update based on feedback from Alpa

Author: NeilBird

azure-local/concepts/system-requirements-23h2.md

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Azure Local deployments that exceed the following specifications are not support
 
 ## Support and diagnosability
 
-To ensure adequate support and diagnosability for "large memory" Azure Local machines—defined as those with more than 768 GB of physical memory—it is recommended to install OS disks with a capacity of 400 GB or larger. This recommendation aims to provide additional free disk space on the OS volume, which may be necessary for troubleshooting hardware, driver, or software issues that require a kernel memory dump to be written to the OS volume.
+To ensure adequate support and diagnosability for large memory Azure Local machines (those with more than 768 GB of physical memory), we recommend that you install OS disks with a capacity of 400 GB or more. This additional disk capacity provides sufficient space to troubleshoot a hardware, driver, or software issue that requires a kernel memory dump to be written to the OS volume.
 
 ## Hardware requirements