Acrolinx changes

Author: alkohli

azure-local/whats-new.md

@@ -29,22 +29,23 @@ This is a baseline release with the following features and improvements:
 - **Renaming of Azure Stack HCI to Azure Local** - Azure Stack HCI is now a part of Azure Local. Microsoft has renamed Azure Stack HCI to Azure Local to communicate a single brand that unifies the entire distributed infrastructure portfolio.
 
     For more information, see [Renaming Azure Stack HCI to Azure Local](./rename-to-azure-local.md).
-- **Azure Local for Small Form Factor (Preview)**- Beginning this release, Azure Local supprts a new class of *small* devices with reduced hardware requirements. These low cost devices are suitable for edge scenarios across the industry horizontals. The devices must meet the Windows Server certification requirements as well as relaxed requirements from Software Defined Data Center (SDDC) and Windows Server Software-Defined (WSSD) program.
+- **Azure Local for Small Form Factor (Preview)**- Beginning this release, Azure Local supports a new class of *small* devices with reduced hardware requirements. These low cost devices are suitable for edge scenarios across the industry horizontals. The devices must meet the Windows Server certification requirements and relaxed requirements from Software Defined Data Center (SDDC) and Windows Server Software-Defined (WSSD) program.
 
     For more information about this Preview feature, see [System requirements for Azure Local for small form factor (Preview)](./concepts/system-requirements-small-23h2.md).
 - **Azure Local for disconnected operations (Preview)** - Azure Local is now available for disconnected operations. Disconnected operations for Azure Local enable the deployment and management of Azure Local instances without a connection to the Azure public cloud.
 
     This feature allows you to build, deploy, and manage virtual machines (VMs) and containerized applications using select Azure Arc-enabled services from a local control plane, providing a familiar Azure portal and CLI experience.
 
     For more information about this Preview feature, see [Azure Local for Disconnected Operations (Preview)](./manage/disconnected-operations-overview.md).
-- **Deploy Azure Local with Local Identity (Preview)** - Starting this release, you can deploy Azure Local using Local identity with Azure Key Vault. By integrating with Key Vault and using certificate-based authentication, security posture is enhanced and operations continuity is ensured. This approach offers minimal edge infrastructure, a secure secret store, and simplified management by consolidating secrets in a single vault. Additionally, it streamlines deployment by reducing dependencies on Active Directory systems and simplifying firewall configurations.
+- **Deploy Azure Local with Local Identity (Preview)** - Starting this release, you can deploy Azure Local using Local identity with Azure Key Vault. By integrating with Key Vault and using certificate-based authentication, security posture is enhanced and operations continuity is ensured. This approach offers minimal edge infrastructure, a secure secret store, and simplified management by consolidating secrets in a single vault. Additionally, it streamlines deployment by eliminating dependencies on Active Directory systems and simplifying firewall configurations.
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+    For more information about this Preview feature, see [Deploy Azure Local with Local Identity and Azure Key Vault (Preview)](./deploy/deployment-local-identity-with-key-vault.md).
 
-    <!--For more information about this Preview feature, see [Deploy Azure Local with Local Identity and Azure Key Vault (Preview)](./deploy/deployment-local-identity-with-key-vault.md).-->
 - **Arc VM changes**: The following changes were made to Arc VM management:
     - **Terraform templates for Arc VM** - Starting this release, you can create logical networks and Arc VMs using Terraform templates.
 
         For more information, see [Template to create logical networks](https://registry.terraform.io/modules/Azure/avm-res-azurestackhci-logicalnetwork/azurerm/0.4.0) and [Template to create Arc VMs](https://registry.terraform.io/modules/Azure/avm-res-azurestackhci-virtualmachineinstance/azurerm/0.1.2).
-    - **Add network inteface on static logical network** - After the Arc VMs are provisioned, you can now add a network interface on a static logical network. To add this network interface, you are required to configure the desired static IP from within the VM.
+    - **Add network interface on static logical network** - After the Arc VMs are provisioned, you can now add a network interface on a static logical network. To add this network interface, you're required to configure the desired static IP from within the VM.
 
         For more information, see [Add a network interface on your Azure Local](./manage/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources.md#add-a-network-interface).
 
@@ -108,7 +109,7 @@ This is a baseline release with the following features and improvements:
 
 ### Upgrade from version 22H2 to version 23H2
 
-This release introduces the ability to upgrade your Azure Local instance from version 22H2 to version 23H2. The upgrade process is supported for clusters running version 22H2 with the latest updates and is a two-step process. While the OS upgrade is generally available, the solution upgrade will have a phased rollout.
+This release introduces the ability to upgrade your Azure Local instance from version 22H2 to version 23H2. The upgrade process is supported for clusters running version 22H2 with the latest updates and is a two-step process. While the OS upgrade is generally available, the solution upgrade has a phased rollout.
 
 For more information, see [Upgrade Azure Local from version 22H2 to version 23H2](./upgrade/about-upgrades-23h2.md).
 
@@ -125,7 +126,7 @@ This release contains the following changes for Arc VM management:
 
 - 12 new Azure Marketplace images went live. For more information, see [Create Azure Local VM from Azure Marketplace images via Azure CLI](./manage/virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace.md#create-vm-image-from-marketplace-image).
 - Creation of logical networks is blocked if trying to create with overlapping IP pools.
-- Logical network properties are properly updated. Previously, the logical network sometimes would not have its properties (vLAN, IP Pools, etc.) filled.
+- Logical network properties are properly updated. Previously, the logical network sometimes wouldn't have its properties (vLAN, IP Pools, etc.) filled.
 - The vLAN field on a logical network will be defaulted to '0' if not specified.
 - Either (not both) *-image* or *-os-disk-name* can be used to create a VM from a VHD. Previously, Azure CLI enforced *-image* to be required for `az stack-hci-vm create` command.
 
@@ -155,7 +156,7 @@ This is primarily a bug fix release with a few improvements.
 
   - You can now view and delete VM network interfaces from the Azure portal.
   - You can view **Connected devices** for logical networks. In the Azure portal, you can go to the logical network and then go to **Settings > Connected devices** to view the connected devices.
-  - Deletion of logical networks is blocked if connected devices are present. When you try to delete a logical network from the Azure portal that has connected devices, you'll see a warning message: *Cannot delete logical network because it is currently in use*. Delete all the resources under **Connected Devices** setting before you delete the logical network.
+  - Deletion of logical networks is blocked if connected devices are present. When you try to delete a logical network from the Azure portal that has connected devices, you see a warning message: *Can't delete logical network because it's currently in use*. Delete all the resources under **Connected Devices** setting before you delete the logical network.
   - From this release onwards, a new URL needs to be added to the allowlist for `stack-hci-vm` Azure CLI installation. The URL has changed from: `https://hciarcvmsstorage.blob.core.windows.net/cli-extension/stack_hci_vm-{version}-py3-none-any.whl` to: `https://hciarcvmsstorage.z13.web.core.windows.net/cli-extensions/stack_hci_vm-{version}-py3-none-any.whl`. For more information, see [Azure Local firewall requirements](./concepts/firewall-requirements.md).
 
 - **Update health checks**: Starting this release, a new health check was added and the update service was improved. Additionally, the update service now supports the ability to view or start new updates when the service crashes on machines. Also, multiple issues for health checks related to Azure Update Manager and Solution Builder Extension Update were fixed.