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Author: sethmanheim

AKS-Hybrid/create-storage-classes.md

@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ ms.custom: references_regions
 
 # Create and use storage classes (preview)
 
-This article describes how to create and use storage classes in AKS enabled by Arc.
+This article describes how to create and use Azure Arc-enabled storage classes for AKS on Azure Stack HCI 23H2.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-To use the storage classes feature, you must have an AKS Arc cluster in the following currently available regions:
+To use the storage classes feature, you must have an AKS Arc cluster running, and in the following currently available regions:
 
 - East US (eastus)
 - West Europe (westeurope)
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ az extension add --name k8s-runtime
 
 ## [Azure portal](#tab/portal)
 
-During the preview, our publicly available portal extension is behind the feature flag `managedstorageclass` of the `Microsoft_Azure_HybridCompute` extension. [Use this link to show the link for provisioned clusters](https://portal.azure.com/?Microsoft_Azure_HybridCompute_managedstorageclass=true). The example in this article uses a provisioned cluster for demonstration purposes.
+During the preview, our publicly available portal extension only targets [provisioned clusters](https://portal.azure.com/?Microsoft_Azure_HybridCompute_managedstorageclass=true) and is behind the feature flag `managedstorageclass` of the `Microsoft_Azure_HybridCompute` extension.
 
 ### Enable the service
 
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ When a storage class is updated, if all the properties that changed are updatabl
 | `password` | `string` \| `undefined` (secret) | **Yes** | Server password. |
 | `domain` | `string` \| `undefined` | **Yes** | Server domain. |
 
-### AksArcDisk (only for AKS Arc clusters)
+### AksArcDisk
 
 You can create a storage class that uses custom disks. This process is only for AKS Arc clusters. See [Create custom storage class for disks](container-storage-interface-disks.md?tabs=23H2#create-custom-storage-class-for-disks).
 

AKS-Hybrid/media/storage-class-overview/create-storage-class.gif

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 
 Storage is key to most applications. Kubernetes uses *storage classes* to describe classes (types) of storage. Pods use storage classes to request storage, and when the pod is up and running, volumes of requested storage classes are mounted to the pod so that the pod can access their contents. Implementation details, including how the volumes are provisioned and mounted, and how the files are stored, are handled by storage addons to the storage class.
 
-*Container Storage Interface (CSI)* is the interface that Kubernetes uses to handle different storage classes. Different storage types provide storage addons that implement the CSI for specific storage classes.
+*Container Storage Interface (CSI)* is the interface that Kubernetes uses to handle different storage classes. Different storage types provide storage addons (also known as CSI drivers) that implement the CSI for specific storage classes.
 
 The following diagram shows the relationships among pods, volumes, storage classes, storage addons, and actual storage infrastructures:
 
@@ -27,8 +27,6 @@ By default, a new Kubernetes cluster only supports the local disk storage class,
 
 Storage is important for any running systems, so most companies might have already set up storage infrastructures for existing systems. The Arc storage service provides a unified experience for creating storage classes on top of existing storage. With the Arc Storage Class service, cluster administrators only need to specify the name and type of the storage class to be created, and Arc Storage Class installs storage classes and their respective CSI components into their clusters. The installed components are managed by Azure, so updates are automatically installed and security vulnerabilities are automatically fixed.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/storage-class-overview/create-storage-class.gif" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to create a storage class on Azure portal.":::
-
 ### Scenario 1: Connect to existing NAS
 
 You might be already using network-attached storage (NAS) for storage pool and high availability capabilities. By default, Kubernetes can't use NAS for storage. With the Arc Storage Class service, you can easily create an NFS storage class that connects to your existing NAS using the standard NFS protocol that NAS devices should support. You can also create multiple NFS storage classes to connect to different NAS devices.