Acrolinx fixes

Author: Manika Dhiman

azure-local/includes/azure-local-end-of-support-banner-23h2.md

@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ ms.reviewer: alkohli
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Azure Local, version 23H2 (releases 2311.2 to 2509) will reach end of support on October 31, 2025. After this date:
-> - Monthly security and quality updates will stop.
-> - Support will be limited to patching to a supported release.
-> - Billing will continue for instances running version 23H2.
-> - Your system will keep working, including registration and repair.
+> - Monthly security and quality updates stop.
+> - Support is limited to patching to a supported release.
+> - Billing continues for instances running version 23H2.
+> - Your system keeps working, including registration and repair.
 > - Microsoft Support is still available for upgrade assistance.