflow proceeds in your primary region, you must manually save data in the blob storage outside of the region. If the cluster region becomes unavailable, you can create another Azure Managed Lustre instance in a secondary region, connect to the same storage, and resume work from the new cluster.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> This failover plan does not cover a complete outage in a storage account's region. 
+> This failover plan doesn't cover a complete outage in a storage account's region.
 >
-> Managed Lustre does support locally redundant storage (LRS), zone-redundant storage (ZRS), geo-redundant storage (GRS), read-access-geo-redundant storage (RAGRS), geo-zone-redundant storage (GZRS), and read-access-geo-zone-redundant storage (RA-GZRS).
-
+> Azure Managed Lustre supports locally redundant storage (LRS), zone-redundant storage (ZRS), geo-redundant storage (GRS), read-access-geo-redundant storage (RAGRS), geo-zone-redundant storage (GZRS), and read-access-geo-zone-redundant storage (RA-GZRS).
 
 ## Planning for regional failover
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/automount-clients-fstab.md b/azure-managed-lustre/automount-clients-fstab.md
@@ -4,8 +4,7 @@ description: Describes how to automount Lustre clients using fstab.
 ms.topic: how-to
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 07/26/2023
-ms.lastreviewed: 07/26/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: dsundarraj
 
 ---
@@ -37,6 +36,7 @@ To update the **/etc/fstab** file in your Lustre client VM:
 ```bash
 <MGS IP Address>@tcp:/lustrefs </mount_point> lustre defaults,noatime,flock,_netdev,x-systemd.automount,x-systemd.requires=network.service 0 0
 ```
+
 > [!NOTE]
 > You can copy the example and input the appropriate MGS IP address and mount point for a functional default setup.
 
@@ -72,4 +72,3 @@ Your Lustre client VM is now configured to mount AMLFS whenever it restarts.
 In some cases, your Lustre client VM might need to start regardless of the status of your mounted AMLFS file system. In these cases, add the nofail option to your file system's entry in your /etc/fstab file.
 
 The fields in the line of code that you added to the /etc/fstab file do the following.
-
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/blob-integration.md b/azure-managed-lustre/blob-integration.md
@@ -4,8 +4,7 @@ description: Understand storage concepts for using Azure Blob storage with an Az
 ms.topic: conceptual
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 05/30/2024
-ms.lastreviewed: 06/05/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: brianl
 
 # Intent: As an IT Pro, I want to be able to seamlessly use Azure Blob Storage for long-term storage of files in my Azure Managed Lustre file system.
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/configure-network-security-group.md b/azure-managed-lustre/configure-network-security-group.md
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Add the following inbound rules to the network security group:
 | 112 | *rule-name* | Any | TCP | `AzureMonitor` | `VirtualNetwork` | Allow | Permit inbound flows from the AzureMonitor service tag. Allow TCP source port 443 only. |
 | 120 | *rule-name* | Any | Any | Any | Any | Deny | Deny all other inbound flows. |
 
-The inbound security rules in the Azure portal should look similar to the following screenshot. You should adjust the subnet IP address/CIDR range and other settings based on your deployment:
+The inbound security rules in the Azure portal should look similar to the following screenshot. The screenshot is provided as an example; consult the table for the complete list of rules. You should adjust the subnet IP address/CIDR range and other settings based on your deployment:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/network-security-group/inbound-security-rules.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing inbound security rules for a network security group in the Azure portal." lightbox="media/network-security-group/inbound-security-rules.png":::
 
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ Add the following outbound rules to the network security group:
 | 1000 | *rule-name* | Any | Any | `VirtualNetwork` | `Internet` | Deny | Deny outbound flows to the internet. |
 | 1010 | *rule-name* | Any | Any | Any | Any | Deny | Deny all other outbound flows. |
 
-The outbound security rules in the Azure portal should look similar to the following screenshot. You should adjust the subnet IP address/CIDR range and other settings based on your deployment:
+The outbound security rules in the Azure portal should look similar to the following screenshot. The screenshot is provided as an example; consult the table for the complete list of rules. You should adjust the subnet IP address/CIDR range and other settings based on your deployment:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/network-security-group/outbound-security-rules.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing outbound security rules for a network security group in the Azure portal." lightbox="media/network-security-group/outbound-security-rules.png":::
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/connect-clients.md b/azure-managed-lustre/connect-clients.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Describes how to connect Linux clients with supported software vers
 ms.topic: overview
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 03/15/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: dsundarraj
 
 # Intent: As an IT Pro, XXX.
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/create-aml-file-system-terraform.md b/azure-managed-lustre/create-aml-file-system-terraform.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.service: azure-stack
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: devx-track-terraform
-ms.date: 10/25/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.author: pauljewell
 content_well_notification: 
   - AI-contribution
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/create-file-system-portal.md b/azure-managed-lustre/create-file-system-portal.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn how to create an Azure Managed Lustre file system from the Az
 ms.topic: how-to
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 06/13/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.lastreviewed: 06/06/2023
 ms.reviewer: mayabishop
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/create-file-system-resource-manager.md b/azure-managed-lustre/create-file-system-resource-manager.md
@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 title: Create an Azure Managed Lustre file system by using Azure Resource Manager templates
 description: Learn how to use Azure Resource Manager templates with JSON or Bicep to create an Azure Managed Lustre file system. 
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 08/16/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.lastreviewed: 08/16/2024
+ms.lastreviewed: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: ronhogue
 
 ---
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/create-import-job.md b/azure-managed-lustre/create-import-job.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn how to create an import job to import data from an Azure Blob
 ms.topic: how-to
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 05/30/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 ms.reviewer: brianl
 ---
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/customer-managed-encryption-keys.md b/azure-managed-lustre/customer-managed-encryption-keys.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Use an Azure Key Vault to create and manage your own encryption key
 ms.topic: overview
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.date: 06/28/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 
 ---
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ After you create the file system, you can't change between customer-managed keys
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-You can use either a pre-existing key vault and key, or you can create new ones to use with Azure Managed Lustre. See the following required settings to ensure you have a properly configured key vault and key. 
+You can use either a pre-existing key vault and key, or you can create new ones to use with Azure Managed Lustre. See the following required settings to ensure you have a properly configured key vault and key.
 
 ### Create a key vault and key
 
@@ -41,38 +41,37 @@ The following settings are required for use with Azure Managed Lustre. You can c
 
 Basics:
 
-* **Subscription** - Use the same subscription that is used for the Azure Managed Lustre cluster.
-* **Region** - The key vault must be in the same region as the Azure Managed Lustre cluster.
-* **Pricing tier** - Standard tier is sufficient for use with Azure Managed Lustre.
-* **Soft delete** - Azure Managed Lustre enables soft delete if it isn't already configured on the key vault.
-* **Purge protection** - Enable purge protection.
+- **Subscription** - Use the same subscription that is used for the Azure Managed Lustre cluster.
+- **Region** - The key vault must be in the same region as the Azure Managed Lustre cluster.
+- **Pricing tier** - Standard tier is sufficient for use with Azure Managed Lustre.
+- **Soft delete** - Azure Managed Lustre enables soft delete if it isn't already configured on the key vault.
+- **Purge protection** - Enable purge protection.
 
 Access policy:
 
-* **Access Configuration** - Set to Azure role-based access control.
+- **Access Configuration** - Set to Azure role-based access control.
 
 Networking:
 
-* **Public Access** - Must be enabled.
-* **Allow Access** - Select either **All networks** or, if you need to restrict access, select **Selected networks**
-
-  - If **Selected networks** is chosen, you must enable the **Allow trusted Microsoft services to bypass this firewall** option in the **Exception** section below. 
-
+- **Public Access** - Must be enabled.
+- **Allow Access** - Select either **All networks** or, if you need to restrict access, select **Selected networks**
 
+  - If **Selected networks** is chosen, you must enable the **Allow trusted Microsoft services to bypass this firewall** option in the **Exception** section below.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/customer-managed-encryption-keys/keyvault-network-config.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to restrict key vault access to selected networks, while allowing access to trusted Microsoft services." lightbox="./media/customer-managed-encryption-keys/keyvault-network-config.png":::
+
 > [!NOTE]
 > If you are using an existing key vault, you can review the network settings section to confirm that **Allow access from** is set to **Allow public access from all networks**, or make changes if necessary.
 
 #### Key properties
 
-* **Key type** - RSA
-* **RSA key size** - 2048
-* **Enabled** - Yes
+- **Key type** - RSA
+- **RSA key size** - 2048
+- **Enabled** - Yes
 
 Key vault access permissions:
 
-* The user that creates the Azure Managed Lustre system must have permissions equivalent to the [Key Vault contributor role](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#key-vault-contributor). The same permissions are needed to set up and manage Azure Key Vault.
+- The user that creates the Azure Managed Lustre system must have permissions equivalent to the [Key Vault contributor role](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#key-vault-contributor). The same permissions are needed to set up and manage Azure Key Vault.
 
   For more information, see [Secure access to a key vault](/azure/key-vault/general/security-features).
 
@@ -91,7 +90,7 @@ Create this identity before you create the file system, and give it access to th
 
 For more information, see the managed identities documentation:
 
-* [Create a user-assigned managed identity](/azure/active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/how-manage-user-assigned-managed-identities)
+- [Create a user-assigned managed identity](/azure/active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/how-manage-user-assigned-managed-identities)
 
 ## Create the Azure Managed Lustre file system with customer-managed encryption keys
 
@@ -107,9 +106,9 @@ Select the link in **Customer Key settings** to select the key vault, key, and v
 
 If your Azure Key Vault doesn't appear in the list, check these requirements:
 
-* Is the file system in the same subscription as the key vault?
-* Is the file system in the same region as the key vault?
-* Is there network connectivity between the Azure portal and the key vault?
+- Is the file system in the same subscription as the key vault?
+- Is the file system in the same region as the key vault?
+- Is there network connectivity between the Azure portal and the key vault?
 
 After selecting a vault, select the individual key from the available options, or create a new key. The key must be a 2048-bit RSA key.
 
@@ -125,5 +124,5 @@ After you configure these encryption key settings, proceed to the **Review + cre
 
 These articles explain more about using Azure Key Vault and customer-managed keys to encrypt data in Azure:
 
-* [Azure storage encryption overview](/azure/storage/common/storage-service-encryption)
-* [Disk encryption with customer-managed keys](/azure/virtual-machines/disk-encryption#customer-managed-keys)
+- [Azure storage encryption overview](/azure/storage/common/storage-service-encryption)
+- [Disk encryption with customer-managed keys](/azure/virtual-machines/disk-encryption#customer-managed-keys)
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/export-with-archive-jobs.md b/azure-managed-lustre/export-with-archive-jobs.md
@@ -2,13 +2,12 @@
 title: Use export jobs to export data from Azure Managed Lustre
 description: How to use an export job to copy data from your Azure Managed Lustre file system to long-term storage in Azure Blob Storage.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 05/14/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.lastreviewed: 02/23/2023
 ms.reviewer: brianl
 
-# Intent: As an IT Pro, I need to be able to export files from my Azure Managed Lustre file system to longterm Azure Blob Storage.
+# Intent: As an IT Pro, I need to be able to export files from my Azure Managed Lustre file system to long-term Azure Blob Storage.
 # Keyword: 
 ---
 
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/root-squash-configure-settings.md b/azure-managed-lustre/root-squash-configure-settings.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Configure root squash settings for Azure Managed Lustre file systems
 description: Learn how to configure root squash settings for Azure Managed Lustre file systems. 
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 05/03/2024
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
 ms.reviewer: mayabishop
diff --git a/azure-managed-lustre/use-csi-driver-kubernetes.md b/azure-managed-lustre/use-csi-driver-kubernetes.md
@@ -2,10 +2,9 @@
 title: Use the Azure Managed Lustre CSI driver with Azure Kubernetes Service
 description: How to use an Azure Managed Lustre storage system with your Kubernetes containers in Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS).
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 08/21/2023
+ms.date: 11/11/2024
 author: pauljewellmsft
 ms.author: pauljewell
-ms.lastreviewed: 02/24/2023
 ms.reviewer: brianl
 
 # Intent: As an IT Pro, I want to be able to use a Lustre file system with the apps I've deployed on Kubernetes.
@@ -15,7 +14,7 @@ ms.reviewer: brianl
 
 # Use the Azure Managed Lustre CSI Driver with Azure Kubernetes Service
 
-This article describes how to plan, install, and use [Azure Managed Lustre](/azure/azure-managed-lustre) in [Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS)](/azure/aks/) with the [Azure Managed Lustre Kubernetes container support interface driver (Azure Managed Lustre CSI driver)](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/azurelustre-csi-driver).
+In this article, you learn how to plan, install, and use [Azure Managed Lustre](/azure/azure-managed-lustre) in [Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS)](/azure/aks/) with the [Azure Managed Lustre Kubernetes container support interface driver (Azure Managed Lustre CSI driver)](https://github.com/kubernetes-sigs/azurelustre-csi-driver).
 
 ## About the Azure Managed Lustre CSI driver for AKS
 
