edit pass: azure-arc-vm-management

Author: ShawnJackson

azure-local/manage/azure-arc-vm-management-overview.md

@@ -25,13 +25,13 @@ To find answers to frequently asked questions about Azure Arc VM management on A
 
 ## Benefits of Azure Arc VM management
 
-Whereas Hyper-V provides capabilities to manage your on-premises VMs, Azure Arc VMs offer many benefits over traditional on-premises tools, including:
+Although Hyper-V provides capabilities to manage your on-premises VMs, Azure Arc VMs offer many benefits over traditional on-premises tools. These benefits include:
 
 - Role-based access control (RBAC) via built-in Azure Local roles enhances security by ensuring that only authorized users can perform VM management operations. For more information, see [Use role-based access control to manage Azure Local virtual machines](./assign-vm-rbac-roles.md).
 - Azure Arc VM management provides the ability to deploy with Resource Manager templates, Bicep, and Terraform.
 - The Azure portal acts as a single pane of glass to manage VMs on Azure Local and Azure VMs. With Azure Arc VM management, you can perform various operations from the Azure portal or the Azure CLI, including:
 
-  - Create, manage, update, and delete VMs. For more information, see [Create Azure Arc VMs](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
+  - Create, manage, update, and delete VMs. For more information, see [Create Azure Arc virtual machines on Azure Local](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
   - Create, manage, and delete VM resources such as virtual disks, logical networks, network interfaces, and VM images.
 
 - The self-service capabilities of Azure Arc VM management reduce administrative overhead.
@@ -66,13 +66,13 @@ In this release, the Azure Arc VM management workflow is as follows:
 1. During your deployment of Azure Local, one Azure Arc resource bridge is installed per cluster. A custom location is also created.
 1. You [assign built-in RBAC roles for Azure Arc VM management](./assign-vm-rbac-roles.md).
 1. You create VM resources such as:
-    1. [Storage paths](./create-storage-path.md) for VM disks.
-    1. VM images, starting with an image in [Azure Marketplace](./virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace.md), in an [Azure Storage account](./virtual-machine-image-storage-account.md), or in a [local share](./virtual-machine-image-local-share.md). These images are then used with other VM resources to create VMs.
-    1. [Logical networks](./create-virtual-networks.md).  
-    1. [VM network interfaces](./create-network-interfaces.md).
+    - [Storage paths](./create-storage-path.md) for VM disks.
+    - VM images, starting with an image in [Azure Marketplace](./virtual-machine-image-azure-marketplace.md), in an [Azure Storage account](./virtual-machine-image-storage-account.md), or in a [local share](./virtual-machine-image-local-share.md). These images are then used with other VM resources to create VMs.
+    - [Logical networks](./create-virtual-networks.md).  
+    - [VM network interfaces](./create-network-interfaces.md).
 1. You use the VM resources to [create VMs](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
 
-To troubleshoot problems with your Azure Arc VMs or to learn about existing known issues and limitations, see [Troubleshoot Azure Arc VM management for Azure Local](troubleshoot-arc-enabled-vms.md).
+To troubleshoot problems with your Azure Arc VMs or to learn about known issues and limitations, see [Troubleshoot Azure Arc VM management for Azure Local](troubleshoot-arc-enabled-vms.md).
 
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azure-local/manage/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ You can add or delete the resources by using the Azure portal. For the task of a
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- Access to an Azure Local instance that's deployed and registered. You should have one or more Azure Arc VMs running on this system. For more information, see [Create Azure Arc VMs on Azure Local](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
+- Access to an Azure Local instance that's deployed and registered. You should have one or more Azure Arc VMs running on this system. For more information, see [Create Azure Arc virtual machines on Azure Local](./create-arc-virtual-machines.md).
 
 ## Add a data disk
 
@@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ Follow these steps in the Azure portal for your Azure Local instance.
 
 1. Select **Apply** to apply the changes. The network interface is dissociated from the Azure Arc VM.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-3.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Apply button on the Networking pane for a virtual machine." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-3.png":::
+   :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-3.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Apply button on the Networking pane for a VM." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-3.png":::
 
 1. The list of network interfaces is updated with the deleted network interface.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-4.png" alt-text="Screenshot of an updated network interface list on the Networking pane for a virtual machine." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-4.png":::
+   :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-4.png" alt-text="Screenshot of an updated network interface list on the Networking pane for a VM." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machine-resources/delete-network-interface-4.png":::
 
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azure-local/manage/manage-arc-virtual-machines.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Here are some key considerations for enabling guest management on a VM after you
 - Enabling guest management after VM provisioning isn't supported for Windows Server 2012 and Windows Server 2012 R2.
 - The steps to enable guest management differ based on whether a guest agent is running on your Azure Arc VM.
 
-### Verify that guest agent is running
+### Verify that the guest agent is running
 
 To verify that the guest agent is running on the Azure Arc VM:
 
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ If Bash is in a different directory, be sure to change the `#!/bin/bash` line ac
 
 Deleting a VM doesn't delete all the resources associated with the VM. For example, it doesn't delete the data disks and the network interfaces associated with the VM. You need to locate and delete these resources separately.
 
-To remove a VM, follow these steps in the Azure portal for your Azure Local instance:
+To delete a VM, follow these steps in the Azure portal for your Azure Local instance:
 
 1. Go to the Azure Local resource, and then go to **Virtual machines**.
 
@@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ To remove a VM, follow these steps in the Azure portal for your Azure Local inst
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machines/locate-network-interfaces-data-disks-deleted-virtual-machine.png" alt-text="Screenshot of hidden types of resources associated with a virtual machine." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machines/locate-network-interfaces-data-disks-deleted-virtual-machine.png":::
 
-## Conduct live migration of Azure Arc virtual machines
+## Conduct live migration of Azure Arc VMs
 
 Live migration of Azure Arc VMs across Azure Local nodes is supported via on-premises tools like [Failover Cluster Manager](/windows-server/manage/windows-admin-center/use/manage-failover-clusters#adding-a-failover-cluster-to-windows-admin-center) or [Windows Admin Center](/windows-server/manage/windows-admin-center/use/manage-virtual-machines#live-migrate-a-virtual-machine-to-another-cluster-node). Live migration of VM storage is not supported.
 
@@ -919,7 +919,7 @@ To change cores and memory, follow these steps in the Azure portal for your Azur
 
 1. In the list of VMs, select and go to the VM whose cores and memory you want to modify.
 
-1. Under **Settings**, select **Size**. Edit the **Virtual processor count** or **Memory (MB)** values to change the cores or memory size for the VM. Only the memory size can be changed. You can't change the memory type after a VM is created.
+1. Under **Settings**, select **Size**. Edit the **Virtual processor count** or **Memory (MB)** values to change the cores or the memory size for the VM. For memory, only the size can be changed. You can't change the memory type after a VM is created.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machines/change-cores-memory.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the pane for changing cores and memory size of a VM." lightbox="./media/manage-arc-virtual-machines/change-cores-memory.png":::