Updated text and TOC

Author: ronmiab

azure-local/TOC.yml

@@ -175,6 +175,8 @@ items:
     href: update/update-phases-23h2.md
   - name: Update via PowerShell
     href: update/update-via-powershell-23h2.md
+  - name: Offline update via PowerShell
+    href: update/import-discover-updates-offline-23h2.md
   - name: Update via Azure portal
     href: update/azure-update-manager-23h2.md
   - name: Troubleshoot updates

azure-local/update/import-discover-updates-offline-23h2.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ This article explains how to discover and import update packages offline for Azu
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- You must be running Azure Stack HCI OS version 2411.3 or later.
+- You must be running Azure Local 2411.3 or later.
 
 - Review [About updates for Azure Local](./about-updates-23h2.md) to understand the update process.
 
@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ This article explains how to discover and import update packages offline for Azu
 
 The CombinedSolutionBundle is a zip file that contains the update package for the Azure Stack HCI OS, core agents and services, and the solution extension. Additionally, the CombinedSolutionBundle contains the SHA256 hash of the zip file. You can use this hash to verify the integrity of the downloaded zip. Follow these steps:
 
-1. Download the appropriate CombinedSolutionBundle from [Azure Local release information summary](../release-information-23h2.md#supported-versions-of-azure-local) and make note of the associated SHA256 hash.
+1. Download the appropriate CombinedSolutionBundle and make note of the associated SHA256, see [Azure Local release information summary](../release-information-23h2.md#supported-versions-of-azure-local).
 
    - The CombinedSolutionBundle is named `CombinedSolutionBundle.<build number>.zip`, where `<build number>` is the build number of the release.
 
-   - The SHA256 hash is provided in the release notes.
+   - The SHA256 hash is provided in the release notes. You need this to verify the integrity of the downloaded zip file.
 
 1. Verify the SHA256 hash of the downloaded CombinedSolutionBundle.